Altaira (WIP)

[Altaira]

Altaira

Basics

Name Meaning: Beginning or first.
Name Origin: Arabic
Birthdate: 26th day of Spring
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[Shepherd]

Shepherd's Moderator Intervention Hello new adventurer! Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight. I understand that your Character Sheet is a Work In Progress (WIP) so I will just be checking over what is actually written, and not what isn't written. Things Needing Fixed   Real World References The name you have selected is fine, but you need to leave the fact that it is "Arabic" in origin out of the CS. Arabic is from Earth, and Earth doesn't exist in the realm of Mizahar. Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here. Shepherd