Jural Hasirie (WIP) (Criticisms appreciated)

[Jural Hasirie]

Character Name Appearance Race: Mixed Blood (Vantha/Human) Gender: Male Age: 28 Birthday: 4, Spring, 487 AV Starting City: Nyka Birthplace: Nyka Appearance: Jural is 6'5", which is strangely tall considering his lineage. To compliment his height he is well built and lithe, fit thanks to his years on the streets and single year as a mercenary. He has straight unkempt hair that reached down to his shoulders, it is a dull dirty blond color that blends in well with the sand and goes well with his murky blue eyes. He has a scraggly yet strangely well-kept beard, which makes him look a bit more weathered then he actually is. He has a variety of small scars across his body, mostly around his arms and chest due to poor decisions made in battle. He wears a single non-valuable earring on his right ear whenever he is roaming outside of the city. He is sun-kissed from his many days under the sun. Character Concept I wanted to make a somewhat green mercenary with a not-so-proud lineage and not much means. I brain-stormed a bit and also figured I wanted something of a berserker that could become more tactful and sharper as he progressed, socially and combat-wise. So I built on those two ideas and made a new mercenary who was born in Nyka, who later became a ferocious yet normally cunning fighter. But of course, he wouldn't be a berserker unless he occasionally slipped into a uncontrollable rage after he became too provoked or hurt. Personality (Needs to be written) Character History (Needs to be written) Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: N/A Poor Language: Nari, Isur Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Weapon Skills: Handaxe 30 SP 30 Competent Dual-wielding 10 SP, 10 RB 20 Novice Tactics 5 SP 5 Novice Investigation 5 SP 5 Novice Lores Helpful Lores: Lore of History of Nyka Lore of History of Nykan Monks Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Flaxen Shirt -Flaxen Pants -Simple Undergarments -Flaxen Cloak or Coat -Simple Boots 1 Form-fit Scale Mail 2 Cold Iron Hand-axes 1 Edged Gauntlet 1 Assassin's dagger 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Food is given out daily -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 352 Gold Mizas Heirloom: An old iron earring shaped in the style of an eagle. Used to be his mothers' before she died. His only reminder of her. No special abilites or applications. Housing Location: Nyka, Northern Quadrant House: N/A, currently residing at Safehaven Hostel Ledger Current Total: 352 GM GAINED: Starting package; 100 GM SOLD: Cottage; 500 GM BOUGHT: Cold Iron Hand-axe x2; 36 GM BOUGHT: Form-fit Scale Mail; 200 GM BOUGHT: Edged Gauntlet; 8 GM BOUGHT: Assassin's Dagger; 4 GM Thread List N/A