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Author: | Sorian [ December 31st, 2009, 5:44 pm ] | |
Blog Subject: | Afternoon Yellow Fevers | |
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Author: | Gossamer [ January 2nd, 2010, 3:05 am ] |
Lovely Poem. I really love it when people share these. I loved all the parts, but I was slightly disappointed by the feathers being 'angel' feathers ... I know that sounds odd, but a different type of feathers would be so much better in my mind. My favorite line... "belittling wilderness of man's animosity." That has a lovely ring of truth to it. |
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