Tetac's CS

[Tetac]

Race: Inarta, Kelvic mix
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Birthday: 30/Spring/498 AV
Starting City: Syliras
Birthplace: Wind Reach, Skyinarta

Appearance: Tetac often prefers to go barefoot unless needed in which case a thin, light pair of leather shoes is dawned. On his legs is a fiery red pair of Bryda, light poofy pants worn by most Inarta. While most Inarta men prefer to go bear chested, Tetac's kelvic and more theatrical side takes over in his outfit, where a candy red vest with gold trim dawns his torso. Finally on his face is the only beautiful piece of glasswork he ever cared to make, a candy red Juggalo mask with golden patturns around the eyes and weaving down the cheeks, hiding his face. His eyes are an ocean blue, and his head is covered in a field of light auburn which he combs to the side.



BIO
Tetac's life has always been that of adaptation. Raised by commoners until the age of eight, like most Inarta, and spent a decent portion of his life attenpting to find what he is truly good at. His unknown heratige would help him with this more than he even knows. Tetac's father was an illustrious glassworker, prideful in his creations to a fault. One day, he attracted the attention of a traveling Kelvic, whom marveled at his work. The two quickly grew fond of each other, spending a great deal of time together, the Kelvic woman's inherit trates helping the matter along, as you may have guessed. Romance was inevitable, which would be all well and good, had the man not been deeply involved with another Inarta woman. The deeper into his secrets he grew, the more he regretted it, and missed what he had with his Kin. As Inarta do not marry, this should not have been a problem, yet the outspoken and emotionally indescreet ways of his people led to not being able to keep his guilt hidden for long. The fact that he had gotten this woman pregnant with his child could have been a deciding factor as well, who knows? She was able to hide it easily due to her animal side, and when the Male had finally had enough, and decided he would tear himself away from this guilty pleasure. She grew distraught, wild eyed, threatening to tell his "other bondmate" as she called it about their relationship, and he broke out into a fit of rage. He did not lay a hand on her, because she was a Raven Kelvic
And im sure you can see where that would conflict an Inarta. He deemed finally that he did not love her, and that she could either give birth to his child and leave Wind Reach in peace, or she could have a little accident with another of the birds, and he would rip the baby from her womb. The Kelvic was never heard from again, and so began the life of Tetac.

No matter where he placed himself, he always found that he succeeded in one thing over all, showing off. He gained a love for an audience, doing trick shots while on hunting trips, telling jokes while shoveling snow as his daily bendi, or betting children in the schoolyard their daily rations he could best them at hand to hand combat. It was performing that truly made Tetac's heart race with excitement, but while that was rather cute as a child, the Inarta community saw it as little more than a hobby. They deemed it more of an invaluable skill to the community, and claimed that he would be labelled a drudge if he did not find something useful. He eventually worked his way up to a falcon at the age of fourteen, but simply couldnt resist teaching it some tricks, and quickly found that this was a habit he simply couldnt break. Slight of hand and misdirection came easily to Tetac, and he quickly fell into thievery as a form of entertainment, rather than sheer necessity. It is Inarta law that leaving the community is unthinkable, yet Tetac's free spirit and Kelvic half made an internal desire for freedom drive nearly his Entire mindset towards the open world of Mizahar. Using the survival and hunting yaught at such a young age in windreach, he set out in the night, sure not to be caught, lest he be submitted to Inarta capitol punishment.


PERSONALITY
Tetac is an exhibitionist, a performer. Slight of hand illusions, stunts of daring proportions, thievery in the name of showmansip, even blind fighting for your entertainment. He enjoys a good fight, so long as it draws a crowd, or is just plain fun! Often trash talking to add variety and pizzaz to the scene, he lives for the final finesse on a kill, as well as fooling street walkers eith a magic trick. Aside from any of this, Tetac is mischievous to a fault, doing nearly anything that matches his fancy at the time being, however because of his kelvic heritage, he is just as loyal as he is Big headed. Friendships are for life, enemies even longer, and love is forever. He has a rather high moral tone, however he is not above breaking the law, but it must be for good reason. Cheating on your wife, no, killing the man who raped your daughter, of course.


OSSESSIONS
1 Large tent
Large trap
100 ft of rope
Flint and steel
Lantern
2 torches
Bedroll
Blanket
Fishing tackle and hooks
Compass
An Eyktolian Desertbred named Pak
A full set of tack
A large set of sattlebags
Longbow
Two exhibitionist quivers of about ten arrows each

A set of clothing, including:
A pair of fiery red Bryda, (wide loose cloth pants)
A Candy red Vest with golden trim
A glassworked candy red Juggalo mask with golden ringed eyes and a vinal pattern stretching to the cheeks.

100 gold mizas

1 Waterskin
1 backpack containing:
1 toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week
1 eating knife

Unarmed Combat - 10 (Kelvic Racial Bonus)
Acting - 5
Blind Fighting - 5
Climbing - 3
Falconry - 3
Hunting - 5
Intelligence - 5
Juggling - 3
Play Musical Instrument - 3
Stealth - 13
Weapon: Longbow - 15.


Ledger,
Current Balance: 100 GM

[Twister]

Hello there. I'm Twister, the DS of Sunberth. Upon reviewing your CS, I encountered a number of issues that need to be addressed before you may continue playing this character. The issues are as listed below:

 

Half-Kelvic

Half-Kelvic are not possible. When a Kelvic gives birth or fathers a child, the child is either a full Kelvic or it is whichever race the other parent is (Human, really). I suggest you review the Kelvic lore again, as it explains why.

 

Skills

The minimum amount of points in any skill starting out is 5. You are not allowed to put only 3 points in your starting skills. Please relocate your points with this in mind.

 

Clothing

I'd say your current set of clothing is anything but "simple". The gold trim and the glassworked mask are all a bit too intricate and valuable to be part of the starting gear. I'd suggest revising these to tone them down a bit and perhaps purchase these performer clothes at a later point in time and referring to the price list for a good replacement for the current mask you have listed.

 

Ledger and Gear

You have several items unaccounted for in your ledger that are not part of the standard starting package. Please either remove them or subtract their value from your ledger. Also, point out clearly what your Heirloom (to a maximum value of 50 GM) is.

 

Languages

You haven't listed your known languages anywhere. Please rectify this.

 

Housing

Since you're living in Wind Reach, according to your CS, I wonder why you chose the travel package. There aren't really any good places in or around Wind Reach that allow you to set up camp, and horses are far from ideal in the mountains surrounding Mt. Skyinarta. I highly suggest you switch to a regular housing inside the city instead.

These were the issues I could spot at a first glance. I'm not sure about your Inarta Caste, either. Since you live in Wind Reach as an Inarta (seeing as you can't be Half-Kelvic) you will belong to one of the castes. I suggest reviewing the lore for the Inarta as a race and looking into the caste system of Wind Reach to apply this to your CS. Due to the number of serious issues in this CS, I also suggest reviewing the Starting Guide again.

Once you've addressed all the issues listed or if you have any questions or concerns, send me a PM to either get answers or get the intervention removes so you can go on playing.

Love,
Twister
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