[Note by Astator] Noxmer's CS

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Noxmer's CS

Postby Noxmer on October 14th, 2016, 12:47 pm

Noxmer Hexel


Appearance

Race: Human
Gender: Male.
Age: 18
Birthday: 3, Spring, 497.
Birthplace: Lhavit.

Appearance: Noxmer is a tall young man standing at six foot even, with a gentle face his pale skin sets in a contrast to almost black, brown short curly hair and grey droopy eyes. He wears a goatee down his chin surprisingly long enough for it to be braided despite his young age and young appearance. He is not particularly strong looking but he isn't lanky either, more in the middle of it being average size for a human.

Character Concept

Noxmer is a young charming enough man, with a ready smile and a kind word to almost all. He is has an extreme love and passion for all forms of knowledge but collecting books is his love. He dreams of working for The Seekers in Lhavit.

Character History

His mother worked for the seekers herself and was his biggest inspiration for wishing to go into the same line of work, as well as fostering his love for books and knowledge. His father he never met her mother always telling him simply "It never worked out." And that's all he knew. His life was rather simple his mothering caring for him as she worked as a seeker in The Bharani Library till he turned 11. After that point she started on her own leaving for months at a time always returning the older Noxmer grew the longer she was gone and the last he had heard his mother was still traveling somewhere around Sylira.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Isur
Poor Language: NA


Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Cooking 5 5 Novice
Copying 10 10 Novice
Writing 10 SP 10 Novice
Storytelling 5 SP 5 Novice
Anthropology 5 SP 5 Novice
History 15 RB, 15 SP 30 Competent



Lores

Helpful Lores: Lore of Religion: Qalaya
Lore of Lhavitian Culture


Possessions

-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Kina

Heirloom: Myth of Lhavit (book of stories)

Housing

Location: Solar Wind Apartments



Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 Kina 100 Kina


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Noxmer's CS

Postby Astator on October 21st, 2016, 12:02 am

Welcome to Mizahar! Here are some things I have noticed:
  • Please remove the 's Character Sheet from the title, all that is required is your character's name.
  • Your history does not explain much about your character.
  • How did you learn Isur? That is a native language to the race Isur and is not likely spoken out outsiders.
  • You only have 35SP listed, where is the other 15? Is that the unmarked Points? Please address.
  • Cloak OR coat, pick one.
  • Can you list your apartments contents. This is the housing for cottage located in the starting package.
  • Please attach your character sheet to your profile. If you need help with this let me know.

When you have completed these fixes please private message me.

Thank you,
Astator
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