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Zukwa practiced his archery in the yard.

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Taloba, home to the Myrians, is the thriving core of Falyndar. Inhabited by a fierce and savage tribe where blood sacrifices are normal and a way of life, they are untamed and proud of it. Warlike, and with their numbers growing, the Myrians are set on reclaiming what is rightfully theirs. [Lore]

Flying Razors

Postby Zukwa on July 23rd, 2014, 10:37 am

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2nd Day of Summer, 514 A.V.


The combat training yards were packed in this early summer’s afternoon. The heat beat down on them, making every warrior in the yard gleam with sweat. Zukwa was near the edge, in a staggered line of bowmen all practicing their shot. Across the yard a few other warriors practiced with a boomerang whilst the middle bit was reserved for melee training. There was a crowd there that had gathered to take turns wrestling in a now muddied patch of earth.

Zukwa could hear shouts of glee rise from the crowd as well as exclamations of horror at the occasional surprise knock out. They were boisterous and wild, and he prided himself that he stood amongst them. Those at the archery targets were quite though. It was a solitary task requiring much concentration. Zukwa and the other archers would fire a full quiver of twenty arrows, then call a halt and retrieve them. So far the myrian Rekrut had fired sixty arrows and only hit the target twenty five times. Less than half of them were hitting. He was forced to walk the yards past the target to hurriedly retrieve his shafts. The Myrians calling the order to halt was a slim female Tokoh who had only missed seven times since Zukwa had joined them. She was also quite beautiful, unnervingly so.

Zukwa raised the composite shortbow he carried at all times. He pulled the string back nearly to his ear, using the back and shoulders as he had been taught since a young age. He felt the incredible tension in his left shoulder, elbow, and wrist from holding back the wrath of the weapon. Closing his right eye, Zukwa set his left against the shaft of the arrow he had notched. The dark, murky pupil followed the shaft with it’s gaze. Zukwa set his gaze first at the viciously sharpened point, then at the innocent target in the distance. All of this he did in the span of a second.

Zukwa let the string slip from his heavily callused left thumb, upon which rested the notched arrow. He felt the air rip apart around his head as the shaft tore through it, eager to reach its victim. The bow bent back to its resting state, the string ripping back across the guard Zukwa wore to protect his arm. Opening his right eye once more, the youth watched his arrow sail through the air eagerly. He loved seeing the deadly point embed itself. He had loved watching it when he was six, and he loved it now. The Myrian dreamed of becoming a masterful archer, and raining death upon the Dhani with his skill.

The arrow, however, did not hit its intended target. It ripped at the linen cloth covering the circular target. But only on the very edge. The pale wood of the shaft instead flew past the target and drove itself into the soft mud of the yard beyond. But, Zukwa thought, both the Rekruts beside him missed completely.

He was not embarrassing himself too badly. Most of the ‘warriors’ in the line were fresh Rekruts, youths in their initial phases of service. He had been in the Taloban army for barely two seasons, fulfilling one sixth of his mandatory service. Zukwa did not intend to leave the army however. He would cast his fate in with these warriors from all manner of clan before returning to hope for a place amongst the Poisoned Arrow. Here they may look down at him as unseasoned, untested, but they did not look at him with hate. Here he truly belonged. The Goddess-Queen would appreciate a male who devoted his life to the whole of Taloba, rather than just his clan. Or at least he hoped she would.

This foolish warrior would not venture to know what you would appreciate, my Goddess-Queen.

Zukwa prayed quickly after the ambitious thought. He scorned ambition for ones self. A true warrior was a simple thing. Devoted to the pursuit of perfection, he honed his skills and his mind for the sake of the cause, not of himself. Ambition, greed, pride… these were all things that muddied the ability to kill. They weighed a man down. But a warrior must be light like a flurry of wind. He would strip himself of the excess and become light.

And Myri would find her use for him.

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Postby Zukwa on July 23rd, 2014, 11:03 am

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Soft leather let his fingers dig slightly into the grip of his bow as he raised it once more. The ivory bone at the ends of his weapon caught the sunlight and shone slightly as he moved it up through the air to the ready again. His left hand went over his shoulder and the youth did not fumble. His fingers closed around the shaft of another arrow with a practiced ease. He pulled it from his quiver and set it against the side of his fist. He had gotten much better at the shoulder draw of the arrow since joining the army. A few more veteran Rekruts had shown him a technique for quick draw that involved spread fingers and a flick of the wrist at the extent of the pull. It seemed like common sense now.

Zukwa set the groove of the arrow against the string with two fingers. At the same time he hooked his thumb underneath it against the string,ready to pull and loose as he chose. Some used a thumb guard when executing this style, but Zukwa was of the Poisoned Arrow even if they did not want him. He would let his thumb bleed and heal until it was so roughly callused that the bowstring could not hurt it, as was the Myrian way. Gaining a scar was always better than avoiding conflict.

Zukwa pulled the string back to his ear once more. He could feel his stiff are lock out from the pressure. He squeezed the grip of the weapon more tightly. It was paramount that hit arm did not falter, lest his arrow go astray…

He had already made that mistake once in a serious situation… and would never let himself make that mistake again. The memory of his friend made him falter. But it was a momentary distraction which he pushed violently down to the core of his memory. Friends and enemies die, it is Myri’s will. He was alive and would not dwell on the dead already. No matter how they haunted his dreams.

He refocused and redrew the bow with renewed vigor. Letting the arrow fly, Zukwa felt the string whisk past his face. It was always so close to causing damage but had never hit him. Not since he was a little boy still learning the basics. Now he was a little man trying to move past the basics. The Myrian watched his arrow tear through the gap between archer and target with all the built up momentum from the bow.

It thudded home a few inches from the edge of the target. A few strands of dried grass shone through the hole in the linen where the arrow sprouted from. He had hit the target! Less thought, he needed to think less about the mechanics of the firing and rely more on instinct to hit his target. He had been barely thinking about the shot when he released its vicious wrath upon the linen and straw disk.

Zukwa lowered the bow with a wide grin across his face. No one could see it under the cloth he wore over his mouth and nose, but it was there. Twenty-six. His right arm burned with a dull ache that came from the hours he had spent bending his weapon. The tension was making both his shoulders ache as well. But as a Rekrut in the Taloban Army, such aches were all too familiar for him. He would not let them cause him to give up the practice or else he would be going against the nature of the army.
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Postby Zukwa on July 23rd, 2014, 11:32 am

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“Halt.” The word cut across the yard like the crack of a whip. The Tokoh had finished her quiver of arrows. Her target looked like some horribly crude porcupine with shafts sticking out from it in a cluster. Some of the warriors in the crowd on onlookers had spun around to look over at her. She seemed to carry a tone of authority like a flame with heat. It was just in her nature.

Zukwa had ten arrows sprouting from his target, the most out of one quiver of the day. And he had only fired fifteen of his! Though he was far slower than others, like the Tokoh at the end, he had at least made most of his shots this round. The Myrian hurried down the yard to pull his shafts. None of his shots were particularly clustered, with most being around the edge and only three closer to the center. Nonetheless, ten hits was ten hits. Zukwa dreamt of a day when he could fire so accurately he could end a Dhani with a single, well placed arrow through the throat. He had seen a few warriors make the shot, but very rarely.

The grass underneath his foot gave way to his toes. It was warm and the moisture of the morning had long since evaporated into the air. But it felt good to him. Zukwa had been told that outsiders wore leather around their feet for protection, but had never understood why someone would do something so eccentric. It cut off all sensation from that part of your body as well as kept your feet from building thick skin. It seemed a waste of good leather to him. But then again he had always been told outsiders were weak and feeble things. Maybe they required more protection than a Myrian. Though he held no aspirations to leave the city or the jungles of Falyndar beyond it, Zukwa had wanted to meet one of the pale skinned northerners for some time.

As he pulled the shafts out of his target he wondered what it would be like to live outside the jungle. But it was not in his fate. Zukwa did not presume to know his future, but he knew he was Taloban through and through. He would not abandon his city for anything less than death or an order from the Goddess-Queen herself. The Path of the warrior was the only path.

Zukwa tried to retrieve the five shafts from beyond the target as quickly as he could. He did not want to be seen picking arrows from the ground far away from their intended place. Though he tried to extinguish such things as pride and ambition within himself, he was still very much subject to their influence, as well as that of embarrassment. Shoving the last of the arrows carefully into his quiver, Zukwa broke into a trot back to the line.

He would do better this time.

“Loose!” The female Tokoh yelled, the beautiful voice convincingly disguising her lethality for a moment.

Zukwa repeated the motions he had been doing all morning. He stiffened his right arm, the composite shortbow held in a vice-like grip that was making his tanned knuckles white. He reached over his shoulder and pulled free an arrow, quickly setting it against his bow in the same fluid motion. The Myrian took a quick breath before standing completely upright and tightening his shoulder blades together. His pectorals strained away from each other as the bow bent. Zukwa ignored the deep bite of the bowstring.

I am Myri’s weapon. Grant me focus. Grant me precision.

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Postby Zukwa on July 23rd, 2014, 12:12 pm

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Zukwa was in an almost trancelike state as he fired off arrow after arrow. Hit. Miss. Miss. Miss. Hit. His thumb was now bleeding the bright red of a very shallow cut. He could feel it wetting the string of the bow. Hit. Miss. He would earn any skill he acquired through diligence and perseverance. He pulled the string, released the arrow, and watched his own small bit of wrath unleashed upon the world.

Zukwa heard the other archers releasing their weapons at random intervals around him. The subtle thwak of their bowstrings flying back into place and the dark promising hum of the arrow soaring. Here were the future of the Taloban Army learning how to kill. He was amongst them. Zukwa would fight and kill for Taloba and for Myri. Perhaps someday he would even have the privilege to die in the name of the Goddess-Queen. He felt the dark distraction of ambition once again creep into his mind. Though it was tempered with a service oriented motivations in the form of him standing at the head of a whole war party, dispatching Dhani with endless deadly arrows, it was still ambition. The dagger that wants to be a spear, though a tool, was still ambitious.

But how could he force his way to greater skill without tasting of that flavor of ambition? Ambition was, at least in Taloban, a part of the path to skill. So the Myrian warrior let himself think on a future where he lead warriors and killed their enemies. He let himself dream of honor and something new to be proud of. Now he was bordering on the selfish again. He did not need that, nor did he need to remind himself of why he could not afford to be proud any longer…

Kubra was dead because of him. Pride had no place in the heart of a kin-killer.

Zukwa lifted his arm and drew an arrow from his quiver, setting it on the bow in a blur. He raised the bow and violently stretched his shoulders in the practiced way an archer does. He hissed as he let the arrow fly. Zukwa was picturing the pale yellow Dhani again. He pictured the blood spewing from its chest as his arrows struck home. Zukwa watched the arrow slam home close to the center of the target. He looked down at his wrist. Though it was hidden from view by the guard there, he envisioned the small black arrow inked into his skin there. One kill, one Dhani dead.

The blood from his thumb dripped a single drop onto the green flora below. Blood feeds the strong. Zukwa stuck the thumb in his mouth for a moment, sucking his essence from it. Then he returned to his work.

Another arrow found it’s way to his bow. Syna touched the beaten metal of the arrowhead, flashing a yellow glint in his eye momentarily. Zukwa shut his non aiming eye to avoid the glare. He twisted the arrow on the string to shine the light somewhere else. He did not need, nor could he afford such distractions. He pulled the bowstring back once more, willing the force of the bow to increase with his pull. He envisioned the arrow ripping through the air with so much force it went halfway into the body of a victim. One day, he would attain such vicious skill. He would be a terror upon the jungles of Falyndar.

He snarled his approval of the idea. He loosed.

Miss.

Not today though, he thought ruefully.
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Postby Zukwa on July 23rd, 2014, 1:36 pm

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Agitation was threatening his form, and unhinging the gates to his anger. Zukwa had missed the last seven shots. How was his skill with the bow so inconsistent? When he thought too much about his form he would get caught up in the mechanics of the art, and miss. When he thought too little his mind wandered, and he missed. The Myrian resigned himself to the fact that the proper focus and form came with countless hours of practice and diligence in his weapon, a truth pertaining to all things. He had to hammer his aspiration into instinct. And that was done by partaking of the exact activity he was doing now.

He notched one of his final arrows. Zukwa made sure to aim just over the top of the target, at this distance the archer needed to raise his bow only a fraction. Even at this relatively standard distance Zukwa was shaky. His usual comfort zone was about fifteen yards closer, but he had gauged his distance decently well with his first few shots. They had fallen wildly short and been incredibly embarrassing. Zukwa pulled the bow tight, watching the flexible materials bend to his will.

He held back the threat of arial death with only his thumb. This style was taught to him from the age of five when he started with his first bow. It was a common draw with the Poisoned Arrow Clan. It provided with accuracy and less movement because instead of two fingers pressing against the arrow, it was the single edge of the thumb. He did not have to worry about releasing both digits at exactly the same time or about altering the arrow’s path with his touch. It was, however, more painful. But that was what calluses were for.

Zukwa loosed the arrow from his bow and watched as it soared past the target. Focus!

He let the weapon drop to his side for a moment. He only had a few more shots in this quiver and he was determined to get another hit before the Tokoh called another halt. The Myrian Rekrut closed his eyes and breathed in deeply. He let his mind go blank, or tried to. Just breath and shoot. Fluidity and simplicity. This was not a thinking man’s game. He just had to maintain his form with as little distraction as possible. Zukwa opened his eyes. He would make this next shot!

The Myrian sent his hand back in a blur to retrieve yet another arrow. At the same time his composite shortbow flew up, as ready to strike pain as he was. He smaller the arrow down where his fist and the bow met. Zukwa ripped back on the bowstring at the same time as he straightened to his full height and focused his attention on the target. He envisioned the arrow releasing, turning all that latent energy into force with which it would use to puncture the target. It quivered with potential death in his hand.

The Myrian let out his breath, which he had been holding until that point. He let his chest settle and loosed the arrow at the exact point it did so. He heard the familiar whistle as it moved through the air. Watching it go, it seemed like nothing could stop its race across the jungle. It seemed like it would rip through any tree or beast that it came across. A razored edge flying through the moist air of Falyndar. But in the end it sank almost a foot into the mud behind and to the left of his target. Well shyke.

“Halt!”

Zukwa sighed deeply. There was no point letting his frustration get the better of him. He hoped his fang would not miss him this day as he planned to stay and practice until he could get more than half his arrows on target.
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Flying Razors

Postby Voodoo on July 25th, 2014, 6:57 am

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Zukwa
Experience :
    Observation: +5
    Weapon - Composite Shortbow: +5
    Philosophy: +5

Lore :
    Drawing and Knocking Arrows with Ease
    Becoming Part of the Army Family
    Haunts of the Past Spoil Focus
    Practice makes Perfect
    Ambition: A Dark Temptation

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