Solo The hunt is on (Job Thread)

Rey closes in on his "prey"

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Considered one of the most mysterious cities in Mizahar, Alvadas is called The City of Illusions. It is the home of Ionu and the notorious Inverted. This city sits on one of the main crossroads through The Region of Kalea.

The hunt is on (Job Thread)

Postby Naia Whitewater on February 12th, 2016, 3:52 am

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Wunderbar!

 
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Skills
  • Observation: 5
  • Stealth: 1
  • Socialisation: 5
  • Disguise: 2
  • Logic: 2
  • Acting: 3
  • Subterfuge: 1
  • Investigation: 2
  • Intelligence: 5
  • Interrogation: 5
  • Planning: 2
  • Running: 1
  • Acrobatics: 1
  • Persuasion: 2
  • Detection: 1

  • Auristics: 2

Lores
  • Akajia: Praying is Cathartic
  • Siku: Proper prayers
  • Siku: The Dedication of Spilt Blood
  • The Goddess Siku
  • Disguise: Changing Distinctive Features
  • Alvadas: The Illogical is Most Logical
  • Sailors Like Drinking
  • Acting: Drunk
  • Crow: Trying to prove himself
  • Crow: Sailor stuck portside
  • Weird Packages: Since Around the 12th of Winter, 514AV
  • James Reed: Mentor to Adrien West
  • Alvadas Couriers: No Idea When Things Will Turn Up

Consequences
Everything hurts! For a little bit, at least. A day of rest will get rid of most of it, but there will be some aching in his leg muscles for a couple of days.

Overgiving
Pinpointing emotions to the level that Rey did in thread would have left him with quite the killer head ache, and his decision to not use his magic for several days is most definitely the right one- he'll experience a severe light sensitivity the next morning, which will eventually lessen as the day goes on, but will hang around for a total for 48 hours.


Notes
Competitive Rey was fun to read, and the thread in general was great! (Even though it took you a while to finish ;) ) I loved seeing Rey work through and find new details to add to the case, and you characterized the NPCs wonderfully!

I gave you a couple of really general lores because I felt like they were appropriate/lacking, though do PM if you have a problem with any. I wasn't too sure what to put in for the information Crow gave, or if you needed/wanted lore on them at all, so I put in a few general ones.

I have contacted Kale about making Crow a contact, I will either PM you when I get her reply, or Kale will.
 
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