Jace Daran

(This is a thread from Mizahar's fantasy role playing forum. Why don't you register today? This message is not shown when you are logged in. Come roleplay with us, it's fun!)

In this forum, all the character sheets are kept for player characters. Feel free to come on in, browse the forum, look at what sort of characters others have created, and then begin your very own!

Moderator: Liaisons

Jace Daran

Postby Dumbass20 on April 29th, 2012, 5:29 am

Jace

Physical Description
Name:Jace [last name]
Race: Human
Age: 16
Birthday: 20th day of the Summer Season 496AV
Jace has soft short cut blonde hair and stands at 5'6". HIs skin dark and tanned from the constant time he spends burning things in the sun. HIs eyes change color constantly but always keep a bright gold ring around the pupil. Jace is relatively good looking but not perfect, and has several burn marks on his arms. Some of them are accidents, but others are from the tragic nights he spends crying over his family even though he would never admit it.

Character Concept
Jace is good at heart, but he is an insane pyromaniac and is very dangerous. He was separated from his sister at a young age when slave traders took her away. Jace is a very very kind person but when it comes to the love of his life, fire, he's totally crazy. Jace spends all of his time burning things down and hunting animals using tactics involving fire. One day Jace hopes to become a great hunter who can use a bow and protect the city of Ravok from the monsters that lurk outside. His current goal is to find his sister Krysia

Character History
Jace and Krysia's parents died in a fire a long time ago, which is why Jace takes to using fire so much. He blames himself for not being able to put it out and is now traumatized. Jace began his practice of fire because he wanted to know exactly what to do if someone he loved was endangered by a fire again. Krysia, Jace's sister, was taken away by slavers. He now has fixated hate towards them and wont hesitate to kill any that he sees on site. Jace has burnt numerous slaver caravans and buildings due to this hate, and plans on torturing the man who took his sister.

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing [All black]
-Cotton/Linen Shirt, Vest, or Chemise
-Cotton/Linen Loincloth
-Cotton/Linen Undergarments
-Cotton/Linen Cloak/coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
Heirloom: Jace has a very large extra Flint and Steel that he carries, (along with a few parchments that burn very easily) that he got from a trader outside of Ravok. (3gm worth)
100GM

Housing:
Jace lives alone in a small house in the city of Ravok. He is poor but keeps himself alive and in a house with the bit of money he recovered from the fire. Jace always keeps a small candle lit above his bed.

Ledger
Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100GM 100GM



Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages

Common Skills:

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Acrobatics # 10 #10 Novice
Stealth # 25 #25 Competent
Wilderness Survival # 15, # 15 #30 Competent


Fluent Language: Common

Lores:
Lore of Fire (damage to the body)
Lore of Fire (extinguishing)


Thread List
Last edited by Dumbass20 on May 9th, 2012, 2:03 am, edited 3 times in total.
Dumbass20
Player
 
Posts: 7
Words: 2550
Joined roleplay: April 29th, 2012, 4:34 am
Race: Human

Jace Daran

Postby Shepherd on April 30th, 2012, 12:54 pm

Image

Hello new adventurer!

Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight.


Things Needing Fixed
 
Skills
None of your Skills are appropriate. I strongly suggest you review the Skill List.

 
Minor Notes
These things do not need to be changed, but I would recommend you looking into some adjustments.

I suggest including your birth year in your birthday.


Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

Shepherd
User avatar
Shepherd
CS Liaison
 
Posts: 245
Words: 132259
Joined roleplay: February 2nd, 2012, 1:22 pm
Race: Staff account
Character sheet
Scrapbook
Medals: 2
Featured Contributor (1) Artist (1)


Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests