Telth

[Telth]

Physical Description Telth is rather average in height standing at 5'9 with an athletic buld and keeps most of his head shaved except for a strip of medium length dark red hair about 4ins wide giving him a Mohawk. He has very predatory features, with sharp cheek bones and a some what narrow face. Name: Telth Race: Inarta Age: 19 Birthday: 493 Character Concept Telth is very odd for an Inarta, as in he is very quiet never really speaking at all and is very calm in most situations. Despite this he loves to be around people and listen to jokes from others and even going out a goofing around getting into trouble on occasion. Though there is nothing he enjoys more then hunting, his goal is to become a hunter and to eventually leave leave Wind Reach and travel the world learning as much as he can about other cultures and see how they live. He has a certain love of people and is always trying to help others in need and always puts other before himself. Character History Born he spent his early child hood with his Cheit mother and twin brother Keck, Their child hood was not exactly easy as there mother didn't really seem to want them at all, doing her duties as a mother she fed them but that was about it. So Telth and Keck stuck it out togather despite the fact they were complete polar opposites It was almost as if to compensate for how quite Telth was Keck was overly talkative, being very proud, loud, and had a very short temper. Despite their differences the two brothers didn't have any other real family besides each other, so were very close. At the age of eight when they were put into the Youth section where Keck started to quickly take the lead, and Telth fallowed him. The two started to get into trouble, as Keck started to lead a small group around. Telth acted as a spie and thief for when they were up to no good, easily getting around with out making much noise taking sweets and other things when ever he could. The longer they spent in the youth section the more apparent the differences were. While Keck was growing big and strong, Telth stayed rather slim, but was quick and agile. Also it despite people thinking he was mentally challenged because of his silence, it was soon discovered that he was exceptionally intelligent, and as they entered there teen years he learned to enjoy archery, tracking and anything else associated with hunting. When he was 13 a hunter came by and took a liking to the silent boy, and then he was taken under apprenticeship to become a hunter, him and his brother being separated for the first time. His brother stayed in the youth section until he was 15 at witch he was made a drudge lacking any real skills other then physical stamina. The more he learned about hunting the more he grew in love with it especially on the occasions where he was able to leave Wind Reach and go out in the surrounding area. He loved his new life with his mentor. When he turned 17 a hunting accident claimed the life of his mentor and he was left on his own. Possessions 1 Longbow w/ 100 arrows. 1 quiver 1 Set of Clothing - Barechested -Simple Bryda -Simple Undergarments -Simple Katinu - leather ankle boots. 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Glass) -Brush (Glass) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel Heirloom: Hunting knife given to him by his mentor. Housing: Darniva Commonrooms Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 Pinions 100 Pinions longbow -75 pinions 25 pinions longbow arrows (100) -5 pinions 20 pinions quiver 20 pinion 0 Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages Common Skills: Skill EXP Total Proficiency Longbow 10,15 25 Competent Falconry 10, 10 20 novice Tracking 10 10 novice Trapping 10 10 novice Hunting 5 5 novice Practiced Languages: Nari Common Fluent Language:Nari Basic Language:Common Poor Language: Helpful Lores: (Pick 2) Lore of Wind Reach Geography Lore of Inarta Culture Thread List

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Hello there! I'm Torchlight, your friendly local Character Sheet Liaison. I'm here to help you get your CS sorted out and ready to go for roleplaying! There are just a couple of things I'd like to help you with. Don't worry! We'll get your character operational asap.

 

Birthdate

You have not listed a birthdate. You've listed the year, but you also need to list the Season and Day when Telth was born. There are four seasons, and each season has 91 days except Winter, which has 92.

 

Labeling Skills

You must label your EXP to show where it came from, either as Starting Package (SP) or Racial Bonus (RB). Here is an example to show how you can label your skills.

A Symenestra

Skills	EXP	Total	Proficiency
Weaving	20 SP	20	Novice
Acrobatics	10 RB, 5 SP	15	Novice
Spinning	10 SP	10	Novice
Sewing	15 SP	15	Novice

 

Racial Bonus

The Racial Bonus for Inarta is 10 Falconry, 10 Glassworking, OR 10 in a type of bow. You have to pick one of those, you can't pick two or all three. Please remove one of the bonuses.

 

Language Lists

You have two language lists (one is a sample list leftover from the template you used). To avoid confusion, please have only one language list in your CS.

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