Open Music on the Wind

[Nemanjak]

"I don't know Jaai, this place has been my home for a while now, you're the first real company in years now. I'm not the best socialist type Jamoura. In fact, I might be the opposite. But I do thank you for the offer, I will think about it.

Nemanjak has really taken to the friendship of the two fellows. The gaze and the calmness is making him a bit sleepy, almost like it is night already. He grabs the tent he picked up while he was getting drinks and food and places it. He remembers the meat and almost in a flash takes it off the cooking sticks. He said:Damn, they're a bit over burn, I forgot about them. Anyway, I hope you do enjoy the cooking, but for me, it's time to sleep. He goes into his tent and quickly falls asleep snoring a bit.

[Jaai]

Jaai blinked, not quite believein it. "Did that guy just..." Jaai began "Fall asleep?" Jaai heard his snores loud and clear and leaned over too look at him more closely. "This guy is really weird..." Jaai said beginning to grin. Suddenly the Jamoura let out a tremendous snore and Jaai burst out laughing.

"So what should we do? shave pictures into his fur ahahah" Of course, Jaai wasn't really going to do something like that, but it'd be amusing to see Kayle's reaction to that plan before saying "Hah, I'm joking, joking." Jaai bit into the cooked meat and soon enough he was stuffed "I don't know how I plan to eat dinner now" he said "I'm so full."


Jaai stood and stretched "Hey, Kayle, what sort of skills do you have? Maybe we can work on them hehe" Jaai cracked his knuckles "Maybe a little unarmed combat? Don't worry, i'm pretty bad at it."

[Kayle]

OOC NOTE@Jaai: are we doing the sparring on this thread or are we making a new one? PM me incase Nemanjak is still posting.

@Nemanjak: Have you stopped posting?

A dumbfound face fell on Kayle as he watched Neman crawl into his tent and fall asleep. “is he really asleep” Kayle thought to himself, but it became clear he was when the thundering sounds of his snores were heard. Kayle laughed with Jaai at the odd Jamoura. Jaai suggested a prank that sounded quite inviting, but Kayle knew he was joking. The two joked and continued eating. After dinner, Kayle leaned back and stretched. Jaai asked about Kayle’s skills and if he wanted to spar. Kayle turned to him and have a small grin, then placed Ren safely into his backpack and told her to stay.

“Heheh, although I look like this I’m quite flexible and I know a thing or two about throwing punches. I’m not that great offensively thought” Kayle said, standing up when a playful smile on his face.
“I don’t usually fight, but I guess honing our skill can be useful, but I think we should move somewhere where we won’t disturb Neman” Kayle said, massaging one of his palms with the other hand’s thumb, alternating.

[Nemanjak]

(Since we're to finish this with Spring and all that I'm about to finish with me)

Nemanjak wakes up and notices that both Kayle and Jaai are gone and with Spring coming, he decides to go to Zeltiva to do some studying. He packs his stuff and leaves the camp site writing a message on a tree saying "As spring comes, it is time to go to a city, the city of Zeltiva."

As he wrote that message, he left the camp site.

[Paragon]

Kayle

Experience

Skill	XP Earned
Flutegun	1
Socialisation	1
Wilderness Survival	2
Interrogation	1
Cooking	2
Animal Husbandry	1
Philosophy	1

Lores

•	Lore Earned
•	Jaai (acquaintance)
•	Nemanjak (acquaintance)
•	Appearance of the Jamoura
•	The Spires: A Forest City
•	An Intolerance to Alcohol

Jaai

I cannot release your grade as your Character Sheet has a long list of problems and interventions below it, and you have failed to deduct living expenses (or seek out an excuse not to.)

Nemanjak

I cannot release your grade as you have failed to deduct living expenses, and your Character Sheet still has an intervention on it. Even if you believe you have met the requirements to remove the intervention, you need to PM Decorum to acquire the removal.


Legend Becomes Reality

While there were passages of decent writing (mainly from Kayle), overall this thread was poor, especially those of you who messed up the posting order, causing issues for other players. One or two line posts are unnecessary too - and will never get you more than 1 or 2 XP in a skill. OOC notes should only be used in threads very rarely, and not for personal chat. Keep the chat to PMs or the chatroom, not in-character threads. Perhaps I would advise taking a look at other player's threads and seeing how they write for future efforts. If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, please send me a PM and we can work from there.