[Note by Traverse] V'alen Dv'orn

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V'alen Dv'orn

Postby V'alen Dv'orn on May 18th, 2014, 5:32 pm

Character Name- V'alen Dv'orn

Appearance

Race: Konti
Gender: Female
Age: 29
Birthday: Day, Season, Year.
Birthplace: Mura

Appearance: White hair and blue eyes with a small scattering of scales on forehead. There are also lots of scales on back, legs and arms, though only above wrist and a few on the back of hands. She usually wears a white dress with a very light blue sash around her waist. The dress goes down to just past her knees. V'alen goes barefoot when she is alone, but wears small white shoes when she has visitors or guests and wears walking boots when appropriate.

Character Concept

V'alen is a shy, quiet girl, as most Konti are. She is very respectful and doesn't stand out from the crowd- her friends are few, but highly valued. However, she is a different person in the forge, as she is a very talented weaponsmith. V'alen doesn't like crowds; she prefers quiet places where she can learn and meditate. Her mother is a typical Konti woman and they share a close bond. When they are together, their visions are often much stronger then when separate. In terms of visions, V'alen sees the present. She can see things that are invisible in a small radius of about five metres around her, but she can see everything, from small insects to hidden enemies. With her mother, she can see much further, reaching to about fifteen metres. Still, her vision needs work, as she needs to stay perfectly still and focused whilst she is Seeing.

Character History

V'alen has lived in Mura her whole life. She doesn't live in the crowded areas, but in the more rural areas. Her father was an Isur bladesmith but she never got to know him. He is, however, where she got her weaponsmith talent from. V'alen didn't grow up with many friends, but she did learn much from the library and the books there. Also, whilst others were learning martial arts, she was hammering away in the forge, meaning that she is quite incompetent at fighting, though she tries hard.


Language

Fluent Language: Kontinese
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language:


Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Blacksmithing 30 30 Competent
Medicine 10 (+10) 20 Novice
Flux 10 10 Novice


Lores

Helpful Lores: (Pick 2)
Lore of History of Mura
Lore of the Opal Order

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple White Dress
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Blue Cloak
-Simple Brown Leather Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: V'alen has a beautiful pearl, about five centimeters in diameter. She was given it by her grandmother, who shared the same vision type as her. V'alen's mother was never allowed it because her vision was different. It seems to help V'alen focus when she has it, but it does not possess any magical powers.

Housing

Location: Mura, rural area

House: 1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table.

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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V'alen Dv'orn

Postby Traverse on June 10th, 2014, 11:26 pm

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Hello V'alen!

Before I can give you a green check mark on your CS there are a couple things that need to be taken care of with your PC:

Appearance: Konti have scales that cover their entire body, the ones on the face and arms may be more visible, but from your description it makes it sound like your PC only has scales in these spots and nowhere else, if you could just edit that for clarification that would be wonderful!

Konti Gift/ Gnosis: In order to utilize the gift you have written in your CS you need to have it approved by Gossamer, as the gift sounds now I am 99% certain it will not be approved. Konti gifts are usually senses and feelings received from people, animals, or plants, not seeing invisible or hidden objects, though perhaps if you refine the wording a bit when you submit it to the Help Desk for approval it might pass through. In addition to starting with a Konti Gift you also have a choice of starting Gnosis 1 from either Rak'keli or Avalis. I would look over these lore pages and once you have decided apply for your Konti Gift and Gnosis mark in the help desk, for the Gnosis you simply have to tell us which one you'd prefer.

Once these changes have been rectified and you have a Storyteller Secret thread approving your Gnosis and Gift I can give you a green check mark and you can be on your way!

Safe Travels,

-Traverse
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