Character Sheet Help (Locked and Relocated)

by **Mneme** on February 10th, 2012, 10:54 pm

Kaya, it looks great, but in your history it says Kaya was an 'Expert' in archery, and she's only competent. Might wanna change that

by **Kalik** on February 12th, 2012, 12:09 am

Hey I was wondering if I could just get an overview of my character sheet thank you.

by **Citron** on February 12th, 2012, 6:59 pm

Hey can someone look over my CS, thanks.

by **Mneme** on February 12th, 2012, 9:55 pm

Yeah, your CS looks great, except Archery isn't a skill. Your RB is also "+10 Weapon: (any one Bow of choice)" not Daggers. So, if you put 20 starting points into "Weapon: Longbow" and 10 racial bonus points into it, you'll have 30 points in "Weapon: Longbow" and 10 extra points to spend, which I would suggest you put into hunting as your history says Citron likes to hunt.

You might want to add the rest of the Starting Package, as well.

1 Set of Clothing (cloak/coat & footwear included)
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week or 1 bottle of embalming fluid (for Nuits)
1 eating knife
Flint & Steel

Also state what caste he is in, be it Chiet, Avora, or Dek. If you want to be an Endal, apply for it in the Help Desk.

Just change those and you'll be fine.

by **Arashi** on February 12th, 2012, 9:57 pm

can someone look over my CS please

by **Mneme** on February 12th, 2012, 10:13 pm

Arashi, one thing I noticed about your CS is that...you basically copied Citron's and changed a few things. Your Lore isn't an actual Lore, and you have the same exact skills as he does. I would suggest looking at what I wrote for him right above your post, and changing your Lores as well.

Another thing is your history -- If your parents died, you would most likely go to a communal nursery (like the children of Deks) and be raised there. You wouldn't be on your own, doing as you pleased. And your room in the Commons doesn't have a kitchen, bathroom, bedroom, and living room. It's just one room.

by **Mneme** on February 12th, 2012, 10:17 pm

You can also have an heirloom, which is an item that is meaningful to a the character but costs less than 50 gold mizas. It isn't required, though.

by **Arashi** on February 13th, 2012, 3:46 am

can you look at my CS now please

by **Shepherd** on February 17th, 2012, 12:41 am

Here is one of the finest Character Sheets that I have come across as my time as CS Liaison. I hope everyone can review it and learn something that may help to improve your own.

Coltyn

Very well done!

by **Elsa Valentine** on February 17th, 2012, 5:20 pm

Can someone look over my CS please?