Avadyr

[Avadyr]

Race: Inarta Age: 22 Birthday: Day 40 of Winter, 490 Height: 5'11" Weight: 173 Character Concept A rather withdrawn individual, Avadyr was never one to hold people close to his heart. He's grown up on his own, as it is common within his race to go on without parental guidance for much of their young lives. He was born into a common family that raised him until independence. His father had been a skilled archer and hunter, and had no further aspirations. His parents preferred to live in the common class, as they believed strongly that it was the perfect enough quality of living. Through the years he's become a sturdy and independent individual happy with his position in life. He is a Chiet among his people (a commoner) and aspires to find a career in which he can put his love for archery to use. While these are his goals he finds it hard to accept the concept of staying confined to Wind Reach for his entire life, and has his own plans to leave, and strive outside of the safety of the mountain. He longs for a deeper sense of adventure and won't stop wondering until his curiosity is quenched. He is deeply thoughtful, realistic and anything but materialistic. Though he has few that he can call true friends, he wishes in the future to have many, and stories to tell when he is too old to leave the mountain. Personality: Thoughtful, Realistic, Withdrawn, Kind, Naive, Trusting, Reckless Likes: Cool temperatures, smiling, taking walks, hunting, archery, flirting (often, though he's never bothered with relationships) Dislikes: Cynicism, oppression, hot weather, slavery Possessions 1 Set of Clothing - Bryda (pants) - Undergarments - Katinu (cloak) -leather ankle boots -Horse (Avanthalian) -Bedroll -2 torches -Rope -Saddle Heirloom: Sword (Talon) 100 Pinions Ledger Purchase Cost Total Quiver -20 p. 80 p. Shortbow -30 p. 50 p. Arrows(game) x3 12 p. 38 p. Starting +100 Pinions 38 Pinions Skills, Lores, Languages Skill Points Cooking 8 Intelligence 8 Hunting 8 Wilderness survival 6 Carving 6 Archery(RB) 12 Hunting 7 Unarmed combat 6 Languages: Fluent Language: Nari Basic Language: Common Poor Language: Lores: Lore of knowledge of Archery Lore of Wind Reach Culture Thread List http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic19576.html http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic19644.html

[Shepherd]

Hello new adventurer! Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight. Things Needing Fixed   Skills Your Archery Skill needs renamed as Weapon: Shortbow. Also your skills total up to 61 points. As an Inarta, you get 50 Starting Points +10 Racial Bonus points. Please remove 1 point.   Lores Your Lore of knowledge of Archery is unnecessary since you have Shortbow as a skill. You also need to have a Wilderness Survival Lore since you have Wilderness Survival as a skill. Examples of these would be Wilderness Survival: Finding Shelter in Kalea or Wilderness Survival: Building a Campfire.   Age It is currently Spring 512, and as such, if you'd been born in Winter 490, you wouldn't turn 22 until Winter of 512. Please adjust your age appropriately. Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here. Shepherd