Hoa Lane

[Hoa]

Hoa Lane With fair, clear skin, light blue eyes, and depending on the light, strawberry blonde/fiery red hair, Hoa is the Inartan female of 17 years, born in the year 495AV. Fall, of the 18th day. Rosie pink lips and long hair, standing at 5'7 and weighing 153lbs. She's more of the outspoken, blunt, stubborn female. She doesn't believe in "true love", mainly because she's never seen it before. She's very stern, and doesn't give much of anything a chance. Open minded-ness isn't much to expect from her. Oftentimes Hoa has been described as a bitch. Despite the side that she only lets other people see, when she's by herself she is not half as ferocious. On her own, Hoa is very happy, less stern but not completely carefree, and more connected to the world. The reason she lets nobody see her as she really is, is because of her lack of trust. Trusting issues led the female to give herself a shell, which hides good humor and a likeable personality. She usually just comes of as reserved, if you haven't spoken to her before. Hoa often loves to dream, sleeping being her getaway from the lack of friends and her isolated lifestyle. Archery and Lane(her bird) are the only connection to anything other than herself. When asleep she dreams of perfecting her shooting, dancing, actually speaking true words to her bird and Lane speaking back. It's silly, really. Hoa can't stand super cheery music(like our Christmas Music). Unlike the way she acts, she actually hates prejudice people and isn't one herself. Hoa was born to a mother along with two brothers. Weighing the least out of the three, she was a small baby. She was raised very well, being taught the usual Archery, and Falconry. She very little thought of anything else as she grew up. Eventually she earned herself her red-tailed falcon Lane, who she adores completely. Later on in her years, she is apprenticed to a 37 year old Inarta male, Yule. Yule is her mentor of archery. Lane is female and, appears to look like this. Yule, Hoa's mentor. Archery, 30/100sp(10 is racial bonus.)(shortbow) Falconry, 20/100sp Hunting, 10/100sp Lore of Bow Stance Lore of Holding Bird(s) 1 Set of Clothing (black linen blouse[long sleeved, not exactly baggy but airy, silk black airy/baggy pants. Leather shoes.) 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: 1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap) Food for a week 1 eating knife Flint & Steel Lane(redtailed falcon, family heirloom) Shortbow(-30gm) Shortbow arrows(20)(-1gm) Darniva Commonrooms(where she resides in Wind Reach) 100gm Shortbow(-30gm) 70gm ShortbowArrows(20)(-1gm) 69gm Fluent, Nari Basic, Common Poor, None Threads, That Cuddly Side..., Ishgrameer, Interesting so far. [Winter 4th] Training Stiff, Solo, In the process.[Winter 1st]

[Torchlight]

Hello there! I'm Torchlight, your friendly local Character Sheet Liaison. I'm here to help you get your CS sorted out and ready to go for roleplaying! There are just a couple of things I'd like to help you with. Don't worry! We'll get your character operational asap.

• Birthdate - You've listed Hoa's birth year, but not the day she was born! Remember to pick her Season and Day of birth as well.
• Thread List - Please provide links to the threads mentioned in your thread list!

Also, with that background, your CS is a little difficult to read. Consider upping the opacity in your FrameTrans code? {frametrans=white,5} << The opacity is the number in that code. The scale goes from 1 to 9.

One more note: I believe someone else is using that actress as a model for their PC. I can't remember who, or even if that player is still active. If we do find out who has that model, we'll inform you, in which case you'll have to change it. However, I could be wrong, in which case ignore me.

That's it! Once you change those two things, I will remove this not and let you go on your merry way!

Torchlight