My Character Sheet!

[Zuarsika]

Zuarsika Appearance Race: Ethaefal Gender: Female Age: 17 Birthday: 83, Fall, 496. Birthplace: Sunberth Appearance: Luminous skin; Long lushes silky hair Transistional color hair with a touch of pure gold highlights; Horns are curved turn colors do to season; 5ft tall; weight 100lbs; Violet eyes; soft hands and feet; Big eyes; Ruby red lips; Character Concept I love a good Adventure, I like to garden and rasie animals, I can never really stay at one place for to long or bad thinks tend to happen. I love to sing, dance and meet new faces! Character History I can't remeber much from my past childhood, I mostly spent it all hidding form others that want to take the gold from my head. But I do remember me being taken away from my mother when I was much to young to be thrown out into the world. I have traveled throughout the Sylira and Cyphrus realms sence. I have gotten long with Humans, Akalak, and Drykas the most through the years. Language Fluent Language: Mizaharian Basic Language: Tukant Poor Language: Pavi Skills Skill types Leadership : Expert : 59 Astronomy : Master : 90 Astrology : Competent : 30 Lores Helpful Lores: (Pick 2) Lore of Sunberth Geography Lore of History: Ethaefal Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Coat 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Woood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas +500 GM Heirloom: Fill me in, please! Housing Location: Sunberth Travels House: No house Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Twister]

Hello Zuarsika!

I'm Twister, and I'm one of the Assistant Storytellers here on Mizahar. Unfortunately, your CS poses a number of very serious issues and the character as you've written her is not in a state to be played. Please do not post with her in the In Character boards.

 

Character

Your character as a whole, as you've described her in the Character Concept and the History, will not fly. What you've described is not an Ethaefal, and you will need to read up on their racial lore and most likely completely redo your character's concept and everything about her. Including her hair, in her appearence.

 

Skills

Please review the Skills section of the Starting Package. Your skill point allocation is outrageous; You only have 50 points (and a 10-point Racial Bonus in a set skill) to start out with and you may not start with more than 30 in any one skill.

 

Ledger

Your Ledger is missing a note of your cashed-in Housing. The 500 GMs you received are unaccounted for in the Ledger.

 

Housing

You are not permitted to have no housing. Without housing, you are not going to survive in Mizahar, or in Sunberth. While reviewing the rest of your CS, please review your housing options and pick an inn to live in, buy an apartment or buy yourself a tent.

 

Languages

Mizaharian? It's "Common"!

Please review the Starting Guide and the Starting Package. Your character will be unplayable until you've mended the above issues.

If you have any questions about the Intervention or whenever you've addressed the issues presented, PM me.

Love,
Twister
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