Drakath Darkstrike

[Drakath Darkstrike]

Name:Drakath Darkstrike

Race:Human

Age:18

Physical Description: Short, dark black hair, Looks like a child, has bright green eyes, and medium length hair,

Concept:Drakath Is well theres realy no other word for him besides warped, due to him practicing magic at a young age he has became different.He is an adult but he still belives and acts like a child,He is constantly searching for people to play games and train with though he is a child in his mind he loves adventure and fighting,His most prized posession is a cane which contains a blade in it which is the weapon he uses when he trains or fights with people. Which realy dosent happen that often because most people push him away he realy wants someone he could prove himself to and become freinds with someone to be with and practice fighting and magic with.

Skills and talents
Reimancy 30 (Air and water)
Glyphing 20
Bodybuilding 5
Cane sword 10


Character History Drakath was trained in magic by a crazed magician at the age of , it is suprising he survived the experience but the magician made him crazy he treated him like a child made him feel like a baby compared to the world so he always feels like he needs to prove himself.At the age of 10 he was skilled at the talent of glyphing he could use basics of it, and at the age of fifteen he studied reimancy he decided that he would want to study air as a first element.One day while practicing with his master the old man showed him his cane and drakath found out it contained a blade he wondered why a magician should carry a weapon such as that, and his master told him that any competent spell user must find a way to stay physicaly healthy or else they will become weak after that drakath started training with a sword but he could never realy find that much time too.At the age of 17 his mentor took him into a cave and they went in search of an artifact of some sort that his mentor had heard about but after they could not find it his mentor turned on him and thaught drakath had stolen the artifact himslef so he took his cane sword and had to slay his master because he needed to do it to save his life after that he just trained his reimancy skill as he searches for other people who know about magical skills and he seeks to learn about as mcuh stuff as he can

Possessions
-Linen/Wool Shirt Black
-Linen/Wool Pants Forest green pants
-Linen/Wool Cloak Crimson
-Simple Boots purple
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (wood)
-Brush (wood)
-Soap
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
Heirloom: Cane sword 35 GM
100 Gold Mizas

Housing:Default Alvadas house

[Cosmos]

Liaison Intervention

Welcome to Mizahar! I am Cosmos, and I am here to help you with your character sheet. There seem to be a few errors or mistakes currently in your character sheet, though nothing we cannot fix with a few tweaking and editing.

I: I noticed you have no lore listed. As a starting character you are able to have two lore from the get go; here are some examples: Lore of Alvadas Culture, Lore of Religion: Ionu, Lore of History: Alvadas, and other examples can be found in Shepherd’s CS Template for Alvadas. II: The whole being trained in magic at the age of five irks me…a lot. I find it extremely unlikely anyone would try to train a five year old in magic, crazed mage or not. Also how would your character end up with this mage at the age of five? What happened to your parents, relatives, etc and how did you come across this man? Why would he train a child in magic, especially considering how dangerous it would be to let someone so young use magic, for both you and the mage? I will not say anything on the mage attacking his student because he has been deemed crazy, so I do not see that being beyond him as I do not know the extent of his insanity. Also, just a note of caution, but your character will have to be careful if he is looking for others that know magic. Magic is viewed a bad thing in most of Mizahar, with some places accepting a few magics, but even then it can be risky. This is not to say it cannot be done, just that you should be extra cautious about your magic abilities. III: I do not mean to sound rude, but I do find it hard to read what you have written due to the lack of punctuation and some grammatical errors. Normally I am pretty uncaring about them, but I find this difficult to read so I thought I would mention it. IV: I also noticed you have no date of birth listed, just the age. Please add a date of birth so we know when he was born. Currently it is the first season, Spring, of 512 A.V. so use that as a reference point. V: I am just wondering, but how did your character manage to take the sword from your teacher, when your teacher attacked first and with, I presume, the sword considering you were probably in close distance to each other?

Once the things I have mentioned have been modified please send me a PM and I will remove the Intervention for you after I double check to make sure the changes were made. I hope you enjoy your time here at Mizahar just as much as I do!