Helen Noq'Tourni

[Helen Noq'Tourni]

Name: Helen Noq’Tourni
Race: Kelvic.
Birthday & Age: 7th Day of Summer, 510AV - 1 year
Gender: Female

Physical Description
As a cat, she is a fine-boned, dainty little tortoiseshell cat with short, sleek fur and bright yellow eyes.
As a human, she is short and slim, about 5’4”, with very gentle curves. Her hair is long, straight, and ebony with wisps of ginger throughout. It is kept in two neat buns on top of her head. Her hair sheds in handfuls when she brushes it, but none ever seems to be amiss. Her nails are long and carefully manicured. Her large, upturned eyes are a glowing yellow, with hints of green around the pupils - which are vertical slits in daylight. Her ears come to a sharp point at the tips. Her lips are thin, and when parted reveal sharp and elongated canine teeth. She ‘sneaks’ more than she does ‘walk’ – she tiptoes around quietly and carefully.

Character Concept
Basic Personality: Very wary of new places and faces, although she warms up quickly in a friendly atmosphere. Is capable of forming very close bonds with a few people, and is happiest at his/her/their side. She’s cuddly, but on her terms – just like everything else in her daily life. She is very demanding, and imposes her will on everyone else.
Ethics – Remain forever loyal to the hand that feeds, shelters, and loves. Apart from that simple rule, anything goes – but violence ought to be avoided...it frightens her, and messes up her hair!
Likes – High places, late nights, anything edible, being showered with attention (by those she’s familiar with), having her hair brushed, doing her nails, watching birds, fish, bugs, and whatever else catches her eye, soft places to sleep, chasing and being chased, and ignoring direct commands. Specifically as a cat: Belly rubs and meowing loudly.
Dislikes – Loud noises, pushy people, strangers – especially those who get too close too quickly, unfriendly confrontation, getting wet, closed doors, being all alone.

History
Helen was born in Zeltiva to Kelvic parents – one a leopard and the other a hummingbird. Shortly after her birth, Helen was sold to a wealthy human to be kept as a pet. After accidentally breaking an expensive figurine while chasing a fly, she was turned out.

Languages
Fluent - Common
Basic - Svefra
Poor - Akalak

Training & Skill Points:
Hunting 19/100 (9 Starting points, 10 racial bonus)
Fishing 7/100 (7 Starting points)
Acrobatics 11/100 (11 Starting points)
Stealth 23/100 (23 Starting points)

Equipment/Possessions:
Pair of ripped & faded black jeans, orange cotton t-shirt, black hemp vest. (Starting Package)
Waterskin (Starting package)
Brown Canvas Backpack (Starting package)
->Contains comb, brush, razor, soap, eating knife, flint & steel, 1 week’s worth of food.

Lores
Lore of Life of a Slave
Lore of Geography of Mizahar (Basic)

Ledger:
100 gold mizas (Starting coin)
500 gold mizas (Housing package cash-in)

Thread List:

[Tattoo]

Hello Helen and Welcome to Mizahar,

I'm Tattoo, the Character Sheet Liaison, which means I'm the official 'helper' here in the CS forum. I noticed some things about your CS that need improvement. I know it can be a struggle wading through all the lore and getting your character in playable shape - starting with the CS. That's where I come in.

The first issue I saw was no starting languages. You can have up to 3 languages, one Fluent, one Basic, and one Poor. I recommend Common since all Kelvic speak it, and it's the most widely used language.

The second issue is no Housing Package. You can have a residence, a travel package, or cash it in for 500gm.

The third issue is no starting Lores. I recommend Lore of Zeltiva Geography (Basic) and Lore of The Life of a Slave.

Everything else looks great. Please make the appropriate changes to your CS and PM me, I'll remove this post. Thank you for the CS and I look forward to reading your posts. Welcome to Mizahar