[Note by Nemesis] Cyril

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Cyril

Postby Cyril on August 15th, 2014, 1:53 pm

Character Name


Appearance

Race: Kelvic - Golden Eagle
Gender: Female
Age: 3
Birthday: 18th of Summer, 511 AV
Birthplace: Sunberth

Appearance: Tall, appearing the age of 16. Her hair is blonde, with streaks of blown like her eagle’s plumage, the hair longer than what usual girls would keep. Her eyes are a light blue, almost piercing, somehow adding in a bit of yellow in them if someone looked closer. A dagger is usually on her, knowing the nature of Sunberth and Ravok, though Ravok might not be more outright, it still might appear. She’s thin, perhaps to the point where she looks like a thief to someone with suspicious eyes, but nonetheless a beauty towards most who meet her, though she often looks suspicious of everyone. She wears light clothes for quick shifting when needed. Her eyesight is slightly better as she is an eagle.

Character Concept

Slightly intelligent more than the rest of her species because of her experiences in her short life along with a tiny bit being natural. She believes to live life in the fullest as her short life prevents most things. She is an introvert, though that might change when she gets into a better environment to try to find a bondmate. She tries to ignore people / avoid them, as she knows Ravok is a dangerous place, full of people ready to backstab her, keeping a slightly cold face. When close to her, you'll find that she's more willing to help you, and nicer slightly, but you might feel like she's distant as she's somewhat paranoid of having friends as of her past.

Character History

Once in the better families of Sunberth, betrayed by one she had once called friend to slavery for Ravok. She managed to get out using her looks and enough horrible acting that the guards believed her, and slowly managed to get more freedom as one of the guards got more in love with her, and ran out by cutting herself off from the rope and going to Ravok, as Syrilias was too far. A few days in the city, she knows how kelvics are treated- as pets, and hides her animalistic nature to the best she can

Language

Fluent Language: Common, Bird
Basic Language:
Poor Language:

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Shortbow 24 SP 24 Novice
Long Dagger 5 SP 5 Novice
Hunting 10 RB, 16 SP 26 Competent
Tracking 5 SP 5 Novice


Lores

Helpful Lores: (Pick 2)
Don't show your a Kelvic in Ravok
Lore of Religion: Rhysol

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Shortbow

Housing

Location: Ravok

House: Tarsin's Boarding House.

Ledger

[table2=#000000,#808080]Purchase | Cost | Total
Starting | +100 GM | 100 GM
x2 Long Dagger | -4 GM | 96 GM|
Game Arrows (20) | - 4 GM | 92 GM |
Piercing Arrows (20) | -4 GM | 88 GM |
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Last edited by Cyril on August 23rd, 2014, 3:43 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Cyril

Postby Nemesis on August 18th, 2014, 11:51 pm

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Greetings! I'm Nemesis, Ravok's Assistant Storyteller. I've noticed a few errors on your Character Sheet which need to be corrected before you can continue to post IC in the forums.

  • If Cyril was born in Summer 511AV, she would be 3 years old, not 5. Please edit the age or the date.
  • your second lore is a bit... odd. Can you tighten it up or edit it?
  • It is also jot explained how Cyril might have this lore. There's nothing in the history which shows that she knows what Ravok is like.

When you have changed what I have asked you to, please send me a PM and I will verify your CS. Thank you.

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