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Hearken the Calls to the Roads of Change by Raien Ironarm Pitrius on July 19th, 2014, 7:11 am
Has anyone ever noticed how much your writing style can change in a single month, let alone six? Hmm... Perhaps I should provide some context before I ask such a question, or at least attempt to.
You see, when I first joined Mizahar I'll admit, I thought I was a skilled writer. I'll also admit that I was dead wrong. In comparison to some of you fabulously talented people, I was nothing, I still am probably. My point is, I was dumbfounded by some of the comments graders were giving me. Not because of any arrogance, but simply because I didn't have the skill to translate their suggestions into my writing.
Now, I look back and cringe at the stuff I was writing last month, let alone in January. I even go as far as to avoid reading old threads entirely sometimes. Though, once you sit down and look through them and ignore the anguish-bringing infernal critic I've found that you can learn a lot, or at least I can.
Indeed, I've learned a lot about myself and my writing by doing this. For example, I used to overuse large and hefty words. I did this simply because I thought this was an indicator of skill, if only subconsciously. No, I wasn't doing this on purpose, but I was still doing it and it made my posts a little wordy and a good bit harder to read.
In comparison, I don't necessarily use smaller words six months later. But I have learned to space them out throughout a post. I've learned that readability should be a writer's first priority. I've learned how much I have to learn and how much room there's left to grow. Mizahar has fostered this and for that I'm thankful. I truly, truly am.
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CS by Elektra Falak on May 8th, 2010, 3:31 am
Elektra Falak ("Perfection is a dangerous thing.")
Basic Information
Race: Konti Age: 19 years old Gender: femaleHeight: 5'4" Weight: 116 Hair Color: White Blonde Eye Color: Violet Built: Atheltic, slender.
Physical Description
Height: 5'4" Weight: 116 Hair Color: White Blonde Eye Color: Violet Built: Atheltic, slender.
Character Concept
Personality - She's outgoing and spotaneous, unlike most of her kind, which led her to break away from the pack Ethics - They respect human life, but they also respect their own and hold them higher than any else. Likes - Power, freedom, love Dislikes - Judgement.
Character History
Pre-Creation - Elektra was born, just like many others, off The White Isle. Surrrounded by others of her kind all through her childhood, she found that she was no different than the rest, nothing to be admired more or nothing to be noticed more. That was until she turned the age of 13, and she began to notice her powers. Her visions were vivid, tortorous of the crimes that would arise, and soon she found that she was an outgoing, spontaneous child, much different from those of her pack. So she separated, and has been living on her own until she finds the place she belongs.
Post Creation _ She wonders, in search for a home, a place to call freedom, and yet whenever she stumbles across a place sutible, her heart drags her away. She never understands the small things in life, but always has to look at the big picture. She always knows what is going on around her at all times, in all situations. So far, she hasn't stumbled across any trouble, but she isn't high hopes that it will stay that way forever.... | [ Continued ]
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The Black Bishop by Reprisal on December 6th, 2012, 12:07 am
The night was silent,wind flowed much like hair within the air,or a cape in the wind.The night sky filled with tiny glowing sparkles,so it was how he seen it.It all begun here at his home,the place where he was born and raised,located back in the deep woods out in Germany.He laid upon his back,digits locked together as his head rested within his palms much like he had his head upon a pillow.He gazed up at the sky seeming to read the stars,his eyes scanned each and every star.He read them like a book,this was what he done withe every moment he had to spend to himself.He was never one to go out and party with his friends,it was the truth that he had never had any friends.He was an loner,a lone gun,a gun that has never been used.Never even been loaded or shot.He had a life it was just spent it within the woods.Wondering why everyone looked to him as a monster,seen him as something not normal,supernatural.When he was just as they was a human being,so long past , as he kept being neglected and ignored.He grew rather tired of this he was only 11 years old when he held his first gun which was a Desert eagle hand gun.He went through so much it was about time he shown them how they seen him,he was going to do what a monster would do.Even the teachers at his school laughed at him and treated him like shit. The Desert eagle he had was plated with gold,something his father had forgotten before he left.He took it and hid it in the ground for a while.Soon after his mother had passed away,that made him snap and become what they seen him as.So he went to school after his mother died,the desert eagle tucked into his pants,then covered by his shirt.Though they didn't notice what he had.As soon as he walked into the school,he pulled the Desert eagle from his pants,and took aim at the first person he seen who was the girl who worked in the office,He squeezed the trigger and sent a bullet to her skull,she fell dead upon the ground.The gun shot was loud,the teachers and students was startled... [ Continued ]
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What's up with Hypnoseal by Nimvahlis on September 9th, 2010, 5:57 am
Wooooo! First blog with that Nim guy.
So I just wanted to take some time to outline what it is I'm doing this Fall, primarily for the sake of my sanity. Also, this allows me to just post a link rather than try to remember what I'm doing and such and such and such.
Anyway...
Threads from Last Season (or before)
Alistair (Seriously needs to die someday) What brings us together (My thread with the ever delicious Jilitse, it probably should have been with Nim but alas...) The Game (Which I currently need to post to >>)
Nimvahlis - The Broken Circle - Hypnotica(yay smut, almost done though) - Sunset of a Lone Wolf and Seal (I need a better title for this one...)
Puck Ora's plot! (BF forever) Philter/Gadgetry shop Raiha reimancy thread (When real life stops beating her up) The First Configuration! (Magical disembowelment had best get you guys to posting)
Magnolia Soul Departure (Possession has never been so sexy)
What's gonna happen someday soon
Nimvahlis - TAROT THREAD WOO! (six stars means I wet myself with excitement) - Satu thread! (Please let our... | [ Continued ]
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