Braeden Eadazin Pitrius

[Braeden Eadazin Pitrius]

Braeden Eadazin Pitrius Physical Description Race: Isur Age: 65 Birthday: Fall 46th, 447 AV Height: 5 ft Weight: 200 lbs Braeden is much like other male Isur of the Pitrius clan, short in stature but shrewd of countenance. His closely cropped black hair possesses blue hues under certain lighting conditions. Though most Isur disdain facial hair, Braeden has cultivated a small, pointed goatee that he likes to curl whilst deep in thought. His dark brown eyes seeks to look into the very depths of existence, beyond the veil of the normal and as such don’t ever truly seem to be entirely focused in the reality of others – instead seeming to see ‘through’ them instead. A perpetual frown creases his visage and he only shows truly happy emotions when some experiment proves a success, or a theory new to him presents itself for perusal. His left arm, like every one of his male forebears is denser, harder and a jet black in color, silvery veins winding their way jaggedly across its surface seemingly at random. HIs skin possesses the pale blue hues of all Isur, though in Braeden's case it is slightly lighter than most. He is prone to wear black robes, trimmed in silver, more for the effect and imagined status they afford him than out of any true practicality, with a wide leather belt and black leather boots. Character Concept Initially created to be the second half of a dysfunctional ‘sybiotic’ relationship with a Coglias Clan member, Braeden’s ultimate goal is to advance himself as much as possible in the realms of the insubstantial and magical. He will go to any means to do so, often willingly sacrificing others to crawl but an inch towards future greatness. He revels in the past of the Pitrius clan, their powers and creations got him well beyond those of all other clans, surviving or not. He would willingly use his powers, once gained, to affect the balance of power in the favor of his clan. He also seeks hidden, secret knowledge lost in the cataclysmic past. If he can hoard this for himself only then all the better. Character History Braeden is the third sn of the Eadazin family, a relatively new line within the Pitrius clan and the first generation of any real note. He has two brothers and a sister whom are all older than his own 65 years. Each of the four are expected to perform admirably in their efforts to advance teir family within the Pitrius Clan's heirarchical ranks. It is a duty that Braeden takes very seriously indeed. He underwent a childhood not too dissimilar to most Isur, filled with physical exhertion and days learning to use the many forges as his disposal. As with every Isur such traits became ingrained upon is psyche and will forever follow him as he shows his devotion to Izurdin through practical application of his talents. It was, however, when he began to show a predispostion for agical learning - common within the Pitrius - that his elarning became split between the physical and the immaterial. He was sent to the Silver Tower to gain a rudimentary understanding of the arcane arts, more out of a need for intervening protection than to advance his powers into full maturity. As he grew older, however, he found himself fully entolled at the Silver Tower as an acolyte of mediocre note. He showed a predisposition to manipulation of Reimancy, a fact he takes pride in as it is somewhat a rarity amongst the Isur and made hims tand out a little. Since his fiftieth year he has worked tirelessly to perfect and grow his abilties, serving still as an acolyte in all things. His slow speed in development has led him to consider that he might be taking the wrong approach in his studies and that - perhaps - he should set about making some real changes in his efforts at magical supremacy. [Shall be edited, splied, etc when 'partner' Isur is finished and can link histories a bit. This is an overvew of his own life so far. Will be added to and developed as time goes on] Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Silken Robe (Hooded) -Silken Undergarments -Silken Cloak -Leather Belt -Leather Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Silken Knapsack which contains: - Comb (Bone) - Brush (Bone) - Soap - Simple Rations (1 Week's worth) - 1 Eating Knife - Flint & Steel Heirloom: An intricately carved wooden staff topped with a fist-sized carving of a fire ablaze. The staff has no intrinsic properties and its only true worth is sentimental – a gift from his father. 100 Gold Rimmed Mizas Housing: One 20x20 in size, square shaped room that includes a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table. Found within the Pitrius Citadel. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages Common Skills: Skill EXP Total Proficiency Reimancy 26 SP 26 Competent (Earth, Fire) Shielding 14 SP 14 Novice Blacksmithing 10 RB 10 Novice Body Building 10 SP 10 Novice Gnosis: Izurdin's Mark (Level 1) Practiced Languages: Isurian (Fluent) Common (Basic) The Ancient Tongue (Poor) Lores: The Pitrius Clan History The Properties of Djed Thread List None as of yet.

[Claymore]

Liaison intervention

First of all: Welcome to Mizahar, I hope you'll enjoy your time here and RP to your delight. I'm Claymore and I'll be assisting you in creating a Character Sheet. I noticed a few mistakes and will help you to fix them .

Things to be fixed

 

Age

Your age seems to be wrong. For him to be 65, he should have been born in 447AV Spring, or earlier.

Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

Claymore