Garth

[Garth]

Physical Description Name: Garth Race: Jamoura Age: 421 Birthday: Winter 45th of 91 AV This rugged and poorly aged Jamoura stands just under eight feet in height. A large, rotund stomach suggests his weight is well above the norm for others of his race, stretching out the smokey black skin covering the torso. Such skin is also evident on his feet, hands, and face. Each hand is rough and calloused, and his face is covered in deep wrinkles. Two eyes are set back inside his head, one is chocolate brown and the other is milky white, indicating blindness. This is further supported by the long vertical scar that starts at where the eyebrow should be and down the eye, ending at the edge of his chin. It has long since healed but is clearly noticeable. Powerful arms extend from the body of this creature, blessing this Jamoura with primal strength well-above most specimens of other species. Although they are capable of walking upright, said arms hang low by the thighs, allowing him to assume a stance on all fours for faster movement. Thick tree trunk legs support this claim, though with the pot belly, one would assume this Jamoura won't be going anywhere quickly anytime soon. All of this is encompassed by thick chestnut brown hair, rough and grainy to the touch. He appears to make some effort at maintaining it, grooming a good deal of it whenever he can. Character Concept Garth, like many of his kind, is rather easy-going. Everything about him seems lethargic. His voice is impossibly deep and gravelly, almost like growling, but it is slow and deliberate, but not hesitant. His personality is centered around the view of his fellows that knowledge and wisdom are something to be sought after, which inspires the restless urge of traveling, yet it is difficult for him to work up the nerve, as the Spire has been his home for many a season. Despite the pursuit of knowledge and wisdom, however, food is Garth's true passion- Eating the various fruits, vegetables, and insects located around the Spire has always come natural to him, to the point of gluttony, and for this he is as well-known as his generosity to strangers. Although they are rare in the Spire, and despite the history of his scar, he is no one to turn away when help is needed, almost to the point of destitution. Character History (coming soon) Possessions 1 Rough Waterskin 1 Worn leather satchel which contains: -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) 100 Golden Mizas Housing: Standard permanent housing set inside a tree trunk in the Spire. However, due to recent events, he has taken temporary refuge in the Base Camp. Ledger Reason Profit/Loss Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages Skill EXP Total Proficiency Wilderness Survival 10 RB 10 Novice Beekeeping 26 SP 26 Competent Meditation 14 SP 14 Novice Climbing 5 SP 5 Novice Acrobatics 5 SP 5 Novice Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Jamouran Lores: Lore of Wilderness Survival Techniques (Southern Taldera) Lore of Jamouran Culture Thread List

[Claymore]

Liaison intervention

First of all: Welcome to Mizahar, I hope you'll enjoy your time here and RP to your delight. I'm Claymore and I'll be assisting you in creating a Character Sheet. I noticed a few mistakes and will help you to fix them .

Things to be fixed

 

Age

Your age is wrong if you have been born in winter 91 AV. Your PC would be 490, not 491 years.

 

Lore

Your lore of wilderness survival techniques is too broad. You would need a specific lore like: Lore of wilderness survival (Finding water)

Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

Claymore