[Note by Siren] Alocer

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Alocer

Postby Alocer on July 27th, 2012, 2:49 am

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"And a sudden plunge in the sullen swell ten fathoms deep on the road to hell"


Name: Alocer
Age: 28
Race: Zith|Human
Gender: Male
Birthday: 4th of Winder, 485



Physical Description:

Alocer stands at six foot six head and shoulders with a muscular psychic his right shoulder and his right leg are covered in burn marks and his face to match is covered in scars. His skin is dark tint almost grayish of the undead and his body hair yet similar in areas where a male humans hair would be is that of the Zith and is pure black. His hair is shaved similar to a military cut and it is jet black. Weighing in at two hundred and thirty pounds and his foot size is fourteen. His fingers are lined with odd looking fingernails which act as claws and when the weather is extremely cold his body covers with black fur acting as a winter coat of sort which requires him to shave off.



Personality:

Alocer is Cold calculating and manipulative with no sense of right and wrong whose greed drives his terrifying actions. An experienced fighter adept in unarmed combat and the use of most weapons as well as the methods that make them effect. A hardened rough individual who albeit suffers from psychological traumas sustained throughout his life. Resilient in situations that are extremely stressful and where life and death are present factors, he possess a decisive, rough, serious no-nonsense attitude. With his dark and melancholic perception of the world around him he retains a twisted sense of morality and has a morbid sense of humor. With his capability of being in positions of authority and creating plans of actions his resolve and character are steeled from his lows and hardships. With no ties to any family and only friends of those who do not wish to cross him he holds no allegiances and is quick to turn on those who is with if beneficial. He has a grim view on the future and believes ones the chips are down everyone will tear into each other to survive. Secretive in his ways and able to keep a facade as a friendly sword for hire or other position he finds subtitle makes him a dangerous enemy and a fragile ally.



Likes:
Alocer enjoys very little and life and enjoys dulling his senses with drugs and women but most of all enjoys getting his way and winning.

Dislikes:
Hero types and those who wish to change the world and those who have nothing to say but still want to speak.



History:


Carried in the womb of a Zith along with two brothers and one sister he was brought into a world of darkness inside a deep cavern. His mother raised the four on human meat and animal meat their father included who only a slave was kept for labor. However during a power struggle on their fourth year of life there mother was killed by another male Zith and his two brothers were devoured and he was set forth to become a slave like his father. Enduring harsh treatment and resentment for being a half blood he was tortured. However on this twelfth birthday the young Alocer was released from his enslavement by a Nuit. Unknown to young boy of the dangers of a Nuit he followed the undead teacher who taught him the ways of the wild and also most of his skills and taught him of the world and how vile and wretched things truly were. By the age of nineteen Alocer left his mentor and sought after his sister in the old caverns had once called home but was unsuccessful and sustained a massive injury leaving his face scarred. After his failure he traveled the lands taking on odd jobs indulging himself in armed conflicts and anything which sustains his income and his violent nature.


Skills:

Intimidation: 6/100 ( 6 SP )
Tracking: 8/100 ( 8 SP)
Intelligence: 6/100 ( 7 SP )
Unarmed Combat: 7/100 ( 7 SP)
Weapon Pollaxe: 23/100 ( 23 SP)
Wilderness Survival: 10/100 (10 RB)


Equipment:

1 Set of Clothing | Jet black cloak, Cotton Pants with leather knee pads, Leather boots, simple cotton shirt.
1 Waterskin
1 Sharped Custom Pollaxe a gift from a Nuit
1 Backpack which contains:
1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week salted meats and jerky
1 eating knife
Flint & Steel


Ledger:
Purchase Cost Running Total
Starting Package +100 GM 100 GM


Housing:

A small home near Tall Johnny's Casino & Cage Fights area it is a single bedroom with a comfortable bed and a chest and a table covered in empty liquor bottles. The stone walls are cracked and the wooden door is bolted and require a bit of a kick to get open once unlocked. The interior is mostly stone and gray and seems to make one depressed.

Fluent Languages:
Fluent:Zithanese
Basic:Common


Lores:
Lore: |Drinking games| The knowledge of drinking games and the skills to win.
Lore: |pollaxe maintenace| The knowledge keeping a pollaxe sharped and ready for use.
Last edited by Alocer on July 31st, 2012, 1:44 am, edited 6 times in total.
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Alocer

Postby Siren on September 21st, 2012, 8:43 am

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Hey there!

I'm Siren, the local and completely harmless Character Sheet Liaison. In order to help you get the most out of your experience on Mizahar, I have taken a look at at your Character Sheet to make sure that everything is up to par!

Unfortunately, there are a few changes that have to be made before we can move forward! Please see the tabs below for details on these issues. Once the issues have been addressed, feel free to send me a private message, let me know you've fixed what I've pointed out and I will gladly remove the intervention!

 
Experience
In your Concept/History, it says that Alocer is an experienced fighter. We ask that you stay away from terms like this, because technically he is only a novice fighter.

 
Housing
Since you have registered in Wind Reach, your choice of housing doesn't make sense, as there is no such place within the city.


Write on!
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