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Zahrah

Postby Zahrah on September 28th, 2014, 4:54 pm

Zahrah
from the tents of Qamar, of the sons of Eliada


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Race: Human, Benshira
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Birthday: 35, Fall, 490
Birthplace: Yanebah

Appearance: Zahrah weighs 110 lbs. and has a height of 5'6". She has long, dark brown, silky hair and her skin is a light beige. She has a slim figure and bright blue eyes. When she smiles, her teeth are straight and are pearly white.

Character Concept
Personality: Zahrah is a courteous, and ambitious person looking for love. Her normal personality is optimistic. She is loyal and honest, but sometimes Zahrah will be upset and emotional, she may raise her voice and say things she doesn't mean.

Ethics: Zahrah's behavior is the kind of behavior that parents want their children to be; Responsible, honest and kind.

Likes: Zahrah enjoys painting, she works hard on her paintings (as of 514 AV, she's a good artist but is also still competent). She also likes to cook and bake, especially cakes. (as of 514 AV, she isn't very good).

Dislikes: Zahrah doesn't have many dislikes, but she doesn't approve of judging others and being rude.

Character History
Creation :
Zahrah was born in Yanebah. As a child, she was taught how any other parent would teach their children, to be respectful and responsible. Zahrah always obeyed her parents. As she grew older, she dreamed of living in a new place, she also knew of many Benshira who moved to new places. One day, she heard of a place they called, "Riverfall."
She tried to persuade her parents to move to Riverfall, which she heard was greener and more tropical. One day in her early teens, her parents finally agreed to the move. They packed their stuff and plenty of food. They made the trip from Yanebah to Riverfall by horse. Zahrah and her mother sat on the horse and Zahrah's father walked and held onto the reins. They had to make a stop in Eloab for a while after they ran out of food. After about a week, they were back on the move. Then they stopped in Ahnatep, they didn't stay very long, they just needed to purchase some food and water. After a month of stopping places, they finally arrived in Riverfall. The family of three got a small cottage.
When Zahrah turned 21, she decided it was time to move out live on her own.

Present Day :
W.I.P.


Theme Music


LanguageImage
Fluent Language: Shiber
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: Kontinese

Skills
Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Cooking 15 SP 15 Novice
Dance 15 SP 15 Novice
Painting 10 RB, 20 SP 30 Competent

Lores
-Lore of Moving to a New Home (Yanebah to Riverfall)
-Lore of Holding a Paintbrush Correctly

Possessions
 
Clothing
-Flower Patterned, Orange, Ankle Length Tunic with Quarter Sleeves (SP)
-Purple and Yellow Ankle Length Tunic w/out sleeves (purchased)
-Simple Undergarments (SP)
-Red Shawl covering head and shoulders (SP)
-Purple Colored Earrings (purchased)
-Leather Sandals
 
Inventory
1 Waterskin (SP)
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood) (SP)
-Brush (Wood) (SP)
-Soap (SP)
-Razor (SP)
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) (SP)
-1 eating knife (SP)
-Flint & Steel (SP)
 
Gifts And Heirloom
Heirloom: Mother's Wooden PaletteImage



Housing
Location: Riverfall
House: 1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table


Ledger
Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
Purple and Yellow Ankle Length Tunic w/out sleeves -5 SM 99 GM, 5 SM
Purple Colored Earrings -2 GM 97 GM, 5 SM
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Last edited by Zahrah on October 6th, 2014, 8:32 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Zahrah
from the tents of Qamar, of the sons of Eliada
(Most active on the weekends)

Shiber - Fluent______Common - Basic______Kontinese - Poor
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Zahrah
from the tents of Qamar of the sons of Eliada
 
Posts: 10
Words: 6436
Joined roleplay: September 26th, 2014, 10:47 pm
Location: Riverfall
Race: Human, Benshira
Character sheet

Zahrah

Postby Zahrah on October 2nd, 2014, 9:30 pm

Zahrah
from the tents of Qamar, of the sons of Eliada

Character Development Questions

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General Information :
1. What is your Name?
Zahrah, from the tents of Qamar, of the sons of Eliada.
2. Do you go by a nickname or pet name?
No, just Zahrah.
3. How old are you?
24 years old. (As of 514AV)
4. What is your height?
5'6"
5. What is your weight?
110 lbs.


Aesthetics :
1. Describe yourself as you see yourself.
Responsible, honest and kind.
2. Describe yourself as others typically see you.
Courteous, optimistic, loyal, slightly dramatic.
3. What is your favorite body feature?
To be honest, my cheekbones.
4. How physically fit are you?
Hm, pretty fit I guess.
5. How do you typically dress and what is your style?
I dress how Benshira women should dress, in tunics. And once in a while I wear my shawl.


Family :
1. Who are your parents and what are they like?
My parents are named Qamar (my father) and Atiya (my mother).
2. Do you have any brothers or sisters?
No, I'm an only child.
3. Do you consider close friends as important or more/less important than family?
I feel as if close friends are family. They laugh with you, cry with you, smile with you.
4. Do you treat animals like family?
Oh course!


Location :
1. Where were you born?
I was born in Yanebah
2. Where do you live now?
The beautiful city of Riverfall.
3. If you could live anywhere in Mizahar where would that be?
Well, right here in Riverfall! I begged my parents to move us here for a long time.
4. Do you have a favorite place to vacation or spend leisure time?
No, not really.
5. Where do you fear to be?
Well, Hai would be my first answer. But I wouldn't take a chance with Sunberth either.


Traits :
1. Do you have any physical weaknesses (disease, scars, and missing limbs?)
None that I can think of, maybe I have some little scratches here and there, but they would have healed by now.
2. Are you right handed or left handed?
I can do a lot of things with both hands, but to write my right hand is dominant.
3. What languages do you speak? What do you sound like? Do you have an accent?
I can speak in fluent Shiber, common, and I'm working on my Kontinese. When I speak common I have a pretty noticeable accent (I speak Shiber fluently), and sometimes I make a few mistakes here and there.
4. Do you have any odd mannerisms, annoying habits, or other defining characteristics?
When I'm nervous I tend to wrap my hair around my fingers.
5. Do you have (or want to get) any tattoos or piercing? Why do you have them (or will get them)?
Yes, I have one on both of my ears. I think earrings are very pretty and nice, so I got my ears pierced.


Occupations (WIP) :
1. What is your occupation?
2. Do you like/dislike your work? Why?
3. If you could be anything you wanted to, what would you be?
4. What occupation do you admire the most? Why?
5. What occupation do you lest like? Why?


Childhood :
1. What sort of child were you?
What is Considered a goody-two-shoes.
2. What is your favorite memory from childhood?
Finally convincing my parents to bring me to Riverfall.
3. What is your worst memory from childhood?
I'm not quite sure.
4. What sort of relationship did you have with your parents?
We were, and still are, very close.
5. Who was your most influential rolemodel?
My mother, she is a beautiful and kindhearted person.


Education :
1. What sort of education do you have?
My mother taught me, home schooled me.
2. Do you like/dislike learning?
I love learning, it's nice to find out about new things.
3. Where or how did you learn most of your skills/abilities?
I learned how to cook and dance from my mother. I learned how to paint from my father.
4. How do you learn best?
I'm a hands-on learner.
5. What are your educational goals for the future?
Learn new things, obviously.


Relationships :
1. Do you form close bonds with people? Why? Why not?
Yes, but only when I've known them for a while. I wouldn't be close with a stranger. Because, if I start getting comfortable around someone I just, that would be kind of creepy. You don't know them and they don't know you.
2. Do you trust people easily? If not, why not?
No, I only trust them if I feel comfortable around them.
3. Do you consider yourself straight, gay, bi, or something else?
Straight.
4. Have you ever been kissed? If so, describe the first time.
*Sigh* No, I haven't been kissed.
5. Have you ever had sex? If so, describe the first time.
Nope.


Drugs and Alcohol :
1. Have you ever been drunk? If so, describe your first time.
I've never had a drop of alcohol.
2. Do you like to drink on a regular basis?
No.
3. What sort of alcohol do you prefer?
None, but I've heard that wine is pretty good.
4. Have you ever tried drugs (mood altering substances)? If so, which kinds and what did you think of them?
Never.
5. What do you think of drugs and alcohol? Be specific.
Well, I'm not sure about alcohol. But I know that drugs will destroy you from the inside out.


Likes and Dislikes :
1. What are your hobbies?
I like to cook and paint. I dance as well.
2. Do you like to read?
Yes, books take you on wondrous journeys, without leaving your chair!
3. What annoys you more than anything else?
"See, I told you."
4. What do you find the most relaxing activity to do?
Take a nice, quiet, long nap.
5. What kinds of things embarrass you? Why?
When I say a word in Common wrong, I've got the basics of Common, but I can't seem to say some words right.


Favorites :
1. What is your favorite color or colors?
Light colors, like orange, pink, purple and yellow.
2. What is your favorite time of day?
Sunset.
3. What is the most beautiful thing you’ve ever seen?
Riverfall's waters.
4. What do you like to eat? What do you hate to eat?
I have a sweet tooth, I like to eat candy and cakes. I don't like to eat really spicy foods, regular spicy I can handle. (Whatever that means)
5. What is your favorite type of weather? Does any kind scare you?
Am I the only one who likes the rain? And no, no weather scares me.


Outlook :
1. Are you optimistic or pessimistic?
Optimistic.
2. Would you be able to kill?
No way.
3. What, in your opinion, makes a successful life?
Well, as long as you do everything you wanted to do before you die, I'd consider that successful.


Actions :
1. What is the worst and best thing you’ve ever done?
2. What is your greatest regret?
3. What is your best/worst memory?
4. If you could change one thing about your past, what would it be and why?
5. What are you the most proud of doing in your life?


Emotions :
1. How honest are you about your thoughts and feelings with others?
Oh, I'm very honest.
2. Do you have any biases or prejudices?
Carrots, the vegetable. I think they're gross and I've never tried one.
3. What makes you happy?
Smiles, dancing, cooking, painting.
4. Who or what, if anything, would you die for?
My parents.
5. What makes you angry?
Stuck-up people.


Relationships :
1. In general, how do you treat others?
I treat them how they'd want to be treated. With respect.
2. Who is the most important person in your life, and why?
My mother and my father, they raised me and took care of me. I am thankful.
3. Who is the person you respect the most, and why?
Once again, my parents. They raised me.
4. Do you have a spouse or significant other? If not, describe an ideal lover.
No, but if I did have a lover, he'd be tall, handsome, kind, brave, not afraid to tell me anything. He'd be loving and caring, he wouldn't look down on me just because I'm a woman.
5. Do you trust anyone to protect you? Who, and why?
Nobody really. I trust my father to protect me.


Group Situations :
1. Do you tend to argue with people, or avoid conflict?
Avoid conflict.
2. Do you tend to take on leadership roles in social situations?
It depends on whats going on, most of the time I will.
3. Do you like interacting with large groups of people?
Yes, the more the merrier!
4. Do you care what others think of you?
No, they have their opinions. As long as I like me.
5. What do you think of others, in general?
If they have respect for others, I'm fine with them.


Self Image :
1. What is your greatest strength as a person?
My determination and my wisdom.
2. What is your greatest weakness?
Arguments.
3. If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be?
Nothing, I like me.
4. Are you generally introverted or extroverted?
Extroverted.
5. Are you generally organized or messy?
Organized.


Beliefs :
1. What God or Goddess do you find most appealing, if any?
Yahal
2. Which God or Goddess do you fear, if any?
Krysus
3. Do you have any Gnosis Marks? If so, how did you receive them?
No, I have no Gnosis Marks.
4. What lengths would you go to to please your deity?
Anything it takes.
5. Where do you draw the line at pleasing your deity? What is too much?
Sacrifice, killing another.


Life & Death :
1. What do you absolutely live for?
Adventure.
2. What is the best part of life?
Happy moments.
3. What is the best part of death?
Being remembered.
4. If you could choose, how would you want to die?
Old age and happy.
5. What is the one thing for which you would most like to be remembered after your death?
My achievements.
Zahrah
from the tents of Qamar, of the sons of Eliada
(Most active on the weekends)

Shiber - Fluent______Common - Basic______Kontinese - Poor
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Zahrah
from the tents of Qamar of the sons of Eliada
 
Posts: 10
Words: 6436
Joined roleplay: September 26th, 2014, 10:47 pm
Location: Riverfall
Race: Human, Benshira
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Zahrah

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