Kalix

[Kalix]

Kalix Basic Information Race: Kelvic Caribou Birthday & Age : Spring Day 67, 482 AV Age: 1 1/2 Gender: Male Languages Language 1: Common Language 2: Pavi Language 3: Kontinese Character Concept In both forms, Kalix is a proud, swift, agile man. He loves running, and is happy to show off his amazing skills. He is very handsome in his human form, attracting many females of all kinds. He is always happy to accept them, but is truly looking for a master. He doesn't hunt well, but is happy to battle someone off with his large horns. He isn't seen much in Caribou form, in public. He is always in Caribou form when out in the wild, except for drastic occasions, like making conversation. But, he doesn't go into the wild all the time on the account of he is easy prey, if the predator can catch him. He is an amazing runner. Kolax doesn't feel a need for clothes, they are rather an annoyance than a necessity. He wears instead a pair of sackcloth shorts. Character History Kalix was born to two kelvics, one being a female lion and the other a male wolf. He was born an amazing runner, though had no idea of his caribou form just yet. He could outrun any of his friends growing up. They spent their days in the hills outside of Zeltiva, playing and training in battle. All of them were excited, and started at an early age. Not for Kolax, he was different. Aging much faster than his friends, one day he mysteriously left their band, when he was 8 months old. Kalix retreated to the city, where he discovered his true identity. Running along the path, he ran into a pack of wolves, who were hungry to eat him. There was only 3 of them, so he shifted for the first time, by instinct. He ran the rest of the way home, only to find his mother and father waiting patiently at the door. He was startled. His mom and dad seemed furious. Confused, he backed away. They looked very mad. As if sensing his discomfort, his dad said, "Get out of here, you nasty herbivore. We can't have weakness in our bloodline." At first, Kalix was very depressed and sad. But, his anger grew. His own family kicked him out! This anger swelled until he could not take it anymore. Furious, he hired a guild of assassins to eliminate them for good. They came back, with their mission complete. They had killed his parents. Relieved, he lived a normal life once again, but alone. Training (Skills, Arcana, Gnosis, Lore) Equipment and Possessions -Sackcloth shorts -Simple Cloak 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Bone) -Brush (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 600 Gold Mizas Housing: None. Ledger Starting +100 GM 100 GM Housing +500 GM 600 GM Skills Running 40 40 Mountaineering 5 5 Acrobatics 5 5 Lores Lore of Avanthal Geography Lore ofAssassins do the job right Thread List

[Claymore]

Liaison intervention

First of all: Welcome to Mizahar, I hope you'll enjoy your time here and RP to your delight. I'm Claymore and I'll be assisting you in creating a Character Sheet. I noticed a few mistakes and will help you to fix them .

Things to be fixed

 

Age

Your age seems to be wrong. If you were born in 487, your kelvic would be 15 which is old! You state that he's only 1 and a half years old, so he should have been born in fall 510 AV.

 

Skills

You cannot start with more hten 30 skillpoints in one skill. Please redistribute those 10 points from running. You also haven't added your racial bonus of 10 points in hunting.

Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

Claymore