[Issues found by Astator] Wade Rystar

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Wade Rystar

Postby Wade Rystar on October 24th, 2015, 1:43 am

Wade Rystar


Appearance

Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Birthday: 55, Spring, 493.
Birthplace: Alvadas

Appearance: Wade seems visibly weak or sickly depending on who is looking at him due to how much he has neglected to take care of himself. His hair is a mess, only overlooked sometimes because of his height which puts him above most people which leaves people looking at his thin body most of the time. In terms of his clothes, Wade just puts on whatever he is able to find sometimes not even changing his clothes because it is just too inconvenient to him.

Character Concept

As the son of Victoria Rystar of Alvadas, Wade has had to live with her withdrawn lifestyle especially in her attempts to educate him. While Wade has been able to mix with others his age, such times were rare and scant. Nevertheless, Wade took every opportunity to fully enjoy everything Alvadas has to offer finding them interesting and exciting to him.

However after his mother was taken in, the magic of the city of illusions was lost to him and he became more like her. Withdrawn into his work, trying to improve his skills and to find out more about his origins. As time went on things became more dangerous. Other people considering him to become like his mother only made things worse as Wade could no longer trust anyone else.

This meant even more of a reason for Wade to focus on his work-his summoning despite having to leave Alvadas himself heading over to the next destination which would help him achieve his goals.

Character History

Wade's mother is a woman driven mad from living in the city of illusions. Disenchanted by life, and everyone-everything it has, Victoria was a recluse only doing what she needs to in order to continue life. A summoner in Alvadas, what she needs to do was summoning things to fulfill the requests of other people as materials for their own work.

Eventually loneliness took Wade's mother but still unwilling to get close to any one of those untrustworthy people, she did something completely unexpected and unadvisable by those who consider themselves as right thinking members of society.

Some alcohol and a summoning circle within the privacy of her home, Victoria finally summoned one of the diverse of Zaiden. It was a strange request but one which the man gladly obliged after some persuasion and gifts in a strange mating ritual. Unsurprisingly, Wade was conceived by the next morning.

His mother never disclosed this part of her and Wade's history. As a result Wade somehow reached the mistaken conclusion that his father was one of the svefra which came to Alvadas from the Suvan with all the vague hints his mother fed him. This mistaken information persisted until..

Victoria's insanity finally became too noticeable and she was taken forcibly to the Mercy leaving Wade on his own and Wade with some time finally came across her diary. As his mother's beloved son and with the time Wade was finally able to decipher it finding out her everything. His origins, her summoning and everything else.

No longer interested in the svefra Wade put his full focus into summoning in hopes he will find a way to find his father now that his mother is otherwise unavailable. Wade continued for a little longer in assisting his mother's clients and honing his skills until he realized that Alvadas isn't doing much for his purposes.

Going across the Suvan, Wade's conversations with the svefra finally led him to Nyka where it is said to have many monster akin those his mother diary has hinted can be summoned.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Fratava
Poor Language: Nader Canoch

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Poison 15 RB, 10 SP 25 Novice
Summoning 15 SP 15 Novice
Weapon: Dagger 10 SP 10 Novice
Cryptography 10 SP 10 Novice
Glyphing 5 SP 5 Novice


Lores

Lore of Alvadas Culture
Lore of The Power of the Aperture

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Diary of Victoria Rystar.

Housing

Location: Nyka

House: Alvadas

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Last edited by Wade Rystar on November 20th, 2015, 4:36 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Wade Rystar

Postby Astator on November 18th, 2015, 5:44 am

I have found a few errors with your character sheet. Unfortunately this means you are unable to continue roleplaying until they are corrected.

  • Umm:
    Some alcohol and a summoning circle within the privacy of her home, Victoria finally summoned one of the diverse of Zaiden. It was a strange request but one which the man gladly obliged after some persuasion and gifts in a strange mating ritual. Unsurprisingly, Wade was conceived by the next morning.

    His mother never disclosed this part of her and Wade's history. As a result Wade somehow reached the mistaken conclusion that his father was one of the svefra which came to Alvadas from the Suvan with all the vague hints his mother fed him. This mistaken information persisted until..


    I want to apologize about how I wrote my original statement, I left it for transparency reasons. However, I still cannot accept this as I have spoken to you about this in a PM. I have asked a Founder concerning this as well as I am am reading this as if Wade is a half-breed of a human and a being from the Diverse. As of currently, I cannot allow this under my current assumption. As soon as I get clarification from a Founder I will let you know.

    Original statementNo. You cannot be some halfbreed of a race from another planet, summoned to Mizahar and then mated with your mother. Sorry. Please remove that whole bit.
  • How did Wade come to learn Nader Canoch, even to Poor, as that is the Ancient Tongue, and your history makes zero note of it.
  • Poison gives you three families of your choosing to decide upon, note: lotus is off limits to novice. Poison Lore This is listed under the Skill Progression underneath Novice:
    They are capable of creating poisons from up to 3 different poison families.
    I am requesting that the three poison families are listed.

When you are finished, please PM me by hitting the envelope underneath my name.

Thank you,

Astator
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