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Minnie meets a gentleman at an art showing

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[The Quill's Rest] The License to Revere

Postby Philomena on January 22nd, 2013, 6:09 pm

//A wink... what a strange, strange boy.//

Strange, after all means so many things - it brooks distrust and fear, at times, or pity, or fascination, or admiration. Or a strange mixture of them all. From Minnie's face, it would be difficult to say which she lived. From her mind it would be just as difficult - her mind was simply unsettled. A little thread had been nicked out from weave of her mind, and it snagged, as it were, when she walked.

"Good bye, then, sir." she murmured, with a mixture between a sigh and a frown.

She took up her tea and sipped off the rest. She did not leave right away - hers was the sort of nature that dreads the awkward, and there is a delicate awkwardness in remeeting in the street someone that one has just fare-thee-welled in the salon. She sipped her tea, and pulled out her wax tablet, opening it, and began to write notes.
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[The Quill's Rest] The License to Revere

Postby Jester on February 5th, 2013, 7:30 pm

Thread Graded!!

Philomena :
XP Awarded
  • +1 Observation
  • +2 Teaching
  • +2 Rhetoric

Lores Awarded
  • The Quills Rest is Faddish
  • Lock Wants to Play a Game
  • Lock is an Antidotist?
  • Lock's Motives Are Shrouded
  • Lock is Harmless
  • Acquaintance: Lock Circuta


Lock :
XP Awarded
  • +1 Observation
  • +1 Hypnotism
  • +3 Persuasion
  • +2 Intelligence

Lores Awarded
  • Connections Bring Power
  • People With a Drink are More Approachable
  • Philomena is a Few Boards Short of a Boat
  • Philomena Doesn't Trust Easily
  • Philomena Sympathizes with Loneliness
  • Acquaintance: Dr Philomena Lefting


Notes :
  • Very interesting! I enjoyed the fight that Philomena put up to the hypnotism, even without knowing she was being hypnotized. I felt it was a pretty accurate portrayal of the skill, and its drawbacks. Gave you guys mostly lores relating to each other, since this seemed to be a "get to know you" thread as a setup for future writing, and tried to throw in a few skills that would be useful to both of you


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