Cryktos Ellios

[Cryktos Ellios]

Physical Description Name: Cryktos Ellios Race: Human, Mixed Age: 37 Birthday: The Second of Spring, 475 Cryktos is somewhat below average size, even though he feels bigger than everyone else. He is tan, with peircing Brown eyes. He looks rather childish, but his nature clearly depicts a mature adult. His frame is semi-muscular, but is usually covered by magician's robes. His short but wild brownish hair stands out among all his features. His hands and fingers are much more delicate than they look, making his archaeology a much easier task. Character Concept Cryktos is a complex fellow. Ever since youth, he has had a small mental issue, but over time it has evolved into a full blown mental disorder. He lives with an uncontrollable urge to kill when he sees blood. Most fear him because of this, but it can become a great asset when used correctly. He has never over-expended himself, and he has never gotten tired from casting small magics. He is difficult to work with, due to his happy-go-lucky attitude and sadistic tendencies. It is never truly know what he will do, but he will do it, if he hears about it. Cryktos has few friends, and those he does have, fear him slightly. It will never be a good day for him, so long as he is cursed by the memory of his Foster-Father's death. He fears almost nothing, except his own death. He waits for the day when he has the companionship of a friend that is willing to sacrifice themselves for his sake. When this happens, he has promised to save his friends by sacrificing his life. He will honor this promise, and he is cursed until the day he can keep it. Character History Cryktos was always powerful in magic. When his parents orphaned him at the tender age of 12, he was showing great promise in Reimancy, capable of protecting himself. He was taken in by the Reimancer in Yahebah, who taught him everything he knows. It was a rough road, starting with simple chores or complex jobs. The foster parent was hold, but he was willing to house and teach Cryktos magic at the cost of labor. They came to like eachother fondly, and soon adopted more of a Father-Sun relationship, over a Teacher-Student or Adoptive Child-Foster Parent relationship. During the times the man was sick, Cryktos took care of him. When there were muggers or bandits trying to rob the two, Cryktos used his magic. It was this powerful use and excellent training of his Reimancy that helped him succeed and fund the pair. However, when Cryktos was in his early 20s, a large bandit party heard of the power of the Old Man, and wanted to take his head for a bounty. They posted fake bounty posters around town, and attempted to claim the mans head, for fame and glory. Cryktos saw these posters and tore them down whenever possible. However, on a trip to the market to buy some food, a large group of armored soldiers came through. The bandits had attacked the Old Man, and had failed to kill him. The guards saw the bodies piled up, and then saw the man standing there. All the bandits were burnt, and the Old Man was the prime suspect. It was a long day, because the soldiers immediately set the Man to execution. The execution was brutal, and Cryktos's emotions and life was permamently damaged. He lived in the Old Man's house for another four years, and at 30, left him home in Yahebah to escape the torture of living in his late-foster father's house. He made the long trek from Yahebah to Zeltiva, fighting off bandits and often annihilating all of them from their camps. He was forever bloodscarred, and had to live with the need to make blood flow, whenever it was already. He made a peacefull life in Zeltiva, using his air Reimancy to guide ships into and out of the docks in Zeltiva. Now, at 37, he lives, waiting for something new to happen...   Possesions Possessions Starting Possesions : 1 Set of Clothing -Ankle Length Tunic with Short Sleeves -Simple Undergarments -Long Light Cloak (Colorful) (Men) -Leather Sandals -1 Waterskin -1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Bone) -Brush (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel Small, simple house in Zeltiva Heirloom: The Book, "Use and Combinations of Reimancy" 100 Gold Mizas Puppet of Master   Ledger Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Beef, Smoked(5Lbs -20GM 80GM   Skills and Languages SP : Skill EXP Total Proficiency Reimancy (Air, Fire) # 30 Competent (15 SP, 15 RB) Archaeology #10 Novice (10 SP) Animation #25 Competant (25 SP) Winter, 512 : Skill XP Total Proficiency Archaeology + 0XP 10 Novice Animation + 0XP 25 Novice Carpentry +2XP 2 Novice Gadgeteering +1XP 1 Novice Reimancy +2XP 32 Competent Spring, 513 : Skill XP Total Proficiency Archaeology + 0XP 10 Novice Animation + 0XP 25 Novice Carpentry +0XP 2 Novice Gadgeteering +0XP 1 Novice Reimancy +0XP 32 Competent Summer, 513 : Skill XP Total Proficiency Archaeology + 0XP 10 Novice Animation + 0XP 25 Novice Carpentry +0XP 2 Novice Gadgeteering +0XP 1 Novice Reimancy +0XP 32 Competent Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Nader Canoch Poor Language: Shiber   Lores Lores Lore of Zeltiva Streetplan Lore of Zeltivan History Gaining a Master... And Losing One.   Threadlist Winter,512 AV http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic29853.html -- Toys and Dolls Job Threads for Winter, 512 AV http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic30072.html -- [Job Thread 1] Cryktos Works on Boats http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post235005.html#p235005 -- [Job Thread 2] Cryktos is a windbag!

[Cryktos Ellios]

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[Siren]

Hey there!

I'm Siren, the local and completely harmless Character Sheet Liaison. In order to help you get the most out of your experience on Mizahar, I have taken a look at at your Character Sheet to make sure that everything is up to par!

Unfortunately, there are a few changes that have to be made before we can move forward! Please see the tabs below for details on these issues. Once the issues have been addressed, feel free to send me a private message, let me know you've fixed what I've pointed out and I will gladly remove the intervention!

 

Skills

I noticed that in your list of Skills, you have 20 RB points, when as Human, Mixed you're only allowed 15 and they cannot be split up They all must go into one skill. That means, at the end, you should have 65 skill points total (before any awarded points)

Also, In a table below your original table you have some points labeled SP and are 1 and 2 points. However, SP starts for Starting package. Were those XP points that you earned from a thread? If they are from your Starting Package then you aren't allowed to put anything less than 5 points in a skill.

 

Language

I notice that you have Zithanese listed as one of the languages Cryktos can speak, but only Zith can speak that language due to its nature it's almost impossible for humans to make those noises.

Write on!
-Siren