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Talen Stirling

Postby Talen Stirling on May 31st, 2011, 8:25 am

Talen Stirling


Basic Information:

Race: Human
Age: Born 4th Fall 491 AV
Gender: Male


Physical Appearance:

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Talen has the physique of a warrior, but at the same time his face seems too young and unscarred to be counted amongst the real soldiers of Denval. He is tanned from long hours of training and working in the sun without armour. His eyes are a gray blue, and he has a kind smile when he chooses to show it. He has slightly curly blonde-brown hair of medium length.
Talen is of approximately average height; 1,79 m tall, but quite slim across his waist compared to other more sturdier warriors. Despite this he has considerable strength beneath the armour that he often wears.
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Talen Stirling

Postby Talen Stirling on June 1st, 2011, 6:27 am

Character Concept:

Talen is a kind young man, with a strong sense of justice and faith in the gods closest to his heart and homeland; Priskil and Viratas.

He's a soldier and a warrior, and believes in keeping order and peace. However, while his morals are undoubtedly basically good, he also harbours a deep resentment towards those who would disturb peace, as well as those who murdered his father. His youth and inexperience are made up for by a quick wit and willingness to work hard for succes. He's never known much of the outside world, he's been on a few ships but being a native to Denval means being quite far away from the rest of the world. Therefore he's quite curious towards outsiders, even if he attempts to hide it. Though he will often attempt to seem serious and stern, he is by heart of good nature, yet things do not always go as planned, and good people don't always turn out the way they wish.
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Talen Stirling

Postby Talen Stirling on June 3rd, 2011, 7:34 pm

History:

Life is like a river, different people's streams constantly surging into and out of each other, rising and falling, becoming intense or slow, deep and shallow, and eventually disappearing into the sea.

Talen was born in a simple cottage house in the easternmost parts of Denval city on a common wet and windy september day. His father was a part-time soldier and stevedore, his mother sewed clothes, and dreamed of being an artist.

Talen grew up looking up to his father and loving his mother like any other ordinary boy. He spent most of his time playing war and combat with boys down the street with wooden weapons, dreaming themselves a future as heroes and soldiers in the image of the original garrison of Denval.

As he grew older, Talen quickly discovered that he suffered from a mild but problematic case of hemophilia. Whenever he gained an injury in the wild games he'd have to either find a way to stop the bleeding or at rare times pass out and be saved by his friends and "enemies". Despite, or perhaps because of this, his will to fight and to be succesful became stronger.

With time, his former toy fighting was switched out with training, and the wooden sticks replaced with practicing weapons and shield. Despite his condition he was set on becoming a warrior like his father. Often he'd pray to Priskil for hope and strength to carry on. He'd soon need the support, for in the 14th winter of his life, Talens' father was killed by a rogue Symenestra from "The Unforgiving". He was buried outside of their house under an old tree, and the soldiers who had brought his corpse back gave Talen his fathers sword.
In the aftermath of his loss, several things happened to Talen. He became more reclusive; not scarred for life but somehow angry, harbouring a resentmet. At the same time, he intensified his training and grew increasingly protective of people around him, especially those close to him.

Still, life moves on, and so did Talen. He met a beautiful local girl named Alice, and they fell in love. After several months of secret intimacy, they spoke openly about their relationship with their parents. Only to find out that the breeding program warned them of a threat of continuing Hemophilia in their shared bloodline. After much heated arguement and trouble, their relationship dissolved and Talen was left alone.

Two years later, Talen has joined the soldiers of the city, working a part time job and simply trying to make ends meet living in the cottage that he inherited from his parents. In the spring of his 18th year, his mother met a trader from Avanthal and they were married and moved away. Talen felt she'd betrayed his father, and they've not kept contact since. Talen seems to be living a simple life, but his hopes of glory still burn within.
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Talen Stirling
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Talen Stirling

Postby Talen Stirling on June 5th, 2011, 8:00 pm

Training & Skills

Skill Points Rank SP
Longsword 54 Expert 30
Shield 36 Competent 20
Unarmed_Combat 15 Novice 10
Running 17 Novice 5
Socialization 7 Novice
Investigation 5 Novice
Observation 14 Novice
Cooking 1 Novice
Climbing 1 Novice
Intimidation 2 Novice
Interrogation 3 Novice
Philosophy 4 Novice
Body Building 3 Novice
Teaching 5 Novice
Pick Axe 2 Novice
Mining 2 Novice
Stealth 1 Novice
Negotiation 3 Novice
Seduction 7 Novice
Tactics 3 Novice
Boxing 1 Novice
Rhetoric 2 Novice
Persuasion 2 Novice
Leadership 2 Novice


Lores:

Experience is a collection of the mistakes you've made.

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Area (Starting Package) Being a Good Citizen
Lore of Denvali Culture (Starting Package) Knowledge of the Denval Road & Its Dangers
Hard Day’s Work What Magecrafting Is
The Arsenal Is A Mystery Syllke (acquaintance),
Lysander (acquaintance), Rak'keli Festival Attendee,
Party Pooper The Brave
The Academy The Academy Lieutenant
Witness to Leth and Syna Basic Konti Anatomy
An Explosion of Light over Denval Denvali Refugee
Keeping Busy on the Journey Leaving Home for Good


Languages:

Fluent: Denvali (Common Sub-Type)
Common: Basic
Poor: Nari

Timeline:

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Name Date Rewards
[Flashback] The Grand Tourney [Solo] 55th Spring 503 A.V. +3 Obs; +3 Running; +5, Longsword; +5 Shield; +1 Unarmed Combat
[Flashback] Child's Play [Lena Estelain] 11th Day of Summer 503 A.V. Unfinished
[Flashback] Hope born of Sorrow [Solo] 17th Fall 504 AV Observation +1; Longsword +1
A Day in the Life 7th Day of Summer 511 AV Unfinished
Beautiful Evil 10th Summer 511 AV Cooking +1; Observation +3; Longsword +1; Shield +1; Intimidation +1; Interrogation +3; Philosophy +3
Landfall 13th Day of Summer 511 A.V. Unfinished
Chasing Cures 15th Summer 511 AV +2 Observation; +1 Seduction
The Day After 14th Summer 511 AV Running +2 Bodybuilding +1 Seduction +1
All's Quiet on the Southern Front 25th Summer 511 AV +5 Social +3 Inv +2 Run +1 Shield +1 Longsword; +1 Unarmed
Curing my Curse 27th Summer 511 AV Unfinished
Blood-Gray Day 29th Summer 511 AV Running +1 Investigation +2 Rhetoric +1 Observation +1
They always need help on The Road 52nd Summer 511 AV Body Building +2; Longsword +2; Philospophy +1; Running +1; Shield +2; Socialization +2; Teaching +1
Gemma's Choice 55th Summer 511 AV Longsword +1; Shield +3; Stealth +1; Climbing +1; Negotiation +3; Intimidation +1
The night the towers cried 81st-82nd Day of Summer 511 A.V. Unfinished
[The Quay] Crossing Blades (Talen) 1 Fall, 511 AV Sword 5, Seduction 5, Observation 2, Tactics 1
[Fields outside of Denval] Kinship Calls [Seodai] 4th of Fall 511 A.V. Unfinished
Training Day 9th of Fall 511 A.V. Boxing +2, Longsword +5, Running +1, Teaching +4, Unarmed Combat +2
[The Freight Docks] Dancing in the Dark [Lucette] 29 Fall 511 AV Unfinished
[The Academy] Students Teaching] [Legion] 30th Fall 511 AV Persuasion +1, Rhetoric +1
A Time To Heal. 33 Fall 511 AV Observation +2 Persuasion +1 Investigation +2 Leadership +2 Tactics +1
Earth and Metal (Talen) Winter 2, 511 AV Long Sword +3, Shield +4, Running +1
Uprooted 33rd Spring 512 AV Observation +1 Bodybuilding + 1
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Talen Stirling
"What the petch...!?"
 
Posts: 338
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Joined roleplay: May 30th, 2011, 11:07 am
Location: Zeltiva
Race: Human
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Talen Stirling

Postby Talen Stirling on June 6th, 2011, 4:58 am

Ledger:

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Date Income/Expense Item Sum
6th of Summer, 511 AV N/A SP 100
6th of Summer, 511 AV - 10 Triangle Shield, Steel 90
6th of Summer, 511 AV - 2 gm Cotton Scarf 88
6th of Summer, 511 AV - 1 gm Holy Symbol, Wooden, Priskil 87
6th of Summer, 511 AV - 25 gm Studded Leather Armor 62
1st of Winter, 511 AV - 4 gm Woodsman's Axe 58


Posessions:

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Aquistion Date Income/Expense Item
6th of Summer, 511 AV Starting Package 1 basic 20x20 single room cottage
6th of Summer, 511 AV Father's Sword - Heirloom (15 gm) Steel Longsword
6th of Summer, 511 AV Scabbard, Sharpening Stone - Heirloom accesories Common Clothing
6th of Summer, 511 AV Starting Package Common Clothing
6th of Summer, 511 AV Starting Package Backpack which contains:(Below)
6th of Summer, 511 AV Starting Package 1 Set of Toiletries
6th of Summer, 511 AV Starting Package Food for 1 week
6th of Summer, 511 AV Starting Package 1 eating knife
6th of Summer, 511 AV Starting Package Flint & Steel (End-of-Backpack)
6th of Summer, 511 AV Starting Package One Waterskin
6th of Summer, 511 AV - 25 gm Studded Leather Armor
6th of Summer, 511 AV - 10 gm Triangle Shield, Steel
6th of Summer, 511 AV - 2 gm Cotton Scarf
6th of Summer, 511 AV - 1 gm Holy Symbol, Wooden, Priskil
1st of Winter, 511 AV - 4 gm Woodsman's Axe
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Talen Stirling
"What the petch...!?"
 
Posts: 338
Words: 173032
Joined roleplay: May 30th, 2011, 11:07 am
Location: Zeltiva
Race: Human
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Talen Stirling

Postby Talen Stirling on March 26th, 2013, 7:54 pm

NPC's:

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Name: Michael Stirling
Age: Born 468 A.V., died 504 A.V. 36 years old.
Relation: Father of Talen

Description and story: Michael was a kind and gentle man. He was a proud member of The Watch just as his father before him, as well as a stevedore at the docks. Well-liked in the city for his steadfast kindness, founded in an unassuming devotion to Priskil and the community.

To Talen he was a hero, and that image never had to suffer the wear of time and reality since he passed away in The Unforgiving on a patrol. Still, through his son his devotion to their goddess, The Watch and Denval lives on.

Longsword: 25 points
Teaching: 10 points
Philosophy: 10 points
Rhetoric: 5 points

"Hope is the strength which empowers the arm that shields the weak."

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Name: Alice Silverpine
Age: Born 491 A.V., 19 years old.
Relation: Ex-girlfriend and former fiancée of Talen

Description and story: Alice was and is a sweet girl, strong willed like most Denvali women but feminine and naturally beautiful. She always knew what she wanted even when she was little, and Talen was always too slow to understand what was really going on untill it was too late.

Their relationship began when they were still young and not sure of what they felt, and became a strong love as they grew up. Talen always worked extra hard to impress her, and she was happy to play the part of being won over. In the late aftermath of Talen's fathers death, Alice was there for him to comfort his sorrow and help him get past the loss.
The two were a solid couple, and at 17 years of age they announced their engagement only to receive crushing news. The breeding program told them they were far off related, and that their children would most likely have hemophilia or other inherited disabilities. This news put such a strain and so much fear and anger in their relationships, that they ended it shortly afterwards. She is still one of Talen's great regrets and sorrows.

Animal Husbandry: 20 points
Dancing: 10 points
Seduction: 10 points
Unarmed Combat: 10 points
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Talen Stirling
"What the petch...!?"
 
Posts: 338
Words: 173032
Joined roleplay: May 30th, 2011, 11:07 am
Location: Zeltiva
Race: Human
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