Teal

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Teal

Postby Teal on March 18th, 2012, 9:18 pm


Teal

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Physical Description

Name: Teal
Race: Kelvic (Swan)
Age: One
Birthday: Tenth of Autumn, 511.


Character Concept

Physical Appearance(Human): When she is in her human form she has pale snow skin, white hair and gray eyes standing only at 5'3" one inch below the female height. She also wears no clothes.

Physical Appearance(Swan): When she is in her true form and she mostly is, she is a 55 inch long white swan with a elegant posture and clean feathers with a gray eye color.

Personality: Born and raised as a slave she is extremely obedient and loyal to whoever owns her, which is, currently the Slave market and therefor Tiandra "Lasher" Veecos.

Likes: Swimming, Flying, Getting petted, Treats.

Dislikes: Beatings, Torture, Racists, Cheese.

Character History
Teal was born on 511 A.V. in a fancy home owned by a ruthless slaver, when this slaver found out one of his slaves gave birth he killed Teals mother for having a relationship behind his back and having a daughter. The father is currently unknown, but what would he do with the little new born Kelvic-Swan? sell it. He sold teal to the sunberth market and she grew up there, the countless beatings and 'lessons' turned her into a submissive little pet, during a beating the skin on her leg turned into a teal color, and thats were she got her name(it turned back to normal). Currently she is Waiting in her stingy prison to be bought.. Or die.

Possessions
She has no current Possessions

Housing:
Her home is a cell.



Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
No current money./table]
Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages
Common Skills:
[table]
Climbing SP 10 Novice
Hunting RB 10 Novice
Dancing SP 30 Competent
Fishing SP 5 Novice
Land Navigation SP 5 Novice


Practiced Languages:
Common

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: X
Poor Language: X

Recommended Lores: (Pick 2)
Lore of Sunberth Street Layout
Lore of The Night Eyes


Thread list:
18 Spring 512 A Slavers Resort(Cade) Ongoing
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Teal

Postby Shepherd on March 26th, 2012, 2:45 pm

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Hello new adventurer!

Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight.


Things Needing Fixed
 
Picture
The Female Photo you are using at the beginning of your CS is currently being used by an existing Character named Kamalia. Please adjust this.


 
Minor Notes
These things do not need to be changed, but I would recommend you looking into some adjustments.

The BBC code in your Skills Table is broken.


Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

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