Good stuff Jo, it is very skillfully written. When I read your poems I naturally say them with a flow and beat. The second one was my favorite. I don't know if it was intended like that, but that's how I read it. I don't really understand what the last little one is about, it is very strange because it's vague and short. The only thing that comes to my mind is " don't forget the small things in life." or something.
I don't know what to think to be honest, because I don't read this type of stuff a lot. Regardless though I can see that you have talent Jo. I would love to see you take this writing talent exactly where you want to take it.
I remember telling you when I first joined that I wanted to they writing books and I still do, but you are out of my league! Perhaps I'll show you some rhymes I made
Imass