Pryth Othos

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Pryth Othos

Postby Pryth on March 7th, 2012, 8:53 am

Name: Pryth Othos
Race: Human
Age: 12
Gender: Male

Physical Description: A short young boy coming up to an height of 3"1, average for a boy of his age. He has long scruffy black hair, that has large white streaks threw it, his eyes a soulless gray color. His skin is lightly tanned brown from being out in the sun often during the day. He is rather scrawny and seems underweight.
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Pryth grew up within an orphanage within Syliras for as long as he can remember, growing with other kids who either lost their parents or their parents left them there. None of them had any money and anything that they had was "shared" between them. Pryth usually sat alone on top of his little bunk amongst the mayhem of all the other kids, keeping quiet. He would watch as each of them would fight over blankets and toys, yelling turning to fighting and brawling. He then would move later that night, sneaking and taking the things he deemed necessary while taking things and placing near others.

Upon turning about eight and still not being adopted he started going out each day onto the streets, wondering around and watching people. Guards didn't seem to mind him, he often would just sit around on stone ledges and watch people disappearing for a hour or two only to come back with food and continue to watch people. The guards soon got use to him and didn't even act as if he was there. All the while he continued to pickpocket coin from passerby's and steal things. He never had been caught before so he never came to learn that it was wrong, quickly throwing his morale's off course leaving still friendly and nice to everyone he meets, only wishing the best for those he call's friends.

Skill's
Larceny 27 (SP/RP)
Climbing 16 (SP)
Stealth 22 (SP)



Equipment
1 Set of Clothing
1 Water skin
20x20 apartment
1 Backpack which contains:
1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week
1 eating knife
Flint & Steel
A bracelet with an embedded emerald (Heirloom)


Lore
Lore of Lost Parents
Lore of Pickpocketing

Ledger
100 gold mizas.

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Last edited by Pryth on March 11th, 2012, 6:01 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Pryth Othos

Postby Shepherd on March 8th, 2012, 1:24 am

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Hello new adventurer!

Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight.


Things Needing Fixed
 
Skills
Your skill of Pickpocketing is actually encompassed in the skill Larceny. A simple renaming is all that is needed.

 
Lores
I noticed that you had no Lores. Lores are specific bits of knowledge that your PC knows over a variety of topics. Examples could be Lore of Losing One's Parents, or Lore of Pickpocketing: Two Fingers are better than a Hand.

You can have up to 2 starting Lores.



 
Minor Notes
These things do not need to be changed, but I would recommend you looking into some adjustments.

I'm curious as to what city your PC grew up in. In some cities, an abandoned child would be sent to an orphanage, while others are killed or enslaved. Just a thought.


Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

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