Completed [World's End Grotto] When Turtles Rest (Gale)

Ricky and Odis rent out their room for their next step, but fate has a sense of humor today.

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[World's End Grotto] When Turtles Rest (Gale)

Postby Paragon on December 13th, 2012, 1:43 pm

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Ricky

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A Friendly Offer
Teasing Out Worries
A Fisherman Without Fish
Eating Zeltivan Fish
Taking Off Without Looking Back


Gale McCenry

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Bearing the Burden of Other's Losses
Ricky: A Fisherman Without Fish
Ricky's Travels
Eating Zeltivan Fish
Clinging to Home
The Artist's Burden


Legend Becomes Reality

Great thread, and very fun interactions! Gale, I'd just be careful with your tenses, you often slip between past and present. You need to stay in past tense. If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, please send me a PM and we can work from there.
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