Oaton Silverhill

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Oaton Silverhill

Postby Oaton Silverhill on March 20th, 2012, 2:44 pm

PC Name’s (Required)

Oaton Silverhill Coglias

Physical Information (Required)
 Race: Isur
 Birthday & Age: Season of Fall, Day 52, 467 AV; 45
 Gender: Male
Physical Description

Height: 5’0

Weight: 225

Frame: Could be considered small for Isurians, but looks about medium in frame( to humans).

Skin: Pale with a blue tint; and silver veins running up and down his body. His left arm is a somewhat dark Aqua-green.

Hair: Short, strawberry blond hair. Short bangs, his hair parted on the left side of his head.

Eyes: Dark Green.

Much like his personality, he’s usually seen with a grimace or sour look on his face. Due to his race age, he looks more like twenty. Usually he holds himself up very will with proper posture.

Character Concept (Optional But Recommended)

Alignment: Neutral Good

Much like any Isurian, Oaton is cold and withdrawn. He appears to always have a sour disposition and a complete distain for the world at large. He doesn’t seem to enjoy company at all, nor does he seem to have any fun. The only thing he seems to enjoy is his crafting, training, or reading into a book. His often unpleasant attitude tends to draw people away from him rather than towards him, which is what he prefers. He can be somewhat impatient when the time calls for action and he does have something of a temper. But unlike most of his clan, he tries to control it; so as to not be blinded. Because if there’s one thing that he hates, is emotions as a weakness.

Though as cold as he seems, he shares some kind of compassion. He tends to be much “friendlier” than his race, as shown through his acts of kindness by helping people in need. Sure, he’s grumbling about how everyone’s weak and why can’t they just learn to do things themselves, but it’s beside the point. No matter how much he seems to detest people around him, he continually helps out. And while he may dislike company, even he will travel with company if only for the sake of numbers. He does trust people. He trusts that they’ll one day stab him in the back. So despite his inherit dislike, he’s willing to deal with people and not just shun them all together.

If someone does manage to break away at his outer defense, they’ll find Oaton to be just a melancholy guy who has a thirst for knowledge; and wants to see it rather than having to read it in a book. Not to mention he wants to find out new ways to fight or to create items. You might even find him to be nice. You could even see him smile. But don’t get you’re hopes up. The frown on his face may in fact be permanent.

Character Goals: Basically, Oaton’s goals are motivated by learning and improving himself by going to the outside world. Also might have something to do with simply wanting to get away from the world he grew up in to see what it’s like everywhere else; even if he doesn’t like people.

Likes: Solitude, Training, Crafting, Learning (pertaining to skills or wanted skills), and Reading.

Dislikes: Cheerfulness, People, Big Bodies of Water (oceans, seas), Emotions used as a weakness, politics, quite a lot of things (He might as well have a cane and wave it around while saying “Get off my lawn!”).


Character History (Optional But Recommended)

I’ll fill this out a little more lately, for now we’ll just say that he’d been living with his clan where he’d been training all his life.

Training & Skill Points (Required)

*Unarmed Combat:20 (SP)
*Bodybuilding:15(SP)
*Running: 5(SP)
*Wilderness Survival: 10(SP)
*Blacksmithing: 10(Racial bonus)

Lore

Lore of Isurian Anatomy(SP)

Lore of Izurdin(SP)

Languages

Isur: Fluent(SP)

Common: Basic(SP)

Various: Poor(SP)

Equipment/Possessions (Required)

* 1 set of clothing:

1 Cotton shirt & Pants

1 Pair of Low boots

1 Leather Jacket

* Backpack which contains:

1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week
1 eating knife
Flint & Steel
(SP)

Antifungal ointment(bought before starting)

Family Heirloom

Father’s first Studded gauntlets(SP).

Housing

1 large tent (4 person), large tarp, 100 ft of rope, flint & steel, lantern, 2 torches, bedroll, blanket, fishing tackle & hooks, Mountain Pony, a full set of tack, and a large set of saddlebags(SP).

Ledger (Required)

100 Gold Mizas (SP)
-25 (from Antifungal ointment)

Total: 75

Thread List (Optional)
Deiging to respond...Spring/6th/512 AV
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Oaton Silverhill

Postby Shepherd on March 26th, 2012, 4:12 pm

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Hello new adventurer!

Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight.


Things Needing Fixed
 
Wilderness Survival
Since you have Wilderness Survival as a skill, you must have an accompanying Wilderness Survival lore. Examples include Wilderness Survival: Building a Campfire and Wilderness Survival: Finding Shelter in Kalea.

 
Languages
Various is not appropriate for the Poor category in your languages. This insinuates that you have several Poor Languages, which would be an unfair advantage over other players. Please choose one language, or remove it all together.

 
Birthday
It is currently Spring, 512. If your PC was born in Fall, 467, it would be 44 years old, not 45.


Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

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