[ Development Plotnotes ] Nij and Alts

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[ Development Plotnotes ] Nij and Alts

Postby Nij on June 19th, 2012, 2:09 am

This will be my plotnotes for developing things. I love to develop things, and I didn't want to spam my plotnotes with a bunch of development stuff when I want to keep track of my individual PC things. So, here I'll post my development ideas and work on development things. It's a lot easier for me. :)

Here, I'll also keep track of things I have reserved for me to develop, and things I'm currently developing. Feel free to look through everything, I don't mind. This is mostly for me to keep track. This will mostly be area specific things, unless I'm working on something that goes in the World Development thread, which I'll still link here, but I'll put it in the coordinating forum.

Thank you!
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[ Development Plotnotes ] Nij and Alts

Postby Nij on June 29th, 2012, 7:36 am

Links


Reserved / WIP
Note: Not in any particular order.
  • [loc] Shrine to Qalaya - Spires
  • [loc] Shrine to Tanroa - Spires
  • [sys] Apprenticeship - Wind Reach
  • [loc] Eagle's Beak - Wind Reach
  • [npc] Sima and Yibana - Wind Reach (Eagle's Beak)
  • [loc] Watering Holes - Unforgiving
  • [flo] Nymputa Flower - Unforgiving (Watering Holes)
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Systems Organization

Postby Nij on July 11th, 2012, 10:58 pm

Organization for WR Systems Magic Time
I'm working on this with Jules c:

Schooling System
  1. Make schooling system
  2. make NPCs (Students, teachers, tutors, etc.)
  3. make locations

Apprenticeship System
  1. Apprenticeship System
  2. Detailed Apprenticeships for different professions
  3. NPCs (Artisans, apprentices, etc.)
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Schooling Overview

Postby Nij on July 11th, 2012, 11:28 pm

Organization for WR Systems Magic Time - Schooling System Basic Overview

Ages
Lessons/Classes
Exams
Daily and Seasonal Schedule
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Schooling - Ages/Grades

Postby Nij on July 11th, 2012, 11:42 pm

Ages/Grades

Ages 4 - 6:
Kindergarten, basic language started, along with reading and writing.

6 - 8: Basic Classes: history, math, reading, writing, laws of WR, language, falconry (optional), wilderness survival

8 - 12: Bendi, more intensive classes built on basic. Start attempting skills to apprentice to: Glassworking, Hunting, Botany, Herbalism/Medicine, Architecture, Fishing, Agriculture, list to be expanded upon.

12 - 15: Bendi, continued language. Skills should be chosen or almost chosen. Anyone who has not shown talent or proficiency shall be placed in Dek caste.
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Schooling - Classes

Postby Nij on July 12th, 2012, 2:12 am

Classes/Lessons

Kindergarten: In kindergarten, Yasi start to learn Common and whatever other language of their choice that is available. They begin to learn to read and write, and learn to play and interact with eachother. They have play time/recess thrice a day, along with a naptime after lunch. There is one tutor to help give children individualized attention if they're falling behind. The entire class happens in one room, with frequent field trips showing the Yasi how Wind Reach works and functions.

Basic Class: At this time, Yasi begin to learn history, religion, mathematics, wilderness survival and falconry. They continue lessons on language, reading and writing. They're taught the laws of Wind Reach and the importance of the castes. They learn general religion, about different Gods and Goddesses and what they do. They're free to choose any deity to worship, or none at all. Only recently has the teachings of Ivak been taught. There is one recess/play time, and one nap after lunch. There are two tutors to give children individualized attention if they're falling behind. There are less common field trips, with more attention given to more important areas. These focus more on information about the professions.

Advanced Class 1: This is when children begin their Bendi. Bendi are focused on the most at this stage. Yasi also start experimenting with skills and professions that interest them, such as Hunting, Botany and Glassworking. They practice in appropriate areas along with supervisors to find the skill that they do best. This is also a time when Avora may choose apprentices. Basic class is intensified, but not considered as important as Bendi or skill practice. There are no recesses or naptimes, but there are occassional short breaks for Yasi to socialize or do an activity of their choice. There are four tutors.

Advanced Class 2: Yasi continue Bendi and skill practice, and intensified classes are still taken every third day, but are optional except for the minimum requirement of 5 a season. As in, they have to take the classes 5 times a season. Avora are still choosing apprentices, and the Yasi are still working under a supervisor at their chosen skill. Skills should be chosen by now. Anyone who has not shown talent or proficiency shall be placed in Dek caste. Anyone with a disability shall be put into the Dek caste as well, unless someone of Avora or Endal caste vouches for them and takes them under their wing. This happens rarely, and said Avora or Endal will be required to do more work to make up for the invalid. There are four tutors.
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School - Exams

Postby Nij on July 12th, 2012, 3:26 am

Exams

Exams are taken once each season for the Advanced Classes 1 and 2. For almost the entire season, teachers study their students and begin to formulate an individual exam for each one. This can be a long and difficult process, and each student will take multiple exams on "Exam Day" from their different teachers. Exams show the teachers which students need extra help and where the class is on said subject.
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School - Schedules

Postby Nij on July 12th, 2012, 4:05 am

Daily Schedules
Note: times are not set in stone. these are just basic guidelines, and the smaller increments of time are based on gut feeling of teachers.

Daily Schedule - Kindergarten
9th Bell Roll-Call
9:15 Story time
10 Language - Common and language of choice
11:30 Recess/Play time
Noon/12 Lunch
12:45 Naptime
2 Reading
3 Recess/Play time
3:30 Writing
4:30 Extra help or play time
5 Dismissal

Daily Schedule - Basic Class
7 Roll-Call
7:15 Language - Common and language of choice
8:15 History, Law and Caste
9 Writing
9:30 Reading
10 Recess/Play time
10:30 Basic Religion
11:30 Mathematics
Noon/12 Lunch
12:45 Naptime
2 Basic Religion
2:30 Falconry, Horseback Riding or Musical instrument
3:30 Wilderness Survival
4 Dismissal

Daily Schedule - Advanced Class 1
Note: Class for each day will vary on subject.
7 Roll-Call
7:15 Bendi
9:15 First Break
9:30 Skill Practice One
11:30 Class
Noon/12 Lunch
12:45 Skill Practice Two
2:45 Second Break
3 Class
3:30 Extra Help
4 Dismissal

Daily Schedule - Advanced Class 2
7 Roll-Call
7:15 Bendi
9:15 First Break
9:30 Skill Practice One
11:30 Class - Optional
11:30 Wilderness Survival or Weapon training(If choose not to go to class.)
Noon/12 Lunch
12:45 Skill Practice Two
2:45 Second Break
3 Class - Optional.
3 Falconry or Horseback Riding (If choose not to go to class.)
3:30 Extra Help
4 Dismissal

Seasonal Schedule

1st If students are aging into a different class this season, they move into the class at this time.
5th Field Trip for Kindergarten and Basic Class.
10th Bendi Change; Field Trip for Kindergarten.
15th Field Trip for Kindergarten and Basic Class.
20th Bendi Change; Field Trip for Kindergarten.
25th Field Trip for Kindergarten and Basic Class.
30th Bendi Change; Field Trip for Kindergarten.
35th Field Trip for Kindergarten and Basic Class.
40th Bendi Change; Field Trip for Kindergarten.
45th Field Trip for Kindergarten and Basic Class.
50th Bendi Change; Field Trip for Kindergarten.
55th Field Trip for Kindergarten and Basic Class.
60th Bendi Change; Field Trip for Kindergarten.
55th Field Trip for Kindergarten and Basic Class.
70th Bendi Change; Field Trip for Kindergarten.
75th Field Trip for Kindergarten and Basic Class.
80th Bendi Change; Field Trip for Kindergarten.
85th Field Trip for Kindergarten and Basic Class.
90th Bendi Change; Field Trip for Kindergarten.

Last day of Season: Exam Day!
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NPCs - Teachers, Students, Tutors

Postby Nij on July 12th, 2012, 5:07 am

Colour Code:
Dark Blue - Teacher
Light Blue - Tutor
Green - Student
Red - Supervisor
Purple - Other


 
Nikki
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Name: Nikki
Race: Inarta
Caste: Chiet
Date of Birth: Spring 75th, 486AV (26)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi Instructor - Kindergarten
Skills:
Teaching 57/100
Storytelling 43/100
Organization 39/100
Child Care 85/100
Writing 29/100

Lore: Inartan Fairy Tales
Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Fluent

Description of NPC: Nikki may be one of the nicest people you have ever met. She's incredibly patient and kind with the little ones, and her gentle face and kind smile comfort even the wildest Yasi. She's organized and smart, and she takes her job very seriously.
 
Kanipa
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Name: Kanipa
Race: Inarta
Caste: Chiet
Date of Birth: Spring 75th, 486AV (26)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi Tutor - Kindergarten
Skills:
Teaching 49/100
Storytelling 28/100
Organization 56/100
Child Care 54/100
Writing 34/100

Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Fluent

Description of NPC: Nikki's twin, she assists her sister in taking care of the youngest Yasi. She helps with individual Yasi who are struggling or need help with anything. Almost as gentle and kind as her sister, it's said that she and Nikki are twins in both looks and heart. She keeps mostly everything organized, and is ready to offer a smile to anyone.


 
Little Timmay
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Name: Little Timmay
Race: Inarta
Caste: Yasi
Date of Birth: Summer 43rd, 507AV (5)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi
Skills:
Escape Artist 32/100
Begging 27/100
Stealth 39/100
Negotiation 25/100
Intimidation 5/100
Persuasion 41/100
Climbing 26/100

Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Poor

Description of NPC: Little Timmay is a brat. He's the bane of Nikki and Kanipa's existence, and perhaps the only one who can get past their seemingly endless patience. Born to a Dek and an unknown father, he's clever in a way no one can understand, despite being so young. Sitting behind his innocent smile is a menace with skills that he learned on his own doing, and nothing can contain him for long. The other children see him as a sort of hero, even if it's only stealing some extra bread from the kitchens. He has a grudging affection for Sura, although he finds it annoying when she follows him around.


 
Sura
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Name: Sura
Race: Inarta
Caste: Yasi
Date of Birth: Spring 90th, 508AV (4)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi
Skills:
Impersonation 15/100
Dance 34/100
Acrobatics 29/100
Juggling 7/100

Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Poor

Description of NPC: An amusing little girl, Sura is an entertainer by heart. She's bold and funny, and her father likes to say that she was born dancing. Born to a pair of Avora, she seems to be well brought up, although she doesn't get along very well with the other children. She likes to pretend that she's married to Little Timmay, and will follow him around, trying to get him to play with her.


 
Piko
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Name: Piko
Race: Inarta
Caste: Chiet
Date of Birth: Fall 3rd, 469AV (42)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi Instructor - Basic Class, Advanced Class 1 and 2: History, Mathematics, Reading, Writing
Skills:
Mathematics 68/100
Teaching 56/100
Writing 49/100
Child Care 34/100
Observation 15/100

Lore: History of Wind Reach; History of Wind Eagles; History of the Inarta; History of Kalea; The Valterrian; History of Mizahar
Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Fluent
Description of NPC: Piko is a serious, no-nonsense woman. History is her passion, although she's also skilled at mathematics and writing. Although not quite favored by the Yasi, many look up to her.


 
Nimala
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Name: Nimala
Race: Inarta
Caste: Chiet
Date of Birth: Winter 19th, 474AV (37)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi Instructor - Basic Class, Advanced Class 1: Religion, Language
Skills:
Teaching 78/100
Observation 49/100
Meditation 56/100
Organization 21/100

Gnosis: Lykata - 1, Invalti - 1
Lore: Religion: Eyris, Caiyha, Eywaat, Priskil, Syna, Leth, Dira, Kihala, Rhaus, Nysel, Zulrav, Yahal, Bala, Ivak, Oriana, Tyveth, Tanroa, Qalaya, Avalis, Ionu and Rak'keli
Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Fluent
Vani; Basic
Tawna; Basic
Arumenic; Fluent
Jamouran Grunts; Basic
Pavi; Basic

Description of NPC: Nimala is a very religious woman, and she has always been, even from a young age. She sought to learn about different Gods and Goddesses, and traveled across Mizahar to achieve this. In her travels, she had earned two Gnosis marks: Invalti and Lykata. She's patient and strict, and is quick to punish any smart-mouthed Yasi.


 
Kinara
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Name: Kinara
Race: Inarta
Caste: Chiet
Date of Birth: Spring 56th, 485AV (27)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi Tutor - Basic Class
Skills:
Teaching 47
Mathematics 43
Observation 31
Organization 27

Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Basic
Description of NPC: Kinara is loud, bold and friendly. Occasionally, students even request help from her because of her incredibly laid back attitude. She doesn't let the Yasi slack off, however. When Yasi start misbehaving or not completing their work, they face the wrath of an angry Kinara. She is twins with Tinial.


 
Tinial
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Name: Tinial
Race: Inarta
Caste: Chiet
Date of Birth: Spring 56th, 485AV (27)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi Tutor - Basic Class
Skills:
Teaching 41
Writing 52
Observation 28
Organization 20

Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Fluent
Description of NPC: A twin to Tinial, he holds his sister in high regard. It was on purpose that they both decided to go into tutoring the Yasi, and he is quick to come to the aid of his sister. More quiet and reserved than Kinara, he's still bold and loud by outsiders' standards. He allows Yasi to walk all over him a bit easier, and his generous attitude contributes to that.


 
Tirvan
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Name: Tirvan
Race: Inarta
Caste: Chiet
Date of Birth: Spring 64th, 458AV (54)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi Supervisor - The Glass Reverie
Skills:
Glassblowing 74/100
Teaching 54/100
Juggling 17/100

Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Basic

Description of NPC: A kind man, Tirvan worked as an Avora glassblower before deciding to supervise Yasi in their trials of learning skills. He can be strict, but only for the safety of the Yasi he supervises.
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School - Locations

Postby Nij on July 13th, 2012, 5:42 am

Kindergarten

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The Kindergarten is the main haven for all Yasi from ages 4 to 6. The room is a nicely sized cave, with desks and tables scattered almost haphazardly. There are many colourful toys and rugs for the children to play with, and stacked in a corner are many bedrolls for naptime after lunch. The walls are covered in painted pictures of birds, clouds, trees, and anything you can think of, while there are multi-coloured glass windows depicting a scene of small children playing covering one wall. It is run by Nikki, an incredibly patient and kind school teacher, and Kanipa, her assistant and twin.

Specific Location: Wind Reach
Accessibility: Anyone, mainly Yasi
Relevance to WR: Kindergarten

 
Nikki
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Name: Nikki
Race: Inarta
Caste: Chiet
Date of Birth: Spring 75th, 486AV (26)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi Instructor - Kindergarten
Skills:
Teaching 57/100
Storytelling 43/100
Organization 39/100
Child Care 85/100
Writing 29/100

Lore: Inartan Fairy Tales
Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Fluent

Description of NPC: Nikki may be one of the nicest people you have ever met. She's incredibly patient and kind with the little ones, and her gentle face and kind smile comfort even the wildest Yasi. She's organized and smart, and she takes her job very seriously.
 
Kanipa
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Name: Kanipa
Race: Inarta
Caste: Chiet
Date of Birth: Spring 75th, 486AV (26)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi Tutor - Kindergarten
Skills:
Teaching 49/100
Storytelling 28/100
Organization 56/100
Child Care 54/100
Writing 34/100

Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Fluent

Description of NPC: Nikki's twin, she assists her sister in taking care of the youngest Yasi. She helps with individual Yasi who are struggling or need help with anything. Almost as gentle and kind as her sister, it's said that she and Nikki are twins in both looks and heart. She keeps mostly everything organized, and is ready to offer a smile to anyone.


 
Little Timmay
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Name: Little Timmay
Race: Inarta
Caste: Yasi
Date of Birth: Summer 43rd, 507AV (5)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi
Skills:
Escape Artist 32/100
Begging 27/100
Stealth 39/100
Negotiation 25/100
Intimidation 5/100
Persuasion 41/100
Climbing 26/100

Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Poor

Description of NPC: Little Timmay is a brat. He's the bane of Nikki and Kanipa's existence, and perhaps the only one who can get past their seemingly endless patience. Born to a Dek and an unknown father, he's clever in a way no one can understand, despite being so young. Sitting behind his innocent smile is a menace with skills that he learned on his own doing, and nothing can contain him for long. The other children see him as a sort of hero, even if it's only stealing some extra bread from the kitchens. He has a grudging affection for Sura, although he finds it annoying when she follows him about.


 
Sura
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Name: Sura
Race: Inarta
Caste: Yasi
Date of Birth: Spring 90th, 508AV (4)
Place of Birth: Wind Reach
Title: Yasi
Skills:
Impersonation 15/100
Dance 34/100
Acrobatics 29/100
Juggling 7/100

Language: Nari; Fluent
Common; Poor

Description of NPC: An amusing little girl, Sura is an entertainer by heart. She's bold and funny, and her father likes to say that she was born dancing. Born to a pair of Avora, she seems to be well brought up, although she doesn't get along very well with the other children. She likes to pretend that she's married to Little Timmay, and will follow him around, trying to get him to play with her.
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