Aider Silander
Knowledge :
Micellaneous :
Kaie
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Notes
*This thread was a pleasure to read, and I'm looking forward to the second one. It's refreshing to see a thread that wasn't driven by skill development, rather, it was social interaction.
*I'm now shipping Kaie and Aider - I think they would make a lovely couple, and I could easily imagine many adventures (and misadventures) between the pair of them!
*Would have been nice to see you fumble a bit more when making the fire, Aider, but I think the Lore is relevant to both of you
*My only real criticism is that a quick proof read might be good sometimes, Aider - very occasionally you jumped into present tense. Everyone does it, but its worth checking through. Also, maybe divide your paragraphs up a little more
Feel free to PM me with questions, comments, or concerns, if you have any.
Also, remember to either delete your grade request or edit it as 'graded'.
Thank ye!
Also, remember to either delete your grade request or edit it as 'graded'.
Thank ye!
