Will Treaty

[Will Treaty]

Name:Will Talton
Race:Human
Age:15
Gender:Male
Height:5'5 ft
Weight:95 lbs
Eye Color:Blue
Hair Color:Brown
Skin Color:Cream
Home Region:Mizahar
Personality:Aggresive.Cunning enough to understand he is being used
Merits:Very smart,Hardworking
Flaws:Arrogant.
Equipment:Blue Shirt,Blue Pants.Blue boots.Waterskin,1 Set Of Toiletries.Food for a week.1 eating knife.Flint&steel
Family Heirloom:A small ring with some inscriptions on it.
Money:600 gold Mizas
Lore:Reimancy Lore,Shielding Lore
Language:Fluent Common,Basic Shiber,Poor Kontinese
Initial Skills
Reimancy:30
Shielding:30
summoning:5


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[Torchlight]

Hi again! Torchlight some more. I see you've created a second character sheet. Since we only get one CS per account, would you mind deleting your other thread so there is no confusion? If you need help doing that, send me a PM.

Your new CS still has a couple of issues. You still clearly have a lot of reading to do, as this all looks very rushed. If you sit down and read some of the lore and create a well-thought-out character sheet for Will Treaty, it would be much more rewarding for you.

Click through these tabs for explanations of what you need to change.

 

Birthdate

Your PC should have a birthdate. Read this article about the Mizaharian Calendar, which I linked you before. We use Seasons instead of months, and the current year is 512. Your birthdate could be formatted like this.

Season of Spring, Day 91, 497 AV, or
Season of Winter, Day 63, 496 AV

Please pick a season, date, and year your PC was born.

 

Home Region

Listing your home region is optional, but what you've listed makes no sense. Mizahar is the name of the world you live in. It'd be like if you listed "Earth" as your home in real life.

 

Money

Please list in your ledger (where you have your money amount listed) that you cashed in your housing for 500gm.

 

Lores

You have the names of skills listed as your lores. They need to be more specific, like Lore of Syliras Layout, or Lore of World: Anashis. Read more about your skills to see if there's a specific type of lore you want related to the magic you know.

Here is an article about Lore to help you understand it.

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Skills

You must list which skills came from your starting package (SP) and which came from your racial bonus (RB). Here's an example of how your skills should look.

Reimancy: 30 (30 SP) (Fire, Water)
Shielding: 30 (15 SP, 15 RB)
Summoning: 5 (5 SP)

 

Reimancy

Reimancy is elemental magic. As you get better with the skill, you learn how to control new elements. At 30 skill points, you would have control over 2 elements. Please list which elements you know.

Read the Reimancy article for more information.

 

Thread List

Don't forget to include a thread list, where you will link all RP threads your character has been in. You already have one thread, and that should be in here.

 

Race

Your account race is set to Human, Benshira. It should read as "Human". Please change your account race.

Once you've fixed these items, send me a PM and I will remove this note. Please read ALL of the articles that pertain to your character. Thank you.

Torchlight