Edd (character sheet)

[Edd]

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Race: Human
Age: 16
Birthday: August 14th
Gender: Male
Hometown: sunberth

Languages:
language 1: Fluent Common
Language 2: N/A
Language 3: N/A

Physical Description:
At 5'10' Edd is an average weight kid, he has dead blue-grey eyes, with medium length brown hair.

Character Concept
Personality: Nice, kind, sarcastic, funny, loves to laugh.
Ethics: faulty morals, believes hes justified in what he does.
Likes: fried foods, exotic knives, girls (just like any other teenager), stealing, fighting, drinking at times, and money.
Dislikes: being stolen from, rich people, his parents, spending money.

Character History:
Edd was abandoned as a child, he grew up on the streets, he tried working he tried begging, but he found he was good at only one thing, stealing. From the ages of 10-13 Edd made his living by stealing from whoever he could, at age 14 he had different plans, he wanted to find his parents. Edd searched for a year until finally finding them at the age of 15 Edd had talked his way into wallets, information, anything he wanted. When Edd had found his parent he tried talking to them, but they had another child, Edd never found his name, he only knew from that day on, there was no one for him but himself.

Skills:
Larceny: 30/100 (Racial bonus)
Stealth: 10/100
knives: 25/ 100

Lores:
Lore of sunberth
Lore of Ancient Knives

Equipment and possessions:
- 1 Set of Clothing (cloak/coat & footwear included)
- 1 Waterskin
- 1 Backpack which contains:
- 1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
- Food for a week
- 1 eating knife
- Flint & Steel
- Ancient chipped knife

Ledger
100 Mizas

[Avant Garde]

Greetings, and Welcome to Mizahar! I am Avant Garde and I am what's known here at Mizahar as a Character Sheet Liaison. My job is to help others with their Character Sheets by making sure they are correct and prepping them for playing. Here I noticed a couple of things in your Character Sheet that need some tweaking. First and foremost is your birthdate. Mizahar has its own calendar, a special timeline devised specifically to fit the history of Miza. There is no August, but instead we have seasons: Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter. And the current year is 511AV. We actually just transitioned from Summer to Fall, so be sure to keep this in mind when calculating Edd’s birthdate. If you need a jumpstart, I have found that in order to be 16, Edd would have had to have been born approximately in the year 495AV. Secondly, I notice in your skills you have “knives: 25/100.” If you would please adjust this to say Weapon: Knife 25/100, as this is how we list skill points given to knowledge in a weapon. Upon inspection of your equipment and possessions, I see you do not have a housing package. If you choose to “cash in” your housing, you may take an extra 500 Mizas, but be warned: You will be expected to note in your ledger where you have stayed. Mizahar is a dangerous place, so you will be expected to stay in a place such as an Inn or other shelter, and deduct the costs of your stay in your ledger. The only alternative to this matter would be if you had a Wilderness Survival skill level high enough to be able to protect yourself and survive out in the wild of Miza. Please make your choice, and adjust your CS. Lastly I see in your possessions that you have an “Ancient chipped knife.” This is not something that is included in your starting package, and according to your history, Edd was abandoned as a child, so the likelihood of him having a family heirloom is extremely unlikely. If you would please either adjust your CS to make the knife fit into the family heirloom category, or deduct it’s cost from your ledger. Everything else looks good so far! Please make the mentioned adjustments to your Character Sheet and you'll be thread-ready! Thank you for your compliance, and I bid you a grand welcome to Mizahar! Feel free to message me with any further questions/comments/concerns. PM me after you have made the requested changes and I will remove this post. Avant Garde