(Scene starts with two girls sitting on a couch. Anna, who is studying is sitting upright and eating a salad. Chris on the otherhand is hanging upside down snaking on frosted flakes. The two girls sit in silence for a moment doing thier respective activities before they speak.)
Chris: What do you think you got on the math final?
Anna: Most likely a B. You?
Chris: Pfft (Chris drifts off into a quick akward laugh and does not awnser the question)
(There is a long pause)
Anna: (sighs) Ok.
Chris: Would you like some cereal?
Anna: (Jumps away slightly) No! I'm allergic to it!
Chris: (matter of fact tone) You are not allergic to cereal.
Anna: Yes I am!
Chris: (long pause) Communist.
(Anna looks at Chris shrewdly and walks off to get a glass of water, meanwhile Chris promptly puts a few flakes of cereal onto Anna's salad. When Anna comes back she eats the cereal and starts going into Anaphylectic shock.)
Chris: (sighs) Anna...
(Anna contenues to choke/seize whilst Chris remains unconcern on the couch.)
Chris: (Muttering to herself) Allergic to cereal, (pause) pathetic. (the last statement is done in a way as one would comment on the weather)
(Chris eats her cereal for a moment then grudgingly gets up and walks over to Anna. She then pulls out her phone and pulls the dying girl into an akward pose and takes a picture with her, afterwards she drops the girl uncerimoniusly to the floor and updates her status on Facebook)
Chris: With...Anna..at..house...done!
(sitting back on the couch Chris looks at Anna boredly as the girl takes her last breaths)
Chris: Anna...What do you want me to do? I don't know anything about Anaphylactic shock. (sighs)
(Anna dies)
Chris: (lifts head) Anna? (growling in frustration) Great (short and matter of fact) And on Finals week too.
End Scene
So I have to preform a scene on Friday and I was thinking about this one but I'd like to get people's opinions on it first. Constructive critisim. Please ignore my massive spelling mistakes!...
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