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[Mia Scarlatina]

Mia Scarlatina Appearance Race: Human Gender: Female Age: 21 Birthday: 13th November, Winter, 495 Starting City: Syliras Birthplace: Syliras Appearance: Red long hair, Blue eyes, Light weight armour, Daggers on back, Scar near eye and a bracelet made out of leaves. Character Concept She is a well trained knight but can get strict at times. She has 2 sides one is her strict nature and the other laughs at almost everything. She buys her poison at a black market in Siliras and is highly disrespected because of that. She spends most of her time outside exploring and guarding. Character History She was raised by an assassin and learned how to kill at a very young age but she holds back in fights because of how she can kill her opponent even by accident. Later after her father killed someone in front of her and then they went home to practice when she killed her father due to when she found out how evil and cruel his job was. After that she hid in a forest until she was 18 then she went to sign up to be a knight. Language Fluent Language: English Basic Language: French (she only knows abit) Poor Language: Idk (HELPFUL HINT, Please Remove - Practiced Languages: Common) Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Skill 1 Poison # Novice Skill 2 Blacksmithing # Novice Skill 3 Weapon Skills Competent Lores Helpful Lores: Nykan Culture and Laat religion Lore of Nykan Streetplan Lore of Nykan Culture Lore of History of Nyka Lore of History of Nykan Monks Lore of Religion: Uphis Lore of Religion: Laat Lore of Religion: Xannos Lore of Religion: Skerr Lore of The Power of the Aperture Lore of Nykan Wards Lore of Nykan Superstition Possessions 1 Set of Clothing - Light Weight armour (Top) - Light Weight armour (Pants) -Simple Undergarments - Black cloak - Black boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) - 2 Dagger (Which can open releasing poisonous gas) -Soap - Types of Poisons -Food is given out daily -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas or 100 Laats Heirloom: A red diamond that shines when danger is near Housing Location: Siliras House: A small hut that only contains a chest with poison in it and a bed. (She only visits for important events and to get more poison) Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM or +100 Laat 100 GM or 100 Laat Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Astator]

Welcome to Mizahar! You are clearly new and that is okay! There are some major issues that need to be addressed before we can allow you to roleplay though.

• The title of your Character Sheet should be your Account Name, which should be your Character’s name. Please fix this and do not do it all in caps.
• We do not use months on Mizahar, it is seasons: Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter. Each Season has 91 days, Winter has 92.
• Your age is not correct, as the year 516 just started a season ago your birthdate (if Winter is correct… Which with November being the RL date it is not).
• Assassin like character in Syliras? Hah… No. Someone tried that recently, failed.
• Your History and Concept do not make any sense… Poison? Blackmarket? Siliras… Err… It is Syliras, and no on the other two things.
• There is no way you are able to survive in the forest.. Alone… With your skills… Just no.
• Languages are not English, French, etc on Mizahar. Please look at the Languages Lore: here
• You have listed skills that do not work with your current concept of assassin knight thing… Also, no points? You get 50 Starting Points and as a Human you get a 15 Racial Bonus to any ONE Skill.
• TWO lores. Not a dozen… Plus they are all Nykan lores… How did you get Nykan lores beyond just copying and pasting.
• You have to pay for the armour to start with it, it is not default.
• You daggers are no acceptable in Mizahar, plus you would have to pay for them as well (they do have hollow blades which might be what you are looking for) please look at the Price List, Ctrl+F is your friend there (that’s Find if you don’t know hot keys)
• Your heirloom is just not acceptable… Glows when danger is about is clearly magical and therefore not a valid heirloom.
• Again no huts are found in the world of Mizahar. Where do you live?
• You have numerous typos throughout your character sheet. The city is called Syliras. That is a Y, not an I.
• Please attach your character sheet to your profile. If you need help with this please private message me.

After looking over your character sheet I cannot let you go any further with it as is. Please take the time to read at least the below listed content.

• Starting Guide*
• Starting Package*
• Race List
• Price List (use Ctrl+F to find things)
• Skill List
• Magic List
• Gnosis List

When you are finished the changes and have read the above materals, please private message me via the little envelope to the left below my name.

Thank you,
Astator