Moon Mari

[Moon Mari]

Moon Mari Appearance Race: Human Mixed, Sevfra Gender: F Age: 22 Birthday: 64th of Summer, 495 Birthplace: Alvadas Appearance: Moon is a tall girl (5'10") who keeps her chin up and her smile wide with long brown hair and brown eyes, clearly taking after her mother. She's kept her skin clean of tattoo's but has a small piercing in her right ear. She has a small scar just above her knee from a disastrous dancing mishap where her bone popped out of her leg. Can usually be found wearing a simple sky blue sundress with her hair down. Character Concept Moon Mari. A young 22-year-old woman who learned hypnosis and how to dance in tandem, weaving the two into her own art form, though more than capable of doing each on their own. She lives on her own but has a place with her family if she needed it. Moon is a bit of a flake, but she’s honest with herself. She’s passionate about what she see’s as her one true purpose, to entertain those she dances for by any means possible. Also to have fun trying. She could never admit it, but all her cheer and positivity is forced. She's absolutely terrified of being alone and is friendly and cheerful to combat that. Character History Moons mother, Aether, was not just a plain old woman like she is now. A professional Dancer in Alvadaz and excellent at her work she loved to dance for the various traders and merchants that visited because it allowed her to hear stories of whats outside Alvadas. One day she met a lone Svefra trader and they immediately fell in love. The trader was let go from his Pod in a mutual decision and his name was Tai Mari. He never did tell Moon or Aether why he left his Pod and started trading. Moon was named after the god Leth to represent the change she was in her parent's lives. Eventually, her name would prove to be the good fortune as their family would blossom and grow with her two little sisters. Th earliest memory Moon had she was barely five. Her dad and another trader were discussing something at her house while her baby sister lay in a crib. The other trader had brought his daughter also who has a bit older than Moon, her name was Penny and the two became fast friends. It was around then that Aether began to teach Moon how to dance properly, though Moon seemed less interested in strict regiments and more interested in enjoying herself. Eventually, she found her fathers collection of books, many of them on magic and began to read voraciously. Within a few years, she could be called a Novice Hypnotist even though only at the age of ten and self-taught. She continued to hang out with Penny in her spare time, sharing with her much of her feelings and her life but never her magic. She was too afraid, she couldn’t even tell her family. She and her mother already fought enough over dance practice. In her teenage years, she was extremely devoted to training, though her focus on her own magical prowess was limiting her growth in dance she was able to use her magic to influence her dancing, tricking her teacher and even her mother into allowing her to pursue the dancing she was more passionate for. Just like her mother she never followed a strict form of Dance. Though unlike her mother who was very strong and rigid, using her power and extremely trained body to pull off all manner of very intensive and precise routines. Moon preferred to allow her body to control her, moving in what seemed to her as more fluid and beautiful compositions of movement. She blamed her father's side for that. Or rather, thanked it. She had fallen out of sorts with Penny, not for any lack of trying, just growing up was taking up more of its time. But that changed when Penny’s father passed, and then her mother. Moon did her best to help her through that time, even letting her studies fall behind. Her family took Penny in, and Moon even wrestled heavily with using her magic to attempt to ease her pain, though ultimately deciding not too. She liked to say that she was helped Penny through it all, though she knew that would be a lie, and selfish. She was just happy to help. When Penny left so did Moon, following suit shortly after. She felt it was time to try her trade on the street. When she brought it up to her mom, she simply smiled and asked her to be careful with her magic, and said her Father also knew. They explained that they found out as soon as she tried to use her magic on her mother she had a feeling, then found her studying and knew. They let her be though, seeing how happy it made her and how responsible she was being with something so powerful. They just wanted her to be careful. Her mother gifted her a small dagger for protection and they lent her some money to start out then Moon headed out to make her own as a dancer. Since she’s managed to gather a few fans of the ribbon dancer, Lunar Mari and a small place of her own though she's looking for a musician to help accompany her. Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Fratava Poor Language: N/A Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Hypnotism 27 SP 27 Competent Dancing 15 RB 15 Novice Acrobatics 8 SP 8 Novice Meditation 10 SP 10 Novice Lores Helpful Lores: Lore of Alvadas Location Changing Lore of Alvadas Culture Housing Location: Alvadas, Off and On with my Family & Temporary Housing House: By default the house will cost 500 GM and be the default measurements of 20x20ft. The house also comes with a key which acts as a sort of compass that tugs the possessor of the key in the direction of the house which the key belongs to (It would be best described as two magnets attracting each other). The house includes a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and table. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Dyed Dress (12 SM), Lillian Root tea (8 SM), 2 silk ribbons (5 Feet/23 SM), Pink Sash (2 SM) 4 GM, 5 SM 95 GM, 5 SM Toilette Kit (25 GM), Rouge (1 oz, 1 SM), Pomade (1 oz, 1 SM), Face Pastes (1 oz, 1 SM) 25 GM, 3SM 70 GM, 2 SM Silk Dress (20 GM), Dancing Shoes (10GM) 30 GM 40 GM, 2 SM 1 Earring (2GM) 2GM 38 GM, 2 SM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Moon Mari]

Possessions   Clothing (Very Colorful) -Wool Shirt (SP) -Wool Pants (SP) -Wool Undergarments (SP) -Wool Cloak (SP) -Simple Boots (SP) -Sky Blue Dress -Silver Earring   Dancing Stuff 1 Colourful Silk Dress 1 pair of dancing shoes 1 Long pink sash 1 oz of Rouge 1 oz of Lip Pomade 1 oz of Face Pastes 2 five foot silk ribbons Lillian Root Tea   General 1 Waterskin 1 Toilette Kit 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (wood) (SP) -Brush (wood) (SP) -Soap (SP) -Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth) (SP) -1 eating knife (SP) -Flint & Steel (SP)   Mizas 38 Gold Mizas, 2 Silver Mizas   Prized Heirloom: A small dagger her mother gave her when she decided to start busking on the street. It’s made of Cold Iron and she said it was something that Moons Father gave her after one especially long trip. She said it had history, she could tell by the look in his eyes. It has a ring in the bottom of the hilt and is in pristine condition.

[Chameleon]

Hold Up A Sec!

There's a few tiny errors to fix before you can continue! There's not much though, so looking forward to seeing you writing soon!

• If you want to have piercing, make sure you've purchased it! Check out the price list for jewellery.
• Specify where you get each skill from (add RB - racial bonus- and SP -starting points -after the XP that you've added) to make it clearer.
• Separate each purchase because in a massive chunk like that, it's hard to see the breakdown of each price and check for errors.
• Label which items you got with the starting pack (just put SP after them) so it's clear which are and aren't separate purchases.
• Link your CS through your profile - check out the User Control Panel.
• Because of the process to learn hypnotism, especially if she is self-learning it, you should have some points in meditation. Shift a few into this skill! I don't see a 10 year old sitting for hours on end in front of a mirror if she can't meditate.
• Minor nitpick - there are a few spelling errors, read through it all again to spot them! Nothing to worry about though, we all make them.

But I'm Sure You'll Fix It Quickly!