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[Rozen Malphor]

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[Siren]

Hey there!

I'm Siren, the local and completely harmless Character Sheet Liaison. In order to help you get the most out of your experience on Mizahar, I have taken a look at at your Character Sheet to make sure that everything is up to par!

Unfortunately, there are a few changes that have to be made before we can move forward! Please see the tabs below for details on these issues. Once the issues have been addressed, feel free to send me a private message, let me know you've fixed what I've pointed out and I will gladly remove the intervention!

 

Skills

I noticed that you had the Lore of Dual Wielding Scythes. However, you only have 15 skill points in the weapon, and Dual Wielding requires at least a 30 in each of the weapons being wielded. So you have a couple options, to either change the amount of skill points from 15 to 30, or to choose a different lore It's a minor change! Everything else about your skills look to be fine!

 

Languages

I see that you only have one language listed. You can have up to three, but it's not required. I am just simply pointing this out in case you didn't know You can have one fluent, basic, and poor language.

Siren's Song:

A great CS. I love the detail you put into the history. It seems very well thought out! Great job

Write on!
-Siren