Milo Thatcher

[Milo Thatcher]

Name: Milo Johnathon Thatcher
Gender: Male
Race: Kelvic
Age: 1
Birthday: 7 Summer 514 AV
Birthplace: Syliras, Sylira
Appearance: Human: Milo is a small boy, around 4' tall, and weighing about 60 pounds. His skin is somewhat tan, but not he's not very dark. Milo has light blonde hair that parts on the side, and his eyes are a very bright blue. He also has slightly larger canines than most people, because of his tiger form. Tiger: As a tiger, Milo has completely white fur, unlike most tigers. He has a few orange spots on his head, but that's it. Although he's only eleven-years-old, he takes the form of a full-grown tiger. He has bright green eyes, and very thick fur.
Character Concept: Personality: Milo is quite irritable; he doesn't like to be around people, but when he is, he tends to get angry quite easily. He's gotten in many fights because of this. Ethics: Milo's only real morals are that people shouldn't a family except for their bondmate. Because of this, Milo is completely family-less until he finds a bondmate. Likes: Milo likes to be alone very much. He is very rarely seen with more than maybe a few people.
Character History: Pre-creation: Milo tended to steal a lot to get by. He never had a family to teach him right from wrong, and he never went to a proper school. Most of Milo's one year of life was learning how to hunt properly. Milo speaks fluent Common Language, basic Vani, and poor Ancient Tongue.
Training and Skill Points: Starting Points: Wilderness survival (30 points), hunting (10 points), riding (5 points), stealing (5 points). Earned Skill Points: None. Lores: Lore of hypothermia. Lore of shapeshifting.
Equipment and Possessions: Clothing: Black cloak, blue t-shirt, tattered brown shorts, brown leather coat, and leather sandals. Equipment: Waterskin. Backpack containing a comb, brush, razor, bar of soap, week supply of food, eating knife, and flint and steel. 1 large tent, large tarp, 100 feet of rope, flint and steel, lantern, two torches, bedroll, blanket, fishing tackle and hooks, a compass, a white frostmarch horse, a full set of tack, and a large set of saddlebags. Possessions: A single feather from his mother's animal form: a bald eagle.
Ledger: 100 gold-rimmed Mizas.
Thread List: [Pavi Lake] Sea Monster

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
• Can you please clearly state somewhere on your CS what your character's base animal is?
• Your character history has some contradicting points, it states he is only eleven years old, yet his age and date of birth says he is only a year old. Do you mean to say that his human form appears in the form of an eleven year old?
• It is required that you clearly state which skills are Starter Package (SP) skills and which are Racial Bonus (RB).
• You appear to be missing 10 starter package points. Please spend 10 SP in skills of your choice - just remember that skills are required to have between 5 and 30 skill points in them including the racial bonus.
• Due to being Competent in Wilderness Survival can you please clearly state somewhere the two environment type your PC is familiar with? (Example types include: Desert, Forest, Hills, Marsh, Mountains, Plains, Sea or Underground).
• Please change "Stealing" to Larceny.
• Please specify the riding animal your character is familiar with, i.e. "Riding: Horse".
• For ease of reading, can you please put line breaks between your various sections.
• Your lore "Lore of Shapeshifting" as your are a Kelvic is something you would instinctively know. Because of this, may I suggest you pick out a different starting lore that may be of use? For example, "Wilderness Survival: Locating clean water".
• Where and how did your character come across learning Vani and Ancient tongue (an essentially dead language used by mages)? More so as he was born in Syliras and seemingly spent all his time thus far there? Please explain this in your history.
• You appear to be missing a ledger. A good example of a ledger is as so;

  Item	Price	Money
  Starting Package	+ 100 gm	100gm
  Candle	-1 gm	99 gm
  Shirt	-1 gm	98gm

  Code: Select all

  [table]Item|Price|Money
Starting Package|+ 100 gm|100gm
Candle|-1 gm|99 gm
Shirt|-1 gm|98gm[/table]

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch