Caedeserus

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Caedeserus

Postby Caedeserus on July 28th, 2011, 8:15 pm

Caedeserus, Follower of the Cursed Sword


Basic Information

Race: Ghost
Birthday & Age : Unknown,
Gender: Male
Languages: Nader-canoch > Common > ?

Physical Description

The ghost can appear in two forms when he passes on his cursed sword,

Some people say they are given the sword by a random beggar man on the streets. On the streets, in the wilds or even in the middle of a fight. Others say that the sword just comes along their path or pops up. Some even claim when wielding the sword or facing it in battle, they can see the armoured visage of some sort of legendary figure from the past. Sometimes even assisting them.

Normally he roams as the beggar, a man of average height and weight. His features are unrecognizable and generic, if someone did happen the see him on the street they would soon forget about him and would more than likely not even notice the blured edges of a ghost or his ethereal glow.

Engraved on the sword he follows are runes in the ancient tongue. A rule that its wielder should live by. The rule that only one who is considered strong should be able to use it, unless the sword's power should backfire on them.

Nader-Rechazapatl
(Our blood heritage)
Aladjunnvasat
(An unreachable art of battle)
Korat-nader-nader
(Binds us all)


The forms of the ghost:

The weakly man :
A sickly weak looking old man very much against the belief of the sword. Streaks of grey in the black hair makes one wonder how old the ghost might be when he is actually alive, or maybe its the age it wanted to live until? With the sunken eyes, showing bones through skin and tattered clothes its hard for anyone to think that this man actually has a connection to a sword like this. The only reason why despite the ghost who believes in strength is willing to assume this form is because he learnt after all his years of his afterlife that the weak people of flesh are more apprehensive of armoured giants and their scary weapons. With this form at least he can roam around the world of Mizahar without any suspicion.
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Champion Swordsman :
Fully armoured from head to toe, masking face and body which does not even exist. This armoured behemoth is a monstrosity to behold. Terror strikes into the heart of his enemies when the glowy eyes flash through the helmet or when the ridiculously bulkish armour starts flexing as though the figure only thinks of it like skin. The last known time besides the strange, untimely appearances of the ghost which no one believes in is on the plains where the champion met with his regretful demise.
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Character Concept

Caedeserus is cursed to wander and follow the sword where ever he goes. Forever linked, he goes where it goes. Sometimes he grows bored and picks a new owner for the blade. He cannot remember why anymore, too many years have gone by and all meaning has been lost. Mostly he just travels from city to city looking for the next person he deems worthy to have the privilege of making him stronger.

The sword itself is said to never be stuck in one place for too long, always moving and more likely to be found in those places where things happen than not. Those who wield it before say that when they use it in a fight, its almost like the sword was using them instead of the other way around. Others for some reason say that the sword fights against their will, forcing them to battle on another unforeseen front in battle. Nevertheless at the point where they felt that they have ended one of their hardest battles, everyone agrees that the sword will mysteriously vanish after a while.

Character History

Caedeserus has no memory of his life as a human, or he just feels to insignificant nowadays but he believes he is human at least. The only memories which matter now are the memories of being on the road and the multitudes of people over the years that have been owners to the sword.

Most of his history can be told through the legend of the sword:

The sword is said to have existed over 200 years ago. When the people started to come out of hiding from the chaotic event called the Valterrian and had to survive taming the new world on their own. The first wielder, a strong warrior now spirit is said to now haunt the sword was called Rechtl-Djed, but this theory was never proved. The bloodied support of the people in the times when the ancient tongue still dominated the land. One of the battles, the last battle of this warrior failed. And with that failure the warrior's people were ruined at the hands of the demons now known as the Zith. From that the legend says the ghost now roams the land seeking to strengthen itself and finally champion a worthy cause to make up for its mistake in its previous life...

Training (Skills, Arcana, Gnosis, Lore)
Soulmist Projection: 29
Materialization: 26
Possession: 5

Affecting sword combat with ghostly powers
Appearing as a Champion Swordsman

Equipment and Possessions
Executioner's sword
  • Cold Iron
  • Serrated blade
  • Sword Guard Catcher
  • Swordstealer hilt
  • Kusari Gama
  • Bones of the "champion" embedded into the hilt (Heirloom)

Ledger
100 (starting)
500 (without house)
-585 (sword)
=15 gm


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Last edited by Caedeserus on August 11th, 2011, 3:36 pm, edited 6 times in total.
Sorry this PC has been disallowed. Those who I am currently in threads with please ignore his interactions and continue as you want. Very sorry for any complications.
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Postby Cayenne on August 8th, 2011, 12:39 am

Intervention

Hi there.

I'm sorry to inform you that while this is an interesting concept, it does not fit within the designs of Mizahar's character creation.

You need to cease playing with it until you are within the expected parameters.

You may message me when you have made the requisite changes necessary to continue.

Thank you.
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Caedeserus

Postby Gossamer on August 14th, 2011, 4:15 pm

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Moderator Note:
Basically, this PC and the player behind it pestering us to get everything outlandish about this concept approved has quite frankly taken up way too much of our time wanting special abilities, magic items, and permission to use ghostly manifestations in inappropriate ways. I'm making an executive decision here and just completely disallowing this character because of the time its taken and the palyers inability to be flexible and rework his character sheet to be a normal ghost. This went from being a possessed sword to being a magic sword a ghost follows around. Mizahar's roleplay focus' around characters, their development and the stories their lives hold. Mizahar does not focus around complex magic items that are convoluted and confusing and require special notes and lengthy explanations to rp with. I'm sorry, but that is not how we run our site and because of this I'm completely disallowing this PC. If you want to play a normal ghost without high powered or cursed magic items, feel free. Please read all the ghost wiki information clearly and understand it before you develop a character concept that is completely off the wall (and frankly below) Mizahar's standards. Cayenne has been way to nice and patient throughout this whole process, but enough is enough.

You can create something else if you wish to play an alt.
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