Nestriel

[Nestriel]

Name: Nestriel Race: Symenestra Age: 16 Birthdate: Spring, day 86, 496 Av Gender: Female Physical Description: Pale skin, almost pure white, and long, straight black hair that falls all the way down to the small of her back. Her hair is the blackest black and so very shiny. It never tangles and (somehow) always looks perfect. She's about 5ft 3in and, since she's 16, probably not going to get any taller. Her beauty is so serene, but she doesn't see it. She hates everything about herself: her awkwardly long limbs, her full lips, her dark hair, and her gold eyes that are the color of the burning sun. Personality: Nestriel comes off as a bitter girl and not very plesant to be around. She hates people who tell her what to do, or how to do things. Never trusting anybody, she generally stays away from people. Deep inside, she's actually just a scared little girl who wants a family more than anything. Nestriel never ever wants to show people if she's afraid and she hides it very well. Her biggest weaknesses are her fears and her desires. Ethics: Nestriel believes family is the most important thing in the world, but she thinks the world is corrupt and that no one else truely believes that. She thinks that everyone only thinks about themselves, and would give up anything, even loved ones, for what they want. She doesn't believe in alcohol and drugs, and thinks theyre the worst, most horrible things in the world. Fears: -everyone else -thunderstorms -large bodies of water -not having complete control of herself -getting close to people (both physically & emotionally) -mountains Background: When Nestriel was just three years old, her parents left her to die. An old lady named Kyla took her in, and raised her. Nestriel considers Kyla her hero. She was kind and just, and always understanding. She never went against her beliefs for anything, and had very clear morals and values. Kyla spent the last ten years of her life teaching Nestriel her good ways. When Nestriel was 13, a strange man offered her a mysterious substance. Always looking for new expiriences, Nessy took it without a second thought. Not knowing what she was doing, she attacked Kyla that night. Being an old woman, Kyla didn't make it through the barbaric attack...That night is Nestriel's biggest regret. It haunts her. Sometimes she even thinks she sees Kyla. The old woman never looks angry, just worried. Nestriel really thinks that it's her ghost watching over her, though it's really just a hallucentaion. She sees Kyla because of her guilt and due to the post-traumatic stress of what happened. Nestriel has spent the last three years of her life wandering around. She tells herself that it's to learn new things, and learn about the world like she's always wanted to do...But, truthfully, she's lost. She doesn't have anywhere to go and there isn't any point left to her life. All she wants is to learn everything there is to learn, and then someday die defending something she believes in.

[Nestriel]

Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -1 long black dress -Simple Undergarments -a black florr-length cloak -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (porcelin) -Brush (porcelin) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel Heirloom Nestriel has a small locket that Kyla gave her on her 10th birthday. It's one of the few things that really means a lot to her. Money 500 Gold Mizas (compensation--she doesn't live anywhere) Skills: acrobatics (+10 for being Symenestra) sewing (novice-15) cooking (novice-10) wilderness survival (novice-25) Languages Common-fluent (Nestriel doesn't know Symenos because she was raised by a human.) Lore -Medicinal Plants of Kalea -Culture of Kalinor

[Shepherd]

Hello new adventurer! Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight. Things Needing Fixed   Skills As a Symenestra, you get 50 Skill Points +10 in Acrobatics for a total of 60 Points. All skills must be a minimum of 5 Points and a Maximum of 30 points.   Lores I noticed that you had no Starting Lores. Lores are specific bits of information that your PC can know over a variety of topics. You cannot expand upon this knowledge. If you could, then odds are you have a skill, not a lore. Starting players can have up to 2 Starting Lores.   Languages I notice that you have no Starting Languages. All PCs are allowed to have up to 3 Starting languages of varying proficiencies. You can have one Fluent Language, one Basic Language, and one Poor Language. I recommend Common and Symenos   Housing I see no mention of Housing or equivalent in your CS. You can have a home, a travel package, or 500gm Compensation.   Minor Notes These things do not need to be changed, but I would recommend you looking into some adjustments. I noticed that you had no Heirloom Item. Heirloom items are a free item worth 50gm or less, and can be found, inherited, etc. Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here. Shepherd