Atir Kandros

[Atir Kandros]

Atir Kandros Basic Information Race: Human Birthday & Age: 29th Day of Winter, 494 AV (18) Gender: Male Physical Description Atir is 5"9', and weighs 157 lbs. He has medium length black hair, with brown and gray speckled eyes. He often has a look of very fierce determination, and seems somewhat detached from his surroundings. He's very thin but very strong at the same time, mostly because of how coordinated he is. Due to his composure and maturity, he is often mistaken for someone much older, yet this only serves to help him during trades or missions. Although Atir may be classified as handsome, he doesn't realize it and always finds fault in his appearance. Character Concept Atir is very reserved, but not shy. He's very tough, dealing with any issues with minimal outside help unless absolute necessary. He's an absolute perfectionist, and will never give anything other than his best effort each and every day. He hates giving an uncompleted product, or failing at a training course. If he finds he's lacking in something, he will not stop until that something catches up to his level of expectation. He is very hard on himself, often finding other people required less of him, and he overdid himself. He's very coordinated, often rehearsing things in his head tens to hundreds of time before actually doing it, trying to think of every possible consequence. Character History Atir's father was a Sergeant Knight, who died on duty protecting the city. Atir learned most of his magic from him, practicing it alone since his father's death. Atir has wanted to join the Knighthood since a young age as a promising mage knight, and just recently was recognized as a fully-fledged knight. He now is attempting to devote all his time practicing, unhappy with his current skills. But hopefully, that'll change soon enough. Training and Skill Points Flux - 30 (30 - Starting Package) Shielding - 15 (15 - Starting Package) Quarterstaff - 15 (15 - Racial Bonus) Reimancy - 5 (5 - Starting Package) Equipment/Possessions   Weapons Father's Quarterstaff (Starting Package - Family Heirloom) Father's Edged Gauntlets (Starting Package - Family Heirloom)   Clothes Simple cloth shirt (Starting Package) Linen pants (Starting Package) Worn-down leather shoes (Starting Package) Wool coat (Starting Package)   Borrowed All items listed are borrowed from the Syliran Knights Nothing ATM Ledger 100 Gold-Rimmed Mizas (Starting Package) Thread List 510 AV Spring: [Flashback] In Proelium Veritas: Syliras

[Shepherd]

Hello new adventurer! Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight. Things Needing Fixed   Possessions You are only allowed to have 1 Heirloom item. Please remove one, or purchase it. I also see you have no form of housing or equivalent. All PCs are allowed to have a home, a travel package, or 500GM compensation. Link! http://www.mizahar.com/lore/Starting_package#Housing   Languages I noticed that you had no starting Languages. All PCs can have up to 3 Languages, of varying proficiencies. First Language is Fluent, Second Language is Basic, and Third Language is Poor. I would recommend Common: Fluent.   Lores I noticed that you have no starting Lores. All PCs can have up to 2 starting Lores. Lores are specific bits of information that cannot be expanded upon, that your PC knows. I would recommend Lore of Syliran Knight History and Lore of Syliras Geography. Link! http://www.mizahar.com/lore/lore Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here. Shepherd