Allaire

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Allaire

Postby Allaire on March 29th, 2012, 4:13 am



Endrykas CS Template

Physical Description
Name:Allaire
Race:Drykas
Age:7
Birthday: spring 12 495 AV

Allaire is a small thing with pale skin and a thin legs and arms. Her eyes are a bright green that shines with her kind heart. Her raven colored hair is tied into a simple braid down her back. Her Windmarks start from her neck and travels down it twisting to her back and then down that ending in a spiral over her lower back. Around her neck is a green leather necklace with a small wooden horse.

Her colt strider Who she had named Comet for his speed is a dark gold Palomino with a milky white mane, he has amber eyes. His mane is beaded down at the bottom with a single feather breaded into it. Her gourd dog, Skoll, is a pale thing with with shaggy fur and up right ears. Around his neck is a breaded green leather caller.

Character Concept
Allaire had lived a hard life, losing both her parents and all her siblings in a fire within their pavilion. Now the young girl is an orphan and is seen wondering with a young amber colt, that is her partner. But even with that great loss the girl is still hopeful for her future, she travels from place to place and never puts up roots in any place, only ever staying a day or two with others upon the grass sea.

What Allaire hopes above all to do with her life is to be stronger. She felt hopeless watching the flames consume her home and vowed that day to do everything in her power to grow strong and become able to protect the ones she loves.

This girl, though a fighter, is also sickly. She has inherited a weak body. But she does not let that one little thing git in her way.

Character History
With a humble beginnings, the youngest of four, Allaire was born to a Emerald family. But everything changed with the bitter sweet day that started out magical and ended with destruction. She was out with the heard of striders, her hunting hound at her side. She had come upon a birthing mare and sat down to watch as a colt was born into the world that Allaire so loved. When the colt laid his black eyes on Allaire he got to his hoofs and strode right up to her, breathing into her face. The girl had known at that point that the colt was to her partner in her life, that she was now a full Drykas.

But as the girl ran home leaving her new found friend with his mother she saw flames within the sky, when she turned to her home she saw the whole clan at her homes doorstep tossing water on the flames that now consumed the pavilion. The girl now watched her families home burn to the ground with all her family but herself.

That was months ago, now the girl atop the colt, had found her way to the traveling city, Endrykas, to find something for herself, some way of life that called to her and makes her stronger.

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing (Colorful)
-linen Shirt (1 sm)
-Cotton Pants (5 sm)
-Loincloth (3 cm)
-Wool Cloak (5 sm)
-High Boots (5 sm)
1 Waterskin (1 gm)
1 Backpack which contains: (2 gm)
-1lb Soap (5 sm)
-2 Traveller’s Stock (6 gm)
-1 eating knife (5 sm)
-Flint & Steel (1 gm)
Heirloom:white and Gold Silkena Mix (Was tied outside during fire, was fathers)
1 Animal Snare, small (5 gm)
50 ft of rope, Hemp (1 gm)
1 lantern (7 gm)
2 torches (4 cm)
1 bedroll (1 sm)
1 blanket (5 sm)
1 set of fishing tackle & hooks (10 gm)
1 bonded Strider (Dark gold Palomino colt) (150 gm)
1 Yvas (10 gm ?)
1 large set of yvas bags (8 gm)
1 Sword, Broad (35 gm)
1 ShortBow (30 gm)



Ledger
Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
No house +500 GM 600 GM
linen Shirt (-1 SM) 599 GM 9 SM
Cotton Pants (-5 SM) 599 GM 4 SM
Loincloth (-3 CM) 598 GM 4 SM 97 CM
Wool Cloak (-5 SM) 597 GM 9 SM 97 CM
High Boots (-5 SM) 597 GM 4 SM 97 CM
1 Waterskin (-1 GM) 596 GM 4 SM 97 CM
1 Backpack (-2 GM) 594 GM 4 SM 97 CM
1lb Soap (-5 SM) 593 GM 9 SM 97 CM
2 Traveller’s Stock (-6 GM) 587 GM 9SM 97 CM
1 eating knife (-5 SM) 587 GM 4 SM 97 CM
Flint & Steel (-1 GM) 586 GM 4 SM 97 CM
1 Animal Snare, small (-5 GM) 581 GM 4 SM 97 CM
50 ft of rope, Hemp (-1 GM) 580 GM 4 SM 97 CM
1 lantern (-7 GM) 573 GM 4 SM 97 CM
2 torches (-4 CM) 573 GM 4 SM 93 CM
1 bedroll (-1 SM) 573 GM 3 SM 93 CM
1 blanket (-5 SM) 572 GM 8 SM 93 CM
1 set of fishing tackle & hooks (-10 GM) 562 GM 8 SM 93 CM
1 bonded Strider (-150 GM) 412 GM 8 SM 93 CM
1 Yvas (-10 GM) 402 GM 8 SM 93 CM
1 large set of yvas bags (-8 GM) 394 GM 8 SM 93 CM
1 Sword, Broad (-35 GM) 359 GM 8 SM 93 CM
1 ShortBow (-30 GM) 229 GM 8 SM 93 CM


Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages

Common Skills:
Trade skills related to Wide Variety of Crafts, Hunting, Horsemanship

Skill EXP Proficiency
Horse Riding 30 SP Moderate
Sword, Broad 10 SP Novice
Hunting 10 SP Novice
ShortBow 10 SP Novice


Practiced Languages:
Pavi
Common

Fluent Language: Pavi
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: Various Other Human Languages

Helpful Lores: (Pick 2)
Lore of Sea of Grass Geography
Lore of the Importance of the Strider

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Last edited by Allaire on April 11th, 2012, 11:13 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Allaire

Postby Claymore on March 31st, 2012, 2:11 pm

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Liaison intervention

First of all: Welcome to Mizahar, I hope you'll enjoy your time here and RP to your delight. I'm Claymore and I'll be assisting you in creating a Character Sheet. I noticed a few mistakes and will help you to fix them .

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Minor Notes
From the starterpackage you get these items for free:
1 Set of Clothing (cloak/coat & footwear included)
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Food for a week
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
Heirloom.

You don't need to buy these, so feel free to reclaim those mizas you spent on it.


Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

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