[Flashback] The Eagle's Claw (Zenai)

Zenai's days as an Inarta Yasi when he seeks out an instructor to train him in the ways of the Talon Sword

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[Flashback] The Eagle's Claw (Zenai)

Postby Zenai on November 12th, 2011, 5:57 pm

Season of Fall, Day 20, 504 AV


It has been about two weeks since he has arrived in Wind Reach and about two seasons since he has left Syliras. The journey was a long and arduous one but he made it in one piece. He was greeted by his mother with tears in her eyes for not seeing her son for about ten years. She did not question why did he left Syliras and came back to his birthplace, Wind Reach. No questions were ever asked except what he wanted to do in Wind Reach but those were the questions were asked by others and his mother would normally shoo them away. A small celebration was held in his honor; an Inarta coming back to his rightful place as well as bringing back knowledge of the so-called jewel of Sylira, Syliras and its knights. Zenai answered those questions to the best of his abilities. Very few would come to Wind Reach and very few would leave Wind Reach. Zenai was an exception and he is always the exception. He doesn’t have a twin; a common trait amongst the Inartas. He knew his father; most wouldn’t even bother with such knowledge. He was an oddity and he felt odd that he find Wind Reach to be a very different place from what he remembered. Maybe it was those ten years in Syliras where they had their own set of rules and customs. Zenai would just have to learn it all over again.

He spent his first week getting to know Wind Reach again; its people, places and customs as well as the language. He wasn’t fluent at Nari since Common was the first language taught by his parents. He knows the more common phrases and could get by speaking basic Nari for most of his daily interactions. Still, it was difficult to get into an in-depth discussion without being fluent in Nari. Even then, most would just accommodate Zenai by speaking Common. However, Zenai felt as if he owed it to his people to know the language of his mother’s tongue. He also took the chance to explore Wind Reach of all of the essential amenities. The Communal Kitchen would be one of them where he would get his meals. Another important venue would be the Darniva Commonrooms where he would be sleeping and keeping his belongings. He also got familiar with places of more to his interest such as the Archery Ranges and the Enclave. He still had that obligation to train and educate himself despite having failed to become a knight. His quest this time would be to be an Endal or at least, someone with a particular useful skill such as hunters. Archery is a highly viewed skill that Zenai has already had trained with during his days as a knight, having chosen mounted archery than using a lance on horseback. He would need to further improve his skill with his composite short bow so he could join the hunting parties that regularly hunt game outside of Wind Reach thus proving himself a useful member of Inarta society. Then there’s the Enclave where he could quench his thirst for random, non-practical knowledge. Even in such a harsh environment like the Mt. Skyinarta, one needs to at least set aside some people, space and effort to keep the written words alive.

Zenai had already decided what he wanted to do; he was still a fighter of sorts so we decided to go with trying to be an Endal or hunter if he doesn’t get chosen by a dire eagle. It made perfect sense since he was trained as a knight, a protector of the people. In Wind Reach, you protect your people mostly from starvation and hunting is akin to slaying beast but instead of killing it so it wouldn’t do harm to the innocent, you kill it to eat it too. Two birds killed with one stone. Zenai reminded himself that he shouldn’t say that analogy out loud as the Inarta has place birds in a special position. Not worshipping them but honoring them as the Syliran Knights would honor Windoak. The Inarta especially honors the dire eagles which are used as the mounts of the Endals and the Endals, being falcon-riders and elite hunters, would mount their dire eagles daily to fly down from the mountain and hunt game with their bows. This arrangement reminded him of the Syliran Knights except horses would readily accept anyone with an apple. Zenai didn’t have to get chosen by a dire eagle yet and for now, he is expected to train as any one of the important professions vital to Wind Reach’s survival. He was a Yasi after all.

Hunting and archery was already on the table but he wanted add his sword skill to the list. Archery is good and all but it’s not very useful once your target has come up within melee range where your bow would be ineffective. He had trained with the long sword and shield but it wasn’t really the Inarta’s preferred weapon. Talon swords were very Inarta and something Zenai was quite interested in learning how to use. Unlike the long sword, talon swords were more like scimitars; curved but thicker on the end of it. When he relayed this desire to his mother, she didn’t hesitate in acquiring a set of dual talon swords. Zenai leaped for joy at the sight of his new toys but he needed an instructor and he readily knew who would be able to teach him. In addition to his two talon swords, Zenai was gifted with a bird; a magpie which Zenai named “Vicky”. Zenai had heard the name from Syliras and he thought it was a pretty nice name for a bird. Hopefully, people don’t ask twice about it. With a magpie sitting on his head and his two new talon swords, he sets off to find Shubre Dyson, Master Earth Reimancer and Talon Sword Expert.
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[Flashback] The Eagle's Claw (Zenai)

Postby Zenai on November 13th, 2011, 6:10 pm

“So you would like to learn how to fight with a talon sword, hmm?” She asked while sipping her tea.
“Yes, I would like that very much if you don’t mind of course.” Zenai said nervously.
“I don’t mind but I do like something in return…” She puts her cup down.
“Yeah, they say you would. Well, I was trained to become Syliran Knight so I would know some knightly stuff like sword & shield fighting style, mounted combat and…”
“You’re her boy, aren’t you?” She was referring to his mother.
“Yeah, I guess.” The Yasi answered.
She looked away. “A Syliran Knight.”
“Squire.” Zenai corrected her.
“What?” She looked back, confused by Zenai’s answer.
“Former squire but I was quite close to being a knight though.” Zenai gave an excuse and hoping she doesn’t ask further about his knighthood.
“I see… Interesting. Very interesting.” She pondered for awhile. “Alright; in return for teaching you how to use a talon sword, I want you to sate my curiosity of the outside world especially Syliras and teach me your sword & shield fighting style.” Shubre Dyson proposed.
“That’s fair.” Zenai quite happy with what he got. “So when do we start?”
“Now.” She declared and got up from the bench.
“Uh, what?” Zenai giving the talon sword expert a bewildered look.

“You did bring those for a reason, yes?” She points at the weapons and shield strapped to Zenai’s back and belt with her own talon sword. Zenai had actually brought it just for show; he didn’t really think she would train him on the spot. He just wanted to show that he was committed and had the proper equipment for training. “Uh…yes?” Zenai’s only answer that he could form with words. Shubre nodded. “Alright, we’ll start with the basics. Get your talon sword out. I’ll teach you to use one first. Dual-wielding is more advanced skill.” It made sense so Zenai kept his other equipment on the bench and took out one of his talon swords.

“I assume you know how to use a long sword then you should know the basics of sword-fighting but do keep in mind the differences between the long sword and the talon sword.” The Talon Sword Expert gave a brief detail of both types of blades as well as its strength and weaknesses. Like any student, he only got the gist of it. Long swords were much longer and straighter than a talon sword. It also had a short hilt so you can wield it with one hand. Though not as elegant as the talon sword, the long sword would cause more serious damage and you would be able to stab opponents much more easily. It also had the advantage of reach which is obvious from its name. Talon swords, on the other hand, were shorter and more curved than a long sword. It had a longer hilt which made it easier to be handled by two hands. In addition, it was easier to grip it. Despite its lack of reach and weight of power, the talon swords could strike faster than long sword and more suitable in tight spaces where the talon sword’s short blade but long hilt would allow the wielder to fight better than opponents with long and big weapons.

“That done. I just want to show me what you got so I can gauge your skill. No pressure.” Shubre smiled. Zenai took his default stance of holding his talon sword out in front of him with his two hands. His most immediate concern was his sword’s lack of reach. He was more used to the longer blade of long swords. He needs to recalculate his kill zone otherwise he’s going to miss his mark just by a foot. However, he had a better grip on his weapon and this would make it easier to use it two-handed thus he can deliver more powerful blows. This was going to take time to get used to but at least, this was a practice session. He then analyzed his opponent. He concluded that she was an expert talon sword-wielder and she is going to kick his butt. Dismissing his fears, Zenai actually saw that she had taken a similar stance albeit it was much more confident, something you would expect from an expert. They stand-off and stared into each other as if sizing each other. Sweat beaded down to Zenai’s eyes and mouth. He liked the sweat and it was salty. “What are you waiting for?” The Avora said before Zenai charged in.

He brought his sword over his head and is going for a double-handed downward cut using the momentum of the charge to add to the power attack; a basic technique taught to him when he just started with a wooden long sword. Shubre just calmly stood there as she brought up her own talon sword to block Zenai’s blow. The blow came and Zenai brought down every ounce he can muster plus the momentum from the charge. Shubre was barely able to hold off the strike. “My, you’re a strong one. Very good. Now, see whether you can block my own attack.” The Avora slides her sword away and twirled around on her toes thus bringing her blade against Zenai’s left. With his muscle memory activating, Zenai immediately and automatically brought his blade against the left side attack and jumped a bit to the right to soften the impact. “Looks like they don’t just teach you swordplay for show.” Shubre commented before withdrawing her talon sword as does Zenai.

Shubre brought her talon sword to bare and swing it wide. Zenai does likewise and the blades clashed with sparks flying. Both parried the other but while Shubre twirled again and bringing her sword around for another strike, Zenai stood his ground and brought his sword to block her attack. Steel meets steel once again and Zenai was able to withstand the attack with sheer strength. The knights aren’t known for their evasiveness and dodges. They have to stand there and take the pummeling meaning they needed to wear the best armor they can forge as well as using a shield to block and a long sword to parry. That kind of fighting style needed more muscle and physical strength that one would think. For Zenai, this was the way he fights; head on but with a dab of agility. Zenai then pushed Shubre’s blade away, making her almost tumble over backwards. “Haha, they really make them strong and tough over in Syliras. Alright, enough of practice. I have a good enough idea of your skill. It was alright for a beginner but with a bit more practice and training, you would be using and fighting with a talon sword like a master in no time.” Zenai smiled at the compliment. “Come see me again tomorrow for our next lesson, same time, same place. Got it?” Zenai nodded excitedly. The Avon smiled before taking her leave. Zenai also took his own leave, remembering to gather his things and getting ready for tomorrow’s lesson. He was going to do alright here.
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[Flashback] The Eagle's Claw (Zenai)

Postby Zenai on November 14th, 2011, 7:51 am

Season of Fall, Day 24, 504 AV


Zenai barely defended his side against Shubre’s attack against his right. The Master’s attack was quick, very quick. Zenai would have compensated by blocking her attack with his shield if he was allowed to use it. For now, Shubre wanted Zenai to learn how to use one talon sword alone. Zenai didn’t exactly see the point of using one weapon without another weapon or even a shield or unless you were using a two-handed weapon like a battle axe. The talon sword had a long hilt which made for easy gripping with two hands but Zenai is still getting used to the weapon’s reach which was much shorter than he was used to on a long sword.

However, he had the advantage of strength and physical toughness as well as a little bit of speed on the side. Zenai had favored double-handed power attacks and put his instructor on the back foot often enough though she would counter this with quick foot work and going for high rate of attack to keep Zenai on the defensive again. “Don’t rely on any one strike.” Zenai’s instructor advised. “Prod at your opponent and look weaknesses.” Zenai didn’t get it. Why bother wasting time and looking for weaknesses when you can just decapitate your opponent in one swing of the sword. Zenai tried to go for more strikes rather than power strikes.

Shubre Dyson had being one hand all the while and it frustrated Zenai. She would mostly dodge and evade his blows while taking the opportunity to take stabs at Zenai. The stabs were manageable to dodge, block and parry but Zenai thinks that Shubre is taking it easy on Zenai. He went for a flurry of quick slashes, hoping to put his instructor on the defensive. Instead she dodged and jumped away, putting Zenai’s weapon out of melee range. Zenai took his stance to read for inevitable.

She charged at Zenai and readying her sword for a diagonal upward cut. Zenai braced himself for the hit but at the last minute, he side stepped just as Shubre brought her sword. Zenai came around behind his instructor, ready for the killing blow. Not to be outdone by her student, Shubre came about and parried the blow then rolled away. Petch! I almost got her! Zenai went it for his charge, not willing to give her time to recover. Zenai went for another double-handed power attack. His sword came down but Shubre parried it as she rolled away.

Zenai kept up the chase, bringing down his blade as often as he can in the hopes he could get at least one hit in. The talon sword expert kept rolling away as well as dodging and parrying Zenai’s barrage of attacks. With one last parry, she jumped and got back on her two feet. Zenai paused and took a defensive stance. “That was pretty good, Yasi. Now it’s my turn.” Shubre charged but this time she used her other hand to grasp her talon sword. Oh petch… was all Zenai could manage before bracing for another pummeling from his talon sword instructor.
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[Flashback] The Eagle's Claw (Zenai)

Postby Zenai on November 14th, 2011, 2:08 pm

Season of Fall, Day 45, 504 AV


Zenai almost blocked the slash with his bare arms and with this sudden realization; he pulled back his arm so his talon sword would take the blow. Steel clashed and Zenai matched the strength of blow with his own but backed a bit to soften the momentum. He wasn’t used to blocking blows with a sword with his shield-arm. Zenai was instinctually held his arm out to block a blow on his left as kept forgetting that he’s using another sword and not a shield. The result of him dual-wielding is that he favors one arm over the other and that other arm either does nothing or gets in the way. At best, he uses his other sword-arm to parry and block attacks.

Zenai managed to get a lucky hit in; smashing the attacking blade away and leaving his instructor wide open for his own attack. Zenai delivered his own set attacks but it was painfully slow as he had to make sure he doesn’t get tangled in his swordplay. He started with his right blade then followed by a slash by his left sword then another attack from his right and so on and so forth. He doesn’t have so many issues with his right arm since it was well used to wielding a weapon but for his left arm, he would need to observe it; keeping one eye on it and another eye on his opponent. It was a bad habit but this was training and he had the luxury of being a bit careless with his opponent. It’s not she was going to kill her, right?

Despite his conscious efforts to practice with his other arm, it always goes back to being defensive. That was a liability since he hasn’t quite learn how to dual-wield properly and most opponent can take advantage of that either using their secondary weapons against him or get a hold of Zenai with their free hands. Still, it was either he practice now or he suffers the consequences later when he might be caught in a real fight for his life. He willed his other left sword-arm to contribute to the offense and be less passive. His left sword-arm just need training, that’s all.

Shubre caught an opportunity and just ran for it; she went for a double-handed strike against Zenai’s left. Using his left arm alone won’t be able to block the blow effectively. Zenai brought his right sword-arm to aid his left to defend against the attack. Shubre’s talon sword met Zenai’s talon swords. Zenai assumes this was one of the ways to compensate for the lack of a shield but he has to be careful against blunt weapons like maces and flails. He wouldn’t be able to block or parry those so he was left to dodging those if the situation comes. Zenai continued to block and parry his instructor’s strikes as well as adding in a few dodges here and there to add a new flavor to his ever evolving fighting technique.
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Postby Zenai on November 15th, 2011, 2:26 am

Season of Fall, Day 60, 504 AV


With winter fast approaching, Shubre was needed to prepare adequate living spaces otherwise some would be without shelter from the cold. Not willing to waste a life, the Master Earth Reimancer has gone back to making sure there were enough rooms for everyone. She had almost no time to give more regular lessons to Zenai but advised him to keep practicing and so he did. He took one of the vacant courtyards and just started practicing. He hasn’t exactly found other sparring partners; mostly because he was shy asking someone else to join him. He considered himself to be an outsider even if he shared at least half of the blood the Inartas had but being away from Wind Reach for ten years does make you different.

He took out his talon sword and took a moment to examine it again. He was still admiring his mother’s gifts; talon swords were artistic-looking in Zenai’s opinion and elegant, much more elegant than a long sword anyway. Long swords may be more practical for most and it was easier to manufacture and train with but the talon swords had its own temperaments. He doesn’t know it exactly but it’s there. Zenai guessed that though talon swords had a shorter reach; it was very useful in enclosed spaces where it was difficult to swing your sword for a slashing attack. You could also swing it a lot faster thus bringing more speed to your attacks.

Zenai took a clear spot and held his talon sword above his head. He slashes down while taking a step forward with his left foot as if he is making an attack against an imaginary opponent before stopping it midway and stepping back. He raised the sword above his head again and then cut it downwards and putting his right foot out before stopping it in midair and once again, stepping back. He repeats this; slashing down with his talon sword and alternating between his feet: left, right, left, right and on and on it goes. After doing this a hundred times, he switched to a sideways cut. He steps forwards with his left foot and cuts the air sideways to right before stepping back. He cut against the air again but this time with his right foot and cutting leftward. He alternates between cuts. He does this a hundred times too.

This was more to train his muscles in his legs and arms to keep them fit. He also appreciates more mundane training regimens as it reminds him of the days during his squirehood where he would train alongside his patrons. Just swinging down their long swords and talk about the various things a knight can talk about which is still pretty much everything under the sun; fighting, drinking, horse riding, hunting, reading and everything else. He missed those days and sometimes, he wished he could just go back and just become a squire again. No, what’s done been done and there’s no going back. He puts more strength into his swings and slashes determined that he is to make something of himself here, in Wind Reach.
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[Flashback] The Eagle's Claw (Zenai)

Postby Zenai on November 15th, 2011, 11:28 am

Season of Fall, Day 84, 504 AV


Zenai was getting better and better at using his talon swords. Slowly but surely; he was able to get his left arm to contribute to the fight rather than being a hindrance. At first, Zenai had it on the defensive and relied on his right arm for attacks. Then he was able to do parallel attacks with both his left and right weapons thus being able to do double-sword strikes. He was at the stage where he manages having each weapon attacking independently of the other but it was mostly having one attacked after the other rather than them attacking as if Zenai had two minds.

Zenai went for a double-sword attack as he twirled on his toes and used the momentum from charging to add power to his strikes. Shubre managed to parry the attack but Zenai didn’t care. The force should have knocked Shubre’s sword away just enough so she could not or barely bring her sword to block the second of Zenai’s attack. Still having some momentum left, Zenai went for his subsequent attack against Shubre. The Avora managed to bring her talon sword to block Zenai’s swords but she was almost losing her balance as Zenai tried to overwhelm her by sheer strength. Shubre didn’t wait for herself to be subdued.

The talon sword instructor jumped backwards and cartwheeled away from Zenai. The Yasi went after her, swinging his talon swords wildly at his prey. She dodged and parried his blows, and eventually managed to get into a more stable position. She went for a downward cut against the charging Yasi but Zenai put his swords in an “X” manner and was able to block the cut, cupping it in between his swords. Zenai continued the charge and used the momentum to kick into Shubre’s belly. She once again let herself be kicked but was already falling backwards to soften the impact of the kick against her. She rolled and somersaulted away from Zenai.

Zenai was about to give chase once more but Shubre called an end to the duel. “That’s enough for today. Very good, Zenai. You’re improving.” She praised the Yasi. Zenai just felt tired and sat on the ground. He breathed in fresh air and exhaled out the stale and humid breath. Shubre also feeling tired; sat on the bench and sip her tea. “You know I think it’s about time you keep your end of the bargain.” Zenai knew what she wanted; a lesson in sword and shield fighting techniques. “Is tomorrow alright for you?” Zenai asked as he got up and sheaved his talon swords. Shubre wondered for a moment. “Alright, we will do it after your talon sword lessons.” Zenai nodded and packed up his things. “Okay, I’ll see you tomorrow then. Thanks for the lessons.” Shubre Dyson smiled. “Always a pleasure.” Zenai walked back to his room and wondered how he was going to teach her. How will the student teach the master? He would just have to think on it while he sleeps.
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