[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

[Holt]

Please and thank you

[Alex White]

Imma done!

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post283566.html#p283566

[Iriene Padfoot]

Character Sheet Ready for criticism.

[Veyani]

Veyani is ready to go!

[Tristan Albayn]

My character sheet is ready for review.

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic36860.html

Thank you in advance.

[Jupiter]

Hello everyone!

Carac Lucchus: :

I approved your CS!

Xavios: :

I sent you a PM!

Ardan: :

I sent you a PM!

Arden Tide: :

I approved your CS!

Draven: :

I sent you a PM!

Ashira: :

I approved your CS!

Zaphira Hawthorne: :

I have a note for your CS! But seeing as the coding is messed up, I’m unsure about posting it in our thread. So I’ll be placing it below!

Hi Zaphira!

I’m Jupiter, one of the Character Sheet Liaisons here in Mizahar! I’ve been looking over your character sheet for you, and I found a few problems that will need to be fixed!

• Your character’s date of birth is currently wrong. Please change the year to 509!
• In your skills, you currently have 102 points. As a Kelvic, you get 50 starting points, along with 10 racial bonus points, for a total of 60. Please cut down your points to 60!
• You also need to notate whether the skill points are coming from the starting package, SP, or from a racial bonus, RB.
• In your possessions, please choose between a cloak or a coat!
• The way you have your housing written currently is a bit confusing. It appears as though you’re PC is staying in a cave outside of Taloba, and yet you have information listed for characters that squat in the city walls. You will need to clarify what you mean in this. Also, if you are going to have your character stay within the walls, you will need to request approval from one of the moderators in Taloba.
• Finally, there seems to be a problem with your coding, which is causing the page to act oddly. I would fix this if I could, but seeing as I can’t get to the editing button, I’ll have to send it to someone who can! Hopefully the problem will be fixed soon!

Once you’ve fixed all these problems, let me know and I’ll remove this post and approve your character sheet! If you have any questions or concerns, just let me know! I’ll do whatever I can to help you out!


Jupiter

I'll be getting to the rest of you guys either later on tonight or tomorrow! No worries!


Jupiter

[Neci]

Neci is ready for review! Thanks for taking the time to check her CS over.

[Silverrain]

Silverrain is ready to be reviewed. Thanks

[Jupiter]

Hello everyone!

Holt: :

I sent you a PM!

Alex White: :

I sent you a PM!

Iriene Padfoot: :

I sent you a PM!

Veyani: :

I sent you a PM!

Tristan Albayn: :

I’ve approved your CS!

Neci: :

I sent you a PM!

Silverrain: :

I approved your CS!

Jupiter

[Soshakuakamamushi]

Aka is ready for review!

Soshakuakamamushi