Ceira [W.I.P]

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Ceira [W.I.P]

Postby Ceira on January 20th, 2012, 6:25 am

Physical Information (Required)
o Race : Human
o Birthday & Age : Eighth day of summer. 19
o Gender : Female

Physical Description
Ceira stands at about 5’6” and weighs 128lbs. She was born of a rich family and looks it. She holds a nobility about her, that is noticed when someone cares to look. Her long raven hair frames her pale skin and small oval face. She has a slim build and striking green eyes that seem to add a bit of mystique from her slight rich girl air.

Character Concept
Ceira is a polite noble’s daughter trying to stand on her own two feet. She seeks to make her own way in the world. She wishes to understand her gifts better and this has drawn her towards magic. She fears many of the more unfamiliar races, but is not unwilling to set her fears aside. She does, however, have a deep seated fascination with the Symnestra and Konti. The former is an unhealthy fascination that she has had since birth; the latter is because she can relate to them. She yearns to be free of her shell, yet her upbringing can be hard to overcome, bringing random (and rare) spurts of snootiness to her attitude.

Character History
Pre Creation: Ceira had a strange childhood. She was raised in a sequestered mansion, a studious noble girl that her parents rewarded/spoiled often. Her life might have been able to go on a very different path if she hadn’t been separated from it at birth. When she was born she was given the first Gnosis mark of Avalis, the gift of divination. With this turn of events she had become a strange girl feared despite her age, gender, and status.

She didn’t let this turn of events get her down. Instead she became a studious thoughtful girl who lost her head in books and had a full imagination. As she grew older this imagination didn’t leave her and she became fascinated with the very real faucets of magic. A lifetime of study wouldn’t be enough to track and master them all. She made a pact to herself one night that she would dedicate herself to magic, becoming a powerful mage and control her gifts, studying as many types of magic as possible. This declaration sank into her heart, sparking alive in her later teen years.

As she turned from 18 to 19 she realized that the tutors her parents had hired to aid her in her thirst of magical knowledge weren’t enough. She had to get serious and learn more about the world. With those thoughts in mind she told her parents that she was going to make it on her own in the world. Using her limited skills and money left to her from her parents she set out, eager to learn and be free.

Post Creation : N/A

Training & Skill Points
Fortune Telling 10/100 (10 points from starter pack)
Rhetoric 5/100 (5 points from starter pack)
Auristics 5/100 (5 points from starter pack)
Void 10/ 100 (10 points from starter pack)
Morphing 30/100 (15 points from racial bonus, 15 points from starter pack)
Projection 5/100 (5 from starter pack)

Lore:
Tarot card meaning (Starter pack)
Palm shape meaning (Starter pack)

Gnosis Marks:
1 Mark of Avalis (Divination) [Needs Permission]

Equipment/Possessions
Wear one zebra striped shirt, black pants and a pair of sensible, yet fashionable, shoes.
1 waterskin
1 back pack
- 1 set of toiletries
- Food for a week
- 1 eating knife
- Flint & steel

Ledger
100 gold mizas (Starter pack)

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Ceira [W.I.P]

Postby Shepherd on February 9th, 2012, 11:43 pm

Shepherd's Moderator Intervention

Hello new adventurer!

Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight. I understand that your Character Sheet is a Work In Progress (WIP) so I will just be checking over what is actually written, and not what isn't written.


Things Needing Fixed
 
History
You need to say in your history where your character lived, since you include that she was raised in a mansion. Not very many cities have the space or wealth to have a mansion sized home.

Magic is a dangerous and rare thing in Mizahar. Parents are extremely unlikely to hire tutors to teach their spoiled daughter something that may very well drive her insane and/or kill her. And it is also very unlikely to have learned 4 Magic disciplines at such a young age, please make this more reasonable.


Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

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