Dra-Vindu

[Dra-vindu]

Dra-Vindu Basic Information Race: Symenestra Birthday & Age : May 25, 23 Gender: Male Languages Symenos; Fluent Common; Good Snake-Tounge; Poor Physical Description 5' 11', 160 lbs, Ashen grey and morbidly pale skin, red eyes, silver hair, strong sharp teeth, elongated black nails and having a long scar that stretchs from above the left eye to the middle of the back of the neck. Character Concept Dra-vindu isn't limited by the fear of getting hurt. He is extremely curious and very regularly disregards risk. He also is very inclined to study abroad and to learn things he doesn't know. This is because he believes the more you know of your enemy the easier it is to win. Dra-vindu's main purpose in life is to be in control or to dominate others, and actively and constantly demands that his control be acknowledged. His motives are dominated by the desire to be known and recognized. He is vengeful and willing to do anything to retaliate for a lose or for being wronged. Dra-vindu's life is also dominated by the desire to acquire material wealth. His life choices are influenced by choices made on the basis that they enable this gain. Interaction with other motivations may mean that he doesn‘t necessarily wish to retain what has been acquired but just likes to be known as the one who took it. Because his mother died at birth he curbs his emotions and puts up walls so no one can get in. AS his mother began labor his father left, leaving him alone when his mother died. He is greatly self-centered, making it hard for people to become close. Because of his adept knowledge of other races, he excels in the way he kills. Also due to the studying, he is smart and logical. Making him a hard opponent to fight but making him a stranger to empathetic emotions. Character History As a kid he was raised by himself because of the lose of his mother and father. he always wore the coat that his father gave him before his father left him. Being alone he found comfort in criminals, he learned the art of information gathering and written duplication from a man that became his best friend. When Dra-Vindu turned 11 this man died, leaving nothing but what he taught. He soon learned that it is easier to minipulate a man then to become friends with him. This new look on life made him cocky and showy, pushing away people who tried to help. Training Blind fighting 5 Intimidation 10 Forgery 30 Cryptography 5 Acrobatics 10 Lore of Written Duplication Lore of Information Gathering Equipment and Possessions He wears a plain white dress shirt under his coat that he always wears. He wears black dress pants that go to his ankles. He wears the pants cuffs over the boots loosely. He wear knee high combat boots with buckles down the front of them. The coat he wears is an ankle length brown coat with buckles up the front instead of button. it has a breast pocket on each side and a hip pocket on each side. Ledger 100 gold-rimmed mizas Thread List

[Tattoo]

Hello Dra-Vindu and Welcome to Mizahar,

I'm Tattoo, the Character Sheet Liaison, which means I'm the official 'helper' here in the CS forum. I noticed some things about your CS that need improvement. I know it can be a struggle wading through all the lore and getting your character in playable shape - starting with the CS. That's where I come in.

The first thing I notice is your skills. As a Symenestra, you get +10 Acrobatics and 50 points to do with as you please, for a total of 60 points. You currently have 50 points and should, but arent required to, add the +10 acrobatics.

The second thing I noticed was your lack of languages. Starting out, you get up to 3 languages, one Fluent, one Basic, and one Poor. As a Symenestra, I recommend you having Symenos, the language of the Symenestra, and Common, the most used language in Mizahar.

Everything else looks great. Please make the appropriate changes to your CS and PM me, I'll remove this post. Thank you for the CS and I look forward to reading your posts. Welcome to Mizahar